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It starts with the headaches. Sometimes it gets bad. Her brain pulses right up against her skull and no matter how many pain pills and glasses of water she swallows, it doesn't let up. The pain will ease some but never truly goes away. It's frustrating, but not alarming. Not yet.
Home, Lola thinks. She just wants to go home, so she can disappear under the covers and close her eyes. She makes plans to sleep for an hour… or ten, just until her brain is rested and not about to punch a hole through her skull. For now she's trapped in a taxi with Harvey and a driver who likes to tell bad jokes. Lola can feel her frustration build and Harvey notices. Of course he does. Harvey notices everything. "Head hurting?" Harvey asks, watching Lola rub …show more content…
Lola jerks up, only to find Harvey with one hand clutching a glass of ice water and the other pressed over his chest like he's nearly had a heart attack. "The floor was cold... It felt nice?" The statement, ending into a question, paired with an awkward laugh broke the tension and Harvey passed the glass over to her. Harvey’s eyes are still wide though. She guesses the fright of finding his girlfriend lying on the floor motionless was a bit much, but he breathes a laugh anyway. "Crazy," he teases, before placing the back of his hand over her forehead. Checking for a fever, Lola realizes, practically swooning at the gesture. "It’s not fever warm," Harvey observes, standing and extending a hand to Lola, pulling her up and promptly sweeping her off her feet, gathering her up in his arms. Despite her protests to let her down Harvey just grins and carries her up the stairs. He deposits her gently onto their shared bed like she's precious cargo before crawling onto the bed next to her. Lying on his belly, he kicks his legs up, crossing and uncrossing them like a child. It's ridiculously endearing and Lola kind of wants to kiss

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