...POG 100 First Draft Marking Template Research Paper First Draft | Marker’s Alias: Leonhart | | Author’s Alias: Spearow | I. STRUCTURE/ORGANIZATION | Comments | Introduction: HookDoes the essay begin with a hook/brief introduction that situates the topic more broadly? The hook should make it evident why the topic is interesting and important to generalist and specialist audiences.Does it draw the reader’s interest? How could it be improved? | Positive * Hook introduces the topic in a great way, by analyzing a healthy government, and introducing the topic of how, to succeed it needs the help of the people who vote them in. Improvements * The author could give an example of a regime that turned on its people, (Syria) and thus lead to the overthrowing of the government (Arab spring) to further relate to the reader and gain its interest. | Introduction: Thesis StatementIs the thesis statement easy to identify? E.g. “This essay argues…” Is it clear? Does it make sense? How could it be made clearer and more easily identifiable? | Positive * The thesis is clear and makes sense “this essay will argue that societal politics are derived from the motivations of the middle class as it pertains to the state flourishing” Improvements * The factors that relate to this topic could be further addressed in a few words. What are these economic needs? Etc.… | Introduction: RoadmapDoes the roadmap state how the paper will prove the thesis statement in several parts? E.g....
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...First & Last Name First & Last Name English 101/Section # Date Essay #2 The Committer vs. the Non-Committer There are many types of men in the world, and each type displays a variety of distinguishable characteristics. Women should become aware of these characteristics before considering a prospective mate. The smallest of personal details, from where and how they met (including the first date), the way he walks and talks, the clothes he wears, the career choice he's made, the vacation spots he frequents, or the automobile he drives can offer valuable, meaningful, insightful clues to whether or not a man will ever settle down with anyone. There are two main types of men in the world: the committer and the non-committer. The committer is serious about finding the right woman. He asks friends and relatives for introductions. He is usually open to blind dates and avoids the bar scene when looking for a quality woman. On the first date, he is polite and will not bring up the subject of money at the restaurant. He takes her to places where they can talk one-on-one. The non-committer is just looking for a woman. There is no room in his life for the woman. He, on the other hand, loves the bar scene. He usually finds a million excuses why he can't find the right woman and uses such excuses to explain why he is still unattached. On a date, he orders trendy food such as sushi to impress his date, and he monopolizes the conversation. He may even take her to places where...
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...COM 101 Essay 2 – Are We Desensitized? LENGTH: 2 -3 Pages (aim for the very bottom of the 2nd page at least) DUE DATE: Rough Draft: Thursday, 10/1 on BB Final Draft: Tuesday, 10/13 on BB ASSIGNMENT: With our current section of articles, we’ve been discussing the concept of whether or not the younger generation (a.k.a. you guys) has been desensitized to things going on in the world. We’ve talked about this potential problem through a few different perspectives. We examined the argument about whether or not we’re desensitized to violence or death due to violent media, like video games. Then, we discussed whether or not we’re desensitized to suffering due to a feeling of helplessness, such as the belief that we can’t change things like economics or the government. Finally, we talked about technology and whether or not it has, in a sense, desensitized us to one another in the way that we interact thanks to new technologies like social media and cell phones. So, for your second essay, you’re going to answer the question of whether or not you believe the current generation is desensitized. However, in order to keep the paper focused and short (since it’s only 2-3 pages), choose just one of the perspectives to argue with or against. The perspective you choose will also determine which articles you use in your essay (you must use AT LEAST ONE). It breaks down much like this: Violence/Death – Narvaez, Jones, Eler Helplessness/Ineffectiveness – Leonhardt, McClelland...
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...Saravanan Panneervel PCA 540‐01 (TTH) Argumentative Essay Draft 1 (12th Sep. 2012) An Ideal Situation: ’ Free Enterprise System Along With Regulated Banking’ The U.S. economy is a free enterprise system which means each individual is entitled to earn profits, own private property, compete in a market place for business and make economic decisions for themselves. In such a system some people argue that regulation of economy and economy driving entities, such as banks, may affect the U.S. free enterprise system. Henry Davis Thoreau, an influential figure in American thought and literature and a proponent of laissez faire, said: “That government is best which governs least; and I should like to see it acted up to more rapidly and systematically. Carried out, it finally amounts to this, which also I believe—‘That government is best which governs not at all’; and when men are prepared for it, that will be the kind of government.” If we speak of banks in the context of regulation or deregulation, I feel that regulation of an economic entity like a bank would not only protect depositors but also secure national monetary stability, preserve an efficient and competitive financial system and protect consumer interests. Businesses and individuals hold a significant portion of their funds in banks and ...
