The first project is analyzing a specific cultural artifacts name Ushanka, a Russian Winter has rose to prominence around the world. Doubted as one of the most effective winter hat in counteracting the brutally cold weather. I begin my essay with an extraordinary attention getter that engaging audience to activate their world of imagination. Although this fresh start provides a clear inquiry question that easily, allow readers to understand the focus of this project. However, I might have inadvertently influence my audience with promising initial claims in my thesis statement. To which, the claims did not really ties back to my inquiry question and fail to establish connection with my conclusion. Therefore, I received mix review of criticism, …show more content…
The evil intentions of humankind begin with the inventory of an idea conveying the disturbing concept of “Greed is good”. We have become so obsessed and indulged with this grand design that we cannot withdraw ourselves from the temptation of thirsting for more acquisition of goods. My vivid language and explanation on consumer anthropology and psychology had won the hearts of many readers. I received generally positive reviews complimenting on my effort to produce fresh idea and fostering high order thinking skills for my readers to engage in the conversation as I went on to explain my call-to-action. I argued that as we step into this new century consumer are looking for something else other that purchasing goods and services in large quantities. This shift in preference has causes many businesses to be incompetence to fight against their rivals that have switch to practicing production of goods in ethical and responsible ways. Overall, I must say that I have a great feeling about this third project that I am working on even when my critique data is insufficient to draw a conclusion on my