...ENGL112 Peer Review Sheet Your name: _______Tina M Shaw_________________________________________________ Paper author’s name: __Michael Poynter Jr.____________________________________________ Assignment: _________Week 3 _______________________________________________ In order to review the beginning, middle, and end of your classmate’s paper: 1. Read these questions first. 2. Read each part of your classmate’s essay (beginning, middle, and end). 3. Answer the questions and include quotations from your classmate’s paper to explain your answers. Beginning A. Does the essay’s title make you want to read more? Yes Why or why not? Very short and making me wonder what the article is about. B. Do the first one or two sentences of the paper grab your interest? No Why or why not? Doesn’t make me wonder why or who this DC hero because to me there wasn’t enough info about him to draw any questions to make me read more. Tell how the writer could get your attention with the first sentences. Take out the word I and make it a question or more of a broad statement.Look at the essay’s introduction. Is there a thesis statement or “statement of purpose” drafted? Yes (Look for a sentence that tells the reader what to expect from this essay.) What is the statement? “There were some discrepancies between the show and the comic, some good, some bad.” C. Based on the introduction, what specific points do you think the writer will make about the essay’s subject? Pointing out the differences...
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...Eagle Point Resort Review Bill Sigler DeVry University ENG – 112 Eagle Point Resort Review The Philippines is known for its diverse vacation spots for all seasons. Beach resorts and natural wonders of unique landscapes made the country a popular tourist attraction in Asia. One particular vacation spot called Eagle Point Resort is not as famous as the others are, but can also offer a lot of great things as well. Located in Anilao Batangas, the resort was strategically situated besides a beach rich with coral reefs and marine life. This seaside haven can offer a variety of services that can easily satisfy and meet the expectations of tourists or local visitors alike. It is the perfect get away location to unwind from the stressful environment of a city life and that is what you would expect from a beach resort. The Eagle Point Resort is a good place to spend your vacation because of its good hotel services, fun underwater activities, and the attraction of a diverse marine ecosystem. Hotel service is a very important thing to consider when you stay at a resort. After all, who would want to reside in a place where people treat you rudely and are lazy with their job? On my first day at Eagle Point, the one thing that immediately caught my attention was how friendly the hotel employees are. Some people might find it weird or feel awkward when others act a little too friendly with them, but it did not bother me one bit. I actually enjoyed it, and their attitude stayed consistently...
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...understanding of the rights of people receiving care (Dunbar, 2009). The rights that are included in Charter are as follows: • Access: I have right to health care. • Safety: I have right to receive safe and high- quality care • Respect: I have right to be shown respect, dignity, and consideration. • Communication: I have right to be informed about the services, treatment, options and costs in clear and open way • Participation: I have right to be included in the decisions and choices about the care. • Privacy: I have the right to privacy and confidentiality of my personal information. • Comment: I have right to comment on my care and to have my concerns addressed (Australian Charter of Healthcare Rights, 2008) The purpose of this essay is to look at the evidence- based approaches to psychosocial intervention offer better respect and participation for a patient with Coronary Heart disease and Depression than bio-medical intervention. As described in ACHR (2008), Respect means, "all the participants in the health care system are to be treated with respect and not to be discriminated against anyway. The patient or consumers have a right to receive a care in a manner that is respectful of their culture, beliefs, values and characteristics like age and gender." ACHR (2008) defines...
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...Food Served in Schools – There Needs To Be a Change 15 English 215 Research and Writing February 8, 2013 Children and adolescents have increasingly gained weight over the years, with one reason being that children are spending less time engaged in physical activities. Where children used to go outside to play and were physically active, today they can be found in front of television sets for long hours, watching TV or playing video games, neither of which require much physical interaction. Children have also become accustomed to eating fast food and vending machine junk food as opposed to healthy choices in meals. Healthcare providers, teachers and parents can play an important role in helping to reduce obesity in children. Some suggestions to help with this growing problem includes making changes to the food that is served in school cafeterias, and encouraging children to become more physically active. (Green & Reese; 2006) Nearly 1 in 3 children in America are overweight or obese. According to www.childrensdefense.org, “child obesity among school-aged children and adolescents has tripled and is affecting children at an increasingly younger age.” In the spring of 2010, the Physicians Committee for Responsible Medicine studied the nutritional value of school lunches and found that many lunchrooms were still serving foods high in calories, saturated fats, sugars and refined grains. (www.livestrong.com) In order to ensure that school children receive meals...
