...Four years ago, I bought a one-way ticket from Hong Kong to Detroit; I told myself I will not be returning until I am done with university. I will be strong and I will be independent. I will not be homesick, I will not miss my friends back home and I will not cry. I have said all the good byes and I have packed up everything and there was no turning back. Within the first week of school, I was proven wrong. I missed home, I missed family and friends and I missed the familiarity that I once took for granted. After my first year of college, I went home. I am an international student. My parents both grew up in a traditional Chinese household, where hard work demonstrated by success and obedient without questioning was considered the correct attitude. I will not deny the fact my parents loved my older sister and me when we were young, but their methods have really shaped who I was when I came to college. Under the British education system, I had little room for creativity, the education system discourages students to think out of the box, but rather to focus on becoming very successful within...
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...Growing up, my parents never recounted their college days. Not once did they reminisce with fond, nostalgic voices about the memories of life on campus: cheering in the student section at a game, relaxing in their dorm rooms on a Sunday afternoon, sitting eagerly in the class of their most admired teacher, nor proudly donning their university’s regalia. Once it came time for me to embark on my own college search, I questioned my parents on their secrecy. They divulged to me that they never had the true college experience. They commuted to class, never spending more than a couple hours on campus. As a result, I more clearly defined what I was seeking- an university that not only would give me the tools to grow and prosper, but also the transformative adventures of student life....
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...my life, but one in particular comes to mind: writing essays. For some people, writing is a chance to let their ideas and opinions flow on a piece of paper. Yet to others, like me, writing is difficult and I find it hard to let go and obtain a rhythm of words. As I write essays, I constantly stop to think of the best way to express my thoughts and use the right words to explain them; it doesn’t just come to me. That’s why when my English teacher, Ms. Poth, told us we’d be writing an in-class essay, I freaked. I immediately started to doubt myself and became frustrated because I told myself I wasn’t going to be able to do this. I kept thinking these thoughts until a few minutes later when I recognized how negative I was being. At that point, I decided to turn my attitude around and not give up that easily. I realized that with a positive mental attitude and some preparation for the task ahead of me, I could actually get through this essay with at least a B. After Ms. Poth had told us about our in-class essay, she explained to the class that she wouldn’t let us know the question on which we were to write about. However, she did give us some hints to what the topic would be about. She emphasized that we should review the stories of the Angle-Saxon Period and the Medieval Period. That was when the light bulb turned on in my head; I was going to review the literature of those time periods to better prepare myself for this essay. By doing this, I will know what I’m talking about and...
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...Admission Essay-Architecture My main interest stands in the arts and design fields. I find design as an art form of language which people understand better and mostly makes ones expression of their feelings and thoughts easier. Every architect’s building or design is their symbol in this world, I aspire to leave remarkable symbols as I go on with my journey. Since my childhood, I have been very interested in the makings of buildings and every thought and detail that the architects and engineers of in charge pour into an ongoing construction project. I later noticed that the curiosity was more than a question in my head, it was becoming what I wanted to know more of and pursue as a future career in college. One of the many ways I decided...
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...Besides the reason how college is expected of me from my family I do want to make a difference in other people’s lives. I have thought since I was younger of what career path I should take and what sprung out to me was the medical field. I have watched videos and have done my share of research of what I wanted to be, but it still has not helped. Going to college will help me along with all the research, of my options to make a good choice and broaden my perspective. Going to college will give me the tools to make myself better than I ever thought I could be. It will help create connections with people from many backgrounds, and those connections will help in the future. Unlike my high school experience, I want to go all out and participate with as many activities and clubs as I can. I have already signed up for an association dealing with those who want to be in the medical field and I hope to find another club having to do with my faith or anxiety. For the rest of my stay at ASU I plan to just keep as busy as I can, but also have some fun in the meantime. My goal is to figure out what I want to be within these couple of years and get an internship and volunteer at a...
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...If I were a college admission counselor the essay question I’d ask an applicant would be why he / she feels that going to college is an integral part in their plans for their future. Nearly at the age of eighteen as I write this essay, I feel as though I have not yet reached the maturity I will one day need to take on a career in politics, a career I’ve dreamt about since I was ten. I still consider myself to be a teenager, who lacks the gravity and complexities required for such a profession. I’m gradually becoming the adult I aspire to one day be, and I am convinced that college will prove to be a turning point in my life. Hopefully, college will set me on the path of a politician, regardless I am eager to be immersed in the collegial experience and find...
