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Technology has revolution the way we engage in the world today. Internet popularity and explosion of social networking sites have drastically alter people’s social interactions. At any given time, millions of people are engaged in texting, sending e-mails, surfing the web, social networking, or watching video in front of computer screens technology addicts’ nightmare, 2011. There is growing alienation between individuals, between families, and between humankind and nature. This is especially worse in children, who are [Writing suggestion: rewrite the sentence to remove "who are"] highly impressionable and still developing their social skills. From a young age, children are constantly exposed to technology in the form of animated shows in television, interactive computer software and cell phones (Brunt field, 2010). There is no more quiet time to simple relaxed and bond with family members. The human brain is overwhelmed with different sensory stimuli and yet it is not developed to its full potential. Children have lost their imagination. They no longer read and imagine scenarios as described by black-and-white words in plain white paper. They have instant visual gratifications from television and computer screens. They easily become restless and bored