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...Music Piracy Will Continue To Live Kyle Olmos Vanguard University Of Southern California ENGL 220C: Researched Writing Professor Amy Hoffman March 25, 2015 The music economy is saying it is declining and it is entering into a place it has never seen before. It is webbing out the fact that it could be in one big massive pit of failure. The cause of this entire down fall is said to be fully on music piracy. Personally, and with many media sources, the music industry is just turning into one big bully, trying to find any possible way to engulf everyone’s lunch money that they deserve. Nevertheless, There is actually a few benefits within this frowned upon cyber stealing that artist, producers, and marketing teams have admitted are actually helping them succeed within the new generation of the music industry. Therefore, a lot of media will be laid out to identify why the industry is spreading the rumors on such a downfall when the industry is doing better than ever before. Many artists, that everyone will most likely know worldwide, have spoken up on why piracy is not bad but rather helpful in sales and who are also collecting a fan base faster then ever before. Furthermore, the focus will continue on the benefits of music piracy and the ways it is already working; such focus will conclude on why an independent artist and A-list artist should actually go all in on this little issue and just accept where music piracy is heading...
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...Review essay on Romeo and Juliet On 27 April 2012, I watched Romeo and Juliet, by William Shakespeare. It was directed by Ivan Heng from W!LD RICE. It brought laughter and tears to me, from the witty scenes to the tragic parts. This version was an exciting, refreshing, contemporary twist of the classic love story. The set, costumes, music, sound and casting gave this play a whole new spin to it. I felt the casting was perfect. The main characters, Romeo, played by Hansel Tan and Juliet, played by Julie Wee, really brought out the deep emotions of their characters. Their chemistry was amazing and it wasn’t hard to imagine them as star-crossed teenage lovers. Romeo’s character was strong, with Hansel pulling of his intense feelings brilliantly, such as the part in Act 3, Scene 3 that starts with “Tis torture, and not mercy” when he talks about being banished. Juliet’s transformation from a wide-eyed girl into a self-assured, loyal, and capable woman was well portrayed throughout the play. One memorable character was Nurse, played by Neo Swee Lin. Though I felt she that at some points her Singaporean accent would emerge, it somehow worked to make the character funnier and she injected much humour into the piece with her frequently inappropriate remarks and speeches. Act two, Scene three, where she meets Romeo was especially funny when she kept going for Romeo’s chest. It was hilarious! Every scene kept the audience engaged, from the beautiful, intimate scene where Romeo lies...
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...The F.A.T (Frustration, Anxiety, Tension) City Workshop was a class titled “How Difficult Can This Be?” given by Richard D. Lavoie to a diverse group of individuals. The goal of the workshop was to let the attenders experience the frustration, anxiety, and tension faced by children with learning disabilities. Mr. Lavoie was able to, through a series of scenarios, give viewers an inside look into what it is like to have a learning disability. The workshop was held in a classroom with teachers, social workers, parents and siblings of children with a learning disability, psychologists, bank executives, rehabilitation counselors, and children with learning disabilities. The scenarios used by Mr. Lavoie gave us an inside glimpse of what it is like to be a learning disabled student. He began by creating some anxiety in the room. He was speaking very quickly and moving from one person to another without much hesitation. He would call on a “student” and have them answer a question. One specific person got an answer wrong and Mr. Lavoie quickly came back with a sarcastic comment. He went on to explain that “Anytime you use sarcasm with kids, understand that you have created a victim.” (Lavoie & Rosen, 1989). We, as teachers and parents must be cognizant when using this sort of comment while speaking to our children. Mr. Lavoie also spoke about how a child with a learning disability thinks that if they cannot see us, we cannot see them. The human reaction to anxiety is to look away yet...