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...UT, Very Good Essay Argument Rough Draft— Scroll Down and See attached Fix up and Write Final Draft. You have an especially good and clear understanding the issues surrounding creation of jobs and the importance of creating a good environment financially and aesthetically for business. Very Good Content with some missing elements 80%-2%for lateness=GRADED78%=C+-63pts/80pts • ADD RUNNING HEADER top left with Your Title • ADD Page numbers top right • ADD ABOUT 4 SENTENCES IN YOUR CONCLUSION summarizing your Main Points. • • ADD Opposing views with Transitions: Some people contend that…. • ADD Answer to Opposing Views with Transitions:… There might be some truth in that, but…… • • Good credit to Sources • ADD Reference Page with the sources used in the paper and Fix APA Format • Grammar (Use Proofreading Hit List Handout) • Comma use • Take out unnecessary words. It is unnecessary to announce what the paper will do. That is already evident with the thesis and main ideas. • Word Choice inclining? • A Good Essay Argument Rough Draft— • Good Running Heading • Good Title • Good Introduction ADD in Headings Personal Angle and History • Importance of the Issue • Good Background information, • Wonderful Personal Angle which gives your essay power! • Good Headings • Good Transition with Topic Sentences • Very Good use of evidence • Very Good evidence and stats • Good specific examples and explanations of issues Topic/...
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...Exercises True‐False: Indicate whether each of the following statements is true (agrees with economic theory), false (contradicts economic theory) or is uncertain and explain your answer. 1. A firm earning zero economic profit is paying each factor’s owner the market value of that factor’s marginal product. 2. Input substitution increases the factor price elasticity of demand. 3. If individual workers substitute leisure for income at higher wage rates, the market supply curve of is negatively sloped. 4. Factor A is a major input in the production of commodity B. A price ceiling on A below its equilibrium price will increase the price of commodity B. 5. Industry A uses more capital per worker than does industry B. Therefore, wage rates in industry A must be higher than in industry B. 6. The marginal productivity theory of distribution implies that under universally competitive conditions, the distribution of income is fair. 7. Labor’s marginal revenue product curve in an imperfectly competitive factor market is a mutatis mutandis demand curve. 8. A competitive firm uses two inputs, labor (L) and capital (K). A decrease in the wage rate will lead to a reduction in the quantity of capital employed in the long run. 9. The ratio of wages in competitive occupation Ato wage rates in competitive occupation B is 2. After a payroll tax of 10% in both industries, the ratio of the equilibrium wage rates will increase. 10. Community A has a preferred set...
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...Guidelines for Country Case Report Students are required to do one short Country Case Report, which will count toward the final grade. Country Case Report is worth a maximum total of 100, and each report will contribute to 25% of a student’s final grade. The country case report requires a student to select a country of his/her choice to examine the politics of globalization in that particular country. However, there are sign-up lists for particular group of countries with a maximum number of students who can write on a particular country. These lists are on ‘first-come, first-served’ basis. To encourage students to select countries that are not commonly researched, there is a list of such countries in which students will be given extra points if they choose from this list. The written report should develop and present a position about the politics of globalization for the selected country. The report should also address the expectations as specified by UH Critical Thinking Rubric and by INTB 3352 Global Citizenship Rubric. Please review the grading scheme before writing the report. Technical Requirements: * The minimum requirement is 5 pages (double space with 12 font, Times New Roman, with one inch margins). Maximum is 8 pages (double space). The cover page (e.g., your name and course), bibliography page, and/or any table/figure will not count toward the report’s page requirement. * Provide...
