Writing Sample Revisions
Example 2 – I was thrown from my truck as it left the road. I was later found in a ditch by a flock of wild turkeys.
Driving down a dirt road in my pick-up truck, I lost control of the truck when I swerved into deep pot hole in the road.. I was knocked unconscious after slamming on my brakes because I was not wearing my seatbelt.. Upon awakening I realized that I was in the hospital and I could hear the doctor talk about the accident .I found out later that another motorist saw my truck abandoned called the police who prompted a search for me and that is how they found me in a flock of wild turkeys!
Example 6 – Critical thinking is a way of thinking that is learned but, should also be something that comes to mind as a unconscious reaction after a bit of time. When in college it is taught students. The reason for this is because helps to build life skills. If a person cannot think critically then they will probably have personally and professionally problems. Critical thinking is a method of thinking and process that measures thinking in a more in depth thinking method. It develops and matures over time and eventually becoming second nature. Critical thinking skills are vital skill that college students should posses; it is taught in classes in college to sharpen student’s critical thinking skills. This skill will carry on throughout the student’s life and through their college years. I an individual does not have critical thinking skills it could cause problems in their lives professionally and in their personal lives.
REFERENCES
University of Phoenix. (n.d.). Writing Samples. Retrieved from University of Phoenix, CRT205