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...When writing my persuasive essay and after getting it peer reviewed there were many questions that I got answered. Their were a many parts about MLA format that I was unsure about or only knew half the rule. I knew there was going to be a lot of grammar errors because I have a nasty habit of reading what I want it to say and not what it really says. I do the same thing when I read a book my brain likes to change sentence around to fit my needs over the story. My peer reviewer named Kara gave me help on proper MLA format and what we could not agree on we looked up on OWL.com. I did not know this at the time but she was the perfect person to read my essay she got she master from Cal State San Bernardino, and her grandfather was shot by a farmer...
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...On Wednesday, December 2nd I attended to a very impressive concert presents by my great music professor Sergio Gonzalez and Hialeah Performing Arts Club. Dr. Sergio Gonzalez invited magnificent singers from his MUL 1010 class to make this concert unforgettable with his accompaniment in the piano. The first thing that I liked about this concert was the atmosphere because I saw how the audience enjoyed the music played by my talent professor and the amazing voices of the vocalists. Every artist was welcomed with a warm applause from every single person. Professor Sergio Gonzalez, and also a phenomenal pianist introduced every singer who accompanied him on the stage with words of admiration. This concert was about “Holiday Selections” where famous songs from different cultural background were sung by powerful vocalists. The soloist Ashley Calderon impressed me so much because she has such a potent as well as soft voice. She interpreted “Think of me’’ a hard vocal piece of Andrew Lloyd Webber. This song requires high notes and she hit them great. Ashley sang this song beautifully creating a lovely as well as dramatic sound and feel. The maestro Sergio playing the piano moved in perfect harmony with the imposing voice of Ashley. The following song was “A la Antigua” composed by the cuban pianist Ernesto Lecuona. Professor Sergio demonstrated brilliant skills with this song because he played this solo piano masterfully. I could notice that he is an excellent professional....
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...Key word: Ukulele buddy review Naslov: Ukulele Buddy Review – Are Alen's lessons really effective? Nowadays not many people open Google and search for "Ukulele Buddy reviews". However, quite a few people want to learn how to play the ukulele, but they simply don't know where to start. If you're one of those people, who're trying to find a good educational program for learning ukulele, you found the right spot, as this article will describe a thorough review of the lessons ukulele Buddy. An overview of the lessons Ukulele Buddy: Our overview will reveal if Alen's lessons are the right ones to effectively teach you to play the ukulele. Let us begin! UkuleleBuddy.com offers learning lessons for ukulele: -This kind of education is extremely suitable...
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...In life you don’t always get what or who you want. Sometimes it takes hundreds of paper airplanes to come alive to direct you in the right direction. In Paperman, a beautifully animated short film, a guy and a girl experience meant to be love due to fateful and magical events. Although no sound or color, this short film perfectly captures the beauty of love and fate. Paperman is a rated G short film directed by John Kahrs and produced by Walt Disney. It was released in 2012, and won an oscar for best short film of 2012. Although no sound, the music in the background composed by Christophe Beck perfectly sets the mood, so you have a feel of their emotions. Paperman is about a guy who tries to get a girls attention after seeing her for the first time. This short film tells a story of a guy who is hopeful, unpredictable, and somewhat romantic, and a girl who is pretty, shy, and punctual, who first meet at a train station, and pretty much experience ‘love at first sight’. Sadly, they end up on different paths until later that day. While upset over the girl, the guy was at work and happened to see the girl of his dreams once again on the opposite skyscraper. Building a bunch of paper airplanes to get her attention, he ended up failing. Until, the paper airplanes magically swept him off his feet and led him to his love. What makes this short film so great is the way it can capture a moment without words. Throughout the whole movie the characters don’t actually speak, but...