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...For Entrance in Fall 2013 Application Supplement Office of Admissions and Financial Aid 86 Brattle Street Cambridge, MA 02138 Please indicate under which timetable you are applying: Restrictive Early Action Please return this form to us as soon as possible, and by October 15, if possible. Final deadline is November 1. Valid for entrance in September 2013 only. Please submit this form as well as the Common Application or the Universal College Application as soon as possible. Regular Decision Please return this form to us as soon as possible, and by December 15 if at all possible. Final deadline is January 1. A completed application includes all portions of the Common Application or the Universal College Application, as well as the Harvard Application Supplement, required official testing results, a Secondary School Report, two Teacher Evaluations and a $75 application fee or fee waiver request. Full legal name Goswami Last/Family IE Arunesh First Apt./Unit W Middle Jr., etc. Prefer to be called Date of Birth 02/02/1994 (MM/DD/YYYY) Address 324-D TYPE-2 BLOCK-6 NEYVELI No. and Street CUDDALORE DISTRICT PR EV NEYVELI City State/Province India Country 607803 Zip/Postal Code Telephone Number (home) 091041422683 (cell) 091809813561 Secondary School JAWAHAR HIGHER SECONDARY SCHOOL CEEB/ACT code 000004 If you can be reached by fax or e-mail, please provide a fax number or e-mail address and name of the contact person...
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...My college education has been founded on the principle of empowerment. I am here because of those who have helped and supported me. Consequently, I am able to do the same for others. When I think of the support I have received, I think of recent scholarships such as the Milwaukee Chapter of Links, Incorporated and Wisconsin scholarships, which have sponsored the past three years of my college education. I also think of my single mother who successfully raised my eight siblings and me while unemployed and with little financial support. Lastly, I think of the numerous individuals who have spoken over, prayed for and believed in my success. Simply, I would not be here without them. With the aforementioned thought in mind, I am exceedingly grateful...
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...Carine Green College Essay For years, I sulked and cried at the absence of my father. Whenever I saw him or thought of him I could only feel abandonment in the place of his paternal position. I yearned to be closer. I yearned to know him; I prayed. I waited. I cried. Finally, my prayer was answered. I was given the opportunity to live with dad. I thought that my life would would change for the better until I realized that he was not my savior, the savior that I prayed for, longed for and hoped for. This realization came not long after living with him. My father judged me. He questioned my masculinity and he imposed upon my personality, my lifestyle. He made fun of me for his own entertainment. He hurt me, both physically and mentally. The constant teasing...
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...High school, it sucks. In my family, it has always just been a given rule that the children will do good in school and go onto college. My parents always wanted my brother and I to go to college, since they never had the chance to. My dad would always say, “I want better for you guys than I had for myself”. One way to accomplish that, was to get good grades in high school and move onto college. So it was not a big shock to my family when I said I wanted to graduate my Junior year of high school, a whole year earlier than my graduating class. I was set on going to college, I needed a reason to get out of my hometown of Council Bluffs and a way to do that, was by going to college. Now my brother was already an expert at the whole college thing....
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...Personal statement examples Find College Courses and Degrees There are no ‘right’ ways to writing your personal statement, but there are many ‘wrong’ ways of doing it. On this page you will not only find everything you need to know about putting together a professional personal statement, but will also have access to dozens of expertly written ones. These samples are a great way to see how other people put together their personal statements, and to visualise the sort of structure and language they use. Reading through these will allow you to judge which ones you think are good or bad, which in turn will greatly help you in putting together your own winning statement. YOU ARE STRONGLY ADVISED NOT TO COPY THESE EXAMPLES WORD FOR WORD, BUT INSTEAD USE THEM AS USE THEM AS GUIDES AND AS A SOURCE OF INSPIRATION. Many students struggle to put together an effective personal statement, primarily because they find it difficult to write about themselves. They may also fall for other common essay writing mistakes such as straying from the core subject and message they should be trying to get across. To help students overcome these potential pitfalls we have developed this resource page as a guide to giving them useful tips, strategies and techniques on writing a professional profile that is of the highest quality and one that will maximise their chances of enrolling at their first choice university. By following our advice, preparing properly and with a bit of practise, putting...
