Final Assignment

Debt in America is extremely common; many people are losing everything they have because of financial trouble. In reading paragraphs three and five, paragraph five was most effective in portraying the writer’s message. The writer gave explanations and examples that created sentence variety and rhythm. By doing this the writer has a flowing piece of writing that makes the reader want to read more. In paragraph five the writer explains in detail about how hard it is to avoid and manage debt. The writer gives superior examples about paying bills, going to the grocery store, and unexpected bills like car tags. He or she also included, that people are told to use cash instead of credit cards to stay out of debt. Is it possible that the use of credit cards can enable people to get ahead with their monthly bills and unexpected visits to the doctor? There can be many stressors that may come up in one’s daily life that cannot be predicted or controlled. What are the results of paying the additional monthly and unexpected bills, if people are expected not to use credit cards and there is no more money left in the budget? Being able to avoiding and managing debt is extremely difficult, particularly when people do not know how to manage the unexpected bills that may come up throughout the month.
Submitting my paper to WritePoint was extremely beneficial to my writing experience. After submitting my paper four times I finally came up with a piece that I felt was suitable. WritePoint provides feedback on basic grammar and usage by inserting comments into the text of a paper at the point of the error. The blue text comments are inserted using brackets so that they are easily separated from the original writing. The WritePoint automated checking system gave me suggestions such as using and apostrophe when writing ones to show possession, instead of using "get," which can mean many things, more formal is to use forms of "receive," "obtain," "arrive at," "can," "could," "grow," "able to," etc., not to use I unless you are speaking about a personal experience. I felt the suggestions were helpful. I do not really know if any of the suggestions were incorrect they all actually made sense to me.
In order to accommodate submission and feedback time from the WritePoint automated system I need to have a strategy. Writing my paper a day or two ahead of time is the first step I should take. It is true that I can submit my paper the same day if it is early enough, however that may not allow ample time for me to make my corrections. The system only takes about 15 minutes to return the results. I never really know what might come up and by submitting early it allows me to get my results back without any issues. The system is available 24 hours 7days a week so there really is not excuse that the timing issue does not work for my schedule. When making the necessary corrections I utilize a thesaurus and a dictionary. This will also help to expand my vocabulary as well as allow me to create variety and rhythm in my sentence structure.