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...Documented exemption, appropriate placement scores or completion of developmental education reading and writing. AMH 1041 examines the historical experiences and events that have shaped America's social and economic development in order to foster a better understanding of America's culturally diverse society. Prerequisite(s): satisfactory completion of Developmental Writing II (ENC0025 ) and Developmental Reading II (REA0017 ), or appropriate placement scores. Examines the historical experiences and events that shaped America’s social and economic development, in order to foster a better understanding of America’s culturally diverse society. Lecture: 3 hours. Close Close Prerequisite(s): satisfactory completion of Developmental Writing II (ENC0025 ) and Developmental Reading II (REA0017 ), or appropriate placement scores. Examines the historical experiences and events that shaped America’s social and economic development, in order to foster a better understanding of America’s culturally diverse society. Lecture: 3 hours. Close Close Prerequisite(s): satisfactory completion of Developmental Writing II (ENC0025 ) and Developmental Reading II (REA0017 ), or appropriate placement scores. Examines the historical experiences and events that shaped America’s social and economic development, in order to foster a better understanding of America’s culturally diverse society. Lecture: 3 hours. Close Close Lecture. Note:...
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...Expressive Essay (Observation, Ethnography or Memoir) First Draft ENC 1101 – CR Junkins Purpose: What do I want the student to do? In this course, we will explore the two most commonly used forms of writing for college students: expressive writing and academic writing. Expressive writing captures what is important to the writer. In order to succeed, writers must understand themselves. Such writing is deeply personal. Expressive writing is designed to prepare students for writing outside academics—communicating feelings and observations, beliefs and opinions, community and individuality—all skill sets that will enable students to succeed in any discipline or career path. From a learning perspective, expressive writing is often an easier form of writing than academic. It allows students to begin working with such concepts as language, reasoning and mechanics while working with material they find worth discussing. In this assignment, I want students to carefully examine both themselves and their community. What makes their community unique? What is their place within the community? How did their unique, individual personality take shape? Project Overview: How do I want the student to do the assignment? Component One: Personal Students will choose to write on one of the following three topics: • One’s sense of place (observation) • One’s place within a community (ethnography) • One’s relationship to an event from the past (memoir) ...
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...Dad Helps Daughter Write an Essay Getty Images Whether you have a learning disability in writing or just want to improve your writing grades, learning how to follow this basic essay writing method will improve your writing. The Three Point Five Paragraph Essay: 1.Tells readers what about the topic you intend to show or prove; 2.Explains three main supporting ideas that prove your argument or support your position; and 3.Summarizes the main point, supporting ideas, and reinforces your conclusions about the topic. Try these worksheets to help: •Thought Organizer •Essay Planner Time Required: Improve Your Essay Writing Skills in about One Hour Here's How: 1. Improving Your Essay Writing Skills - Understanding Your Assignment What is a Three Point Five Paragraph Paper? A three point five paragraph paper, also called a 3.5 paper, is a type of essay that includes five paragraphs and three main ideas, or points: 1.The first paragraph is an introduction. 2.The second, third, and fourth paragraphs each include one main point or idea. 3.The final paragraph is a conclusion. 2. Why Write a Three Point Five Paragraph Essay? •A 3.5 paper is a type of essay that organizes and presents your topic in a clear, well-supported, and complete way. •You can use this form of writing for many types of assignments such as: •Classroom homework assignments; •Essay tests and examinations; •Articles for the school or local newspaper; •Presentations...
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...0 CONTACT HOURS: 40 (40 Theory, 0 Lab) (40 Online) Instructor: Dr. Peggy Bilbruck Email: pbilbruck@ssu.edu (inquiries will be responded within 24-36 hours). For any urgent technical problems with Moodle, contact the SSU-Moodle Administrator: ssumoodle@ssu.edu Office Hours: Wednesdays on Moodle from 11 – 12 pm ONLINE TIME ESTIMATE: This course requires four (4) hours of online activities every week on Moodle plus an additional 8 hours (minimum) of homework per week. COURSE DESCRIPTION This course provides an introduction to graduate business studies focusing on the applied business research and communication skills necessary to be successful in both an academic MBA program and the current economic environment and workplace. It covers information literacy, research and research methodologies, oral and written communication skills as well as critical thinking, problem solving and decision-making paradigms. As designed, the course will familiarize students with the tools necessary for the successful presentation of theories and concepts as they apply to real world managerial scenarios including business decision-making. Prerequisite: None Prerequisite(s): None Co-requisite(s): None What is an Online Course? This is an online course so we will not be meeting physically. Instead course hours will be satisfied using a variety of online synchronous and asynchronous methods. For synchronous meeting time, we will meet online...