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...English 1001- Rhetorical Analysis Essay: You Deserved Rejection! Or At Least Your Essay Did… In the article, “To (All) the Colleges That Rejected Me”, Suzy Lee Weiss addresses a multitude of reasons why she believed herself along with others were not accepted into various colleges. Published on March 29, 2013, it is one of many articles Weiss has contributed to The Wall Street Journal. The Wall Street Journal viewed at wsj.com is a business focused, English language international newspaper based in New York City where her article is placed under the commentary. It is clear from the essay that being rejected from her dream school was her kairos event that prompted and gave her the motivation for this writing that is important to her. Weiss--a senior at Taylor Allderdice High School in Pittsburgh—has written this among many other articles posted in the NY Daily News and others. Presenting her thesis early in her article, Weiss creates a foundation for the six arguments she establishes in defense for her claim that colleges lied to her; however, due to her lack of specific examples, statistics, and false claims, she fails to support her argument sufficiently. In her article, Weiss strengthens her ethos and logos drawing in on her very own feelings and thoughts for the varied audience of wsj.com. With her supporting evidence, she entreats the viewers to realize the devastation caused by Ivy League colleges telling applicants to “Just be yourself”. She goes on to claim this...
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...To start off with, I would love to be able to use the unmarked vehicles, as I'm certain that patrolling in one of these gives a huge advantage in catching the road law breakers - there's the element of surprise, they don't expect a random car to be a cop car. I've been patrolling with my good friend Kelly Macares and she taught me some good places to camp where very oftenly people don't yield at intersections - camping it with a cruiser makes them stop beforehand and it loses the point, they would just break the same law on the next intersection. Additionally, I would regularly perform a MARY patrol as I've been really keen to motorcycles for a long time and know how to drive them, also considering that you do not see a lot of them in the city. Next off, I would also love to use the Tow Truck, as I see a lot of cars that are parked up in a way that they are just clogging the traffic and there's rarely an available TOM to call for a pickup. I, as a Traffic Officer, would contribute most, if not all of my duty-time on this Division, performing all kinds of traffic-related duties and most importantly be a helping hand to the bigger operations, such as DUI checkpoints. I've noticed that there are not a lot of Traffic Officers on-duty at times when they're needed the most and my good friend, mentioned above, Police Officer III Kelly Macares recommended me to join this division. I consider myself working efficiently as a part of the Police Department team at all times when I'm on-duty...
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...The Wellesley Effect. I heard this phrase a few days ago and it inspired me to rewrite this essay. I watched the video for the campaign and it brought shivers down my spine as I realized everything the Wellesley women were saying is something I would like to get out of college. Wellesley “is the place” where I will be able to become a woman of science and art and sport. Wellesley’s liberal arts education will give me the opportunity to become a well-rounded individual. I will be able to explore my passion for science through the innovative and accessible state-of-the-art equipment, which will allow me to better examine the intricate anatomy of the body, and the complex networks and structures of the brain that fascinate me. After learning about biology, my enthusiasm towards science grew, which drove me to...
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...“Hello, welcome to Payless!” I would say with a big smile as another new face walked through the glass doors. The summer before my senior year I spent much of my time working for Payless ShoeSource as a Sales Associate. My coworkers and I would follow the same routine every day; greet the customer, discuss our promotions, offer assistance of any kind, and hopefully make that huge sale. I learned a lot from working retail and believe it has prepared me for my future goal of working in marketing. Sophomore year, my friends and I were coming to that dreadful age of 16. Some had big parties while others were given cars, however, when I turned 16 I got my first job. It took quite a bit of looking since the town I live in is small and my choices were limited to one of the many fast foods or Mexican restaurants. I earned my first job as a carhop at Sonic Drive-In, where I learned many useful skills in communication with coworkers and customers. I have always been an active worker whether at church, in my job, or in school. At a young age, I was taught to work hard. My mother would always bring us to our church or other types of organizations for community service work. I always enjoyed the social part of working especially when I was able to play with young children. Talking to customers and getting to know them was one of the best parts of working. Every year it seemed I would dream up a new future profession. When I was a child I dreamed of being a Vet; I remember going to the library...
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