Shalonda Mitchell

Professor: Dr. Paul Hackman

ENG 215 Research and Writing

January 15, 2013

My first experience with persuasive writing was in the fifth grade. I had to write a persuasive letter to the school principal, in an attempt to convince her that I should be chosen to represent Westside Elementary School’s fifth grade class at the annual Math Bee. Of the four fifth grade classes; myself and two other fifth grade students were chosen due to our high scores on the statewide math test. I saw this as an opportunity to finally represent my class because I have always loved to write; as well as, I really enjoyed math at that level.

In my letter I chose to remind my principal how well prepared for class I am every day. Each day I showed up with all the items listed on my learning log. At the beginning of every school year each student was given a laminated learning log for their grade level. We were instructed to attach the learning logs to the front of our notebooks, as a reminder of what we should have when we arrive for school in the morning. Each day I came prepared with everything listed on the learning log. I also reminded my principal how polite and respectful I was to both she and my fellow classmates. I enjoyed school and I knew the importance of good behavior and respect. My parents would often remind me that what I did outside of the home reflects who they are and if I behaved poorly or in a disrespectful manner there would be consequences. Finally I included the many times I’ve been on the school’s merit and honor rolls. My love for school was not only reflected in how well prepared I was but in my performance as well. In closing of my persuasive letter I write, “I would be honored to represent a school that has provided me a great education for five years. I believe I possess the characteristics that represent this school.” I was chosen to represent Westside Elementary School #24 at the Annual Math Bee, in 1985.

I expect I will use persuasive writing in my career as well. I’m aspiring to own my own business some day and as a leader being able to send persuasive messages and produce persuasive writings will determine my influence and success. Owning and managing a business doesn’t only mean making financial decisions but it will also require me to promote the business image both inside and outside. In my business I would have to be able to inform people of the business. Being able to provide a skillfully written persuasive email or mission statement could possibly instill faith in the company. In my current position I find that I use persuasive writing in emails.

I expect I will continue to use persuasive writing in my personal life whether it’s a text message, an email or letter to someone. I often send persuasive texts to my husband when making decisions. (Dinner, vacation, chores) e.g. my fiancé and I love to eat. On Thursday nights we have date night. Although we try to agree on where we’ll eat I’ll send him a persuasive email as a reminder of the importance of healthy eating habits with a list of local restaurants with healthier menu choices.

My biggest challenge when writing documents for others to read and evaluate would be the wordiness. I find that I add too much information; often repeating myself in different ways. Due to my love of writing, I get lost in the thought and I tend to cram; losing my reader in the process. I’m also a perfectionist. Being a perfectionist, I analyze my writing repeatedly; trying to capture what I think the reader might capture.