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...Spring semester final review The crucible by Arthur Miller 1-the statement wanted to change the way the bible was said they wanted to purify themselves from other church and when they came migrated they made that happen 2-the witch hunt was a general revenge in the way that if someone did something to you can just accuse them of witchcraft and without evidence it actually works 3-tituba- reverent Parris slave, accused of trying to conjure dead spirits Abigail- 17-year-old niece of Parris, affair with proctor, control the girls involve in the witch trial Betty- teenage daughter of Parris, afraid of Abigail, fakes that she is under a spell 4-putnam send her daughter Ruth with Tituba to conjure the death of her mother seven death kids...
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...jackpot city review Practical Tips To Beat the Slots When you will enter a casino, you will find the most attractive and loudest attractions are slot machines. They are designed with fun themes and the jackpot values. They have designed them with the purpose to drain out your money in small packets. You will put in the money and feel good while doing so; this is the power of slot machines. This is natural that slot machines will favor the house, but there are certain tricks by which you can enhance your chances of beating the slot machines. It is imperative for the new players to read jackpot city review to understand what other players think about the game. Research slot payouts You are going to play slot machine games, but before doing so conduct a small amount of research and find out the payouts of the website you are going to play with. There are several...
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...Damien Hirst: Genius Artist or Genius Con? It is for certain that Damien Hirst certainly knows how to grab our attention and many people find it hard to accept him as an ‘artist’ due to the facts that; He shamelessly spends his money extravagantly. For the Love of God is one of Hirst’s most scandalous pieces; where he has purchased the 18th Century skull of a 35 year old European man to which he explains was in response to his mother’s common saying of “For the love of God, what are you going to do next!”, further justification of his piece was to represent the embracement of death that was demonstrated by Mexican culture- most predominantly shown by the Aztecs. Hirst states ‘you don’t like [death], so you disguise it or you decorate it to make it look something bearable- to such an extent that it becomes something else.’, this statement certainly voices out our reactions towards his piece, we focus more towards the fact that the skull has been encrusted with diamonds more than the concept it is trying to serve. But are his intentions really just to achieve the idea of accepting death? Isn’t he just showing off his excessive use of spending? Was it really necessary for him to do such a thing? What does this say about his character? Death is viewed differently by different people. How does Damien Hirst view it or how he feels about it? Taken from an interview (http://www.damienhirst.com/texts/20071/feb--huo), Damien Hirst expresses his hate for death and views it as though...
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...On Monday, march 12 2018, at about 7:30pm I attended a musical concert at Chabot college in building 1300. The concert was tithe “Chabot wind symphony”. It was a concert that was conjoined with Chabot wind ensemble and Tennyson high school jazz ensemble, Patricia Hurtado was the director of Tennyson High School while Beverly Johnson was the director of Chabot wind ensemble. Tennyson high school jazz ensembles and the instrument they played were, CLARIENT, which was played by Charles Hingco, Timothy Huynh, Sakerie Ridecout while TRUMPET was played by Noel Almazan, Brandon Arevola, Uriel Artteaga Aguilar, Alexis Ayala Martinez, Harold Liantada, Juan Pablo Regas and ALTA SAXOPHONE was played by Briana Guillen , TENOR SAXOPHONE was played by Elmer Ajche, BARITONE SAXOPHONE was played by Brian Arestegui Olaide, TROMBONE was played by Nathan Nguyen and STRING BASS has played by D’ Angelo Jackson and finally the GUEST DRUMMER was Austin Greth a student of Chabot college. Tennyson high school jazz composers piece are TENOR MADNESS which was composed by Sonny Rollins. Arr. By Mark Taylor. LI ‘I DARLIN was composed by Neal Hefti while DOXY was composed by Sonny Rollins. Arr. By mark Taylor. Chabot wind ensemble composer were, FAIRNESS OF THE AIR by John Philip Sousa, edited by Fredrick fennel, while SERENADE FOR BAND was composed by Vincent Persichhetti and KIRKPATRICK FANFARE was composed by Andrew Boysen Jr. Chabot wind ensemble and Tennyson high school both performed together...
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