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...Draft essay Since the Second World War, development has increased rapidly. Modern societies hope to develop the standard of living through growth in economy and technology. However, development also has some negative impact on society. In addition, the negative impact of development is becoming more serious, especially in developing counties. In this essay, the term ‘the social cost of development’ refers to damage to society caused by activities aimed at achieving the goals of society. The concept of the ‘development’ is considered to include the development goals and all systems and legal measures used to achieve development. Further to this the concept that social cost is‘too high’ is considered to mean that too much damage is caused to society before it is possible to achieve the development goals. In view of the above this essay will argue that the social cost of development is too high. This will be demonstrated by analysing of the impact of the social cost of development on the environmental pollution and health. Developing countries will cost the environment to develop the economy. A major reason for this is that it is commonly that in older to solve the poverty, developing countries will cost the environment to develop the economy. Firstly, during economic growth, environmental degradation will increase. According to the result of research by Dinda, “When a country achieves a sufficiently high standard of living, people attach increasing value to environmental amenities”...
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...University of Minnesota Economics 3951-001, Spring 2011 Major Project Seminar ———————————————————————————————————— All students in this course MUST read this syllabus thoroughly and abide by it. This cannot be over-emphasized. Students in the past who paid attention to this syllabus were more successful than those who did not. ———————————————————————————————————— General Information: Instructor: Andrea L. Waddle Lectures: NO REGULAR LECTURE MEETINGS Office: 3-151 Hanson Hall Office Hours: By appointment only Office Phone: 612-625-0311 Email: waddl003@umn.edu Homepage: http://sites.google.com/site/andreawaddle/ I will respond to emails within 24 hours. Course Objective: The objective of this course is to give you an opportunity to: 1. Apply the analytical skills and intuition obtained in your economics courses in order to examine an economic issue in which you have a special interest. 2. Learn how to write a formal report. For students who find their economics courses “too theoretical,” this is the opportunity to apply the knowledge they have accumulated to a real world problem or issue. Course Format: In order to obtain the two credits for the course, students must write a 10-12 page formal report, with additional graphs/charts, which involves an in-depth analysis of an economic issue. There is no class meeting for the course. However, students will have to submit information regarding the progress of their research to...
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...both sides of the issue Language Summary: ways of showing that you are aware of the opposing opinion Working out the main premise from a paragraph Using connectives and problematising phrases in a paragraph Putting together a paragraph for an argumentative text Choosing your own premise and writing a paragraph Converting an informal text into a formal text Sorting arguments into topics and paragraphs A longer model argumentative essay Getting an overview of the model essay Identifying the main premise, paragraph structure and paragraph topics The internal organisation of the paragraphs - revision Including a paragraph that only presents supporting arguments Writing introductions to argumentative essays Writing conclusions to argumentative essays Writing your own argumentative essay - 13 steps to take from start to finish Appendix 1. Language summary: structure of paragraphs in the body of an argumentative essay Introduction Welcome to Writing Argumentative Essays, a unit of curriculum which aims to teach students how to write short argumentative essays of...
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...http://insights.scorpionsoft.com/bid/329695/The-Most-Recent-Password-Security-Compliance-Guidelines http://csrc.nist.gov/publications/drafts/800-118/draft-sp800-118.pdf http://www.securelink.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/SL_WhitePaper_Compliance.pdf http://hitachi-id.com/compliance/regulatory-compliance-using-identity-management.html http://www.sans.org/security-resources/policies/ http://security.stackexchange.com/questions/10776/regulations-that-specify-password-length ********************************************************** http://www.onlinetech.com/resources/references/what-is-hipaa-compliance Technical safeguards require access control to allow only the authorized to access electronic protected health data. Access control includes using unique user IDs, an emergency access procedure, automatic log off and encryption and decryption. •Audit reports, or tracking logs, must be implemented to keep records of activity on hardware and software. This is especially useful to pinpoint the source or cause of any security violations. Technical policies should also cover integrity controls, or measures put in place to confirm that ePHI hasn’t been altered or destroyed. IT disaster recovery and offsite backup are key to ensure that any electronic media errors or failures can be quickly remedied and patient health information can be recovered accurately and intact. •Network, or transmission, security is the last technical safeguard required of HIPAA compliant...
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