...ENGLISH 281 Draft Workshop Questions for Essay Two in Wikis Steps: 1. Post your draft to your appointed Wiki area by Sunday, April 5 by midnight. 2. Review drafts attached to your Wiki area and provide feedback using the below questions, pasting the answers in to the Wiki area and making it clear who the answers are for/whose draft you are commenting on and that you are the writer. For example, you could paste in something like the following: Susan, here are my thoughts/feedback on your draft posted so far: #1. [Provide feedback using the criteria below] #2 [Provide feedback using the criteria below] #3 on [Repeat above] You are expected to complete these steps for at least one draft posted to your group’s Wiki by Monday, April 6 by midnight for possible five points credit. Be sure to answer the “Specific Questions” below the first ten questions here depending on which essay prompt you are reading for a draft. 1. Does the author/student have all of the “front matter” needed in the draft? (i.e, Does it give an author tag with the title of the poem in quotes or name of book in italics and name of film in italics being worked with in the essay, for example and the author(s) name of text being discussed in the first one or two sentences of introduction)? If this is information is missing, let the author know here and also provide an example please of how it could be better. 2. Are the introductory sentences attention-grabbing? If they are...
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...How to write an essay 1. An essay is about a text and should not include a summary of the text. 2. An essay consists of an introduction, an exposition(see below) and a conclusion. 3. The introduction is either * A statement which catches the reader’s attention and elegantly states the main point in your essay. * Or : a ‘funnel’ (tragt) introduction in which the reader is guided towards the main theme of your essay. * Or : A really striking quotation from the text with your comment, which also points to the main theme of the essay. 4. The exposition is the part where you write about 3 to 5 points (‘pinde’) in which you interpret the text. A point could be a characterization of the main character and his/her relationship to the other characters, the themes of the text, the ending, the title, point of view, the language, the setting or other issues. 5. The conclusion rounds off the essay. You may relate it to the introduction, but it is not a rule. 6. In your essay you should bring two to four quotations from the text and state which page and line they are from. (It may be done in a footnote or in the text). Your quotations must be integrated into the text. 7. In your exposition you should strive to write elegant transitions (overgange) from one point to the other. 8. You are allowed to express your own opinion in an essay. However, you should not write ‘I’ more than a couple of times. Use instead a passive: ‘Other opinions have been...
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...Date: 06/17/2016 Essay #2: Is Gender Bias Noticeable in Literature? In this essay I would be investigating if there are any gender biases in the short stories and the movie Gone Girl. By definition gender bias is, “Inclination towards or prejudice against one gender” (Collins). Although gender bias is mostly thought of being against women there has been a subtler bias against men most recently in movies. Therefore, in this essay I would be considering gender biases of both men and women. In the short story “The Short Happy life of Francis Macomber” the author Ernest Hemmingway treats both genders equally. Both Wilson and Mrs. Macomber are portrayed as opportunists. He has no compunction in accepting the silly advances of Macomber’s wife. She marries Macomber for his money and social position. They both have a cruel streak. He (illegally) beats his helpers, knowing that they would rather take the beating than lose money (fines). She is cruel to her husband, openly despising his weaknesses, and deliberately flaunting her infidelities. In contrast, “I Want a Wife” the author Judy Brady has gender bias. The woman portrayed in the composition is resentful of the quality of life experienced by women in general, who, as wives, have to cater to their husband’s every need and whim. Husbands are portrayed as lazy, selfish and inconsiderate, not even pulling their weight as fathers of their children. Moreover, in the short story “Shiloh” the author Bobby Ann Mason has gender bias...
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...ENG 121 WEEK 2 NARRATIVE ESSAY DRAFT A+ Graded Tutorial Available At: http://hwsoloutions.com/?product=eng-121-week-2-narrative-essay-draft Visit Our website: http://hwsoloutions.com/ Product Description PRODUCT DESCRIPTION ENG 121 Week 2 Narrative Essay Draft, Motivated Success 1 Not usually but often enough we see the same case scenario, people making it to college and then dropping out within the first year. Why do you think that this kind of thing happens? How many people do you know that have went to college and can honestly say that they are still working in general to graduate? Personally, there are not many people that I know who have graduated from a college which is why we see most people going back to school after so many years. There can be many reasons why a person does not finish school the first time around. May it be because of money issues, their interest were elsewhere at the time, a change in career directed their focus elsewhere, but whatever that may be it happens more than we would like to think. I just so happen to fall into this category of people going back to school after I had been once before but never finished. Throughout this essay I will inform readers on why I am returning back to school, my purpose behind it all, obstacles that have gotten in my way because I am returning and my ambitions that drove me to even consider going back to school. There are many reasons that I am going back to school. One main reason that I am going back...
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...Within the past two decades, the United States has faced a battle like no other: the fight against chronic diseases. The burden of chronic diseases, particularly Type 2 Diabetes, has become especially prevalent as lifestyle shifts in poor diet and lack of physical activity are dominating urbanized communities.1 Type 2 Diabetes (T2D) is a metabolic condition that affects the way the body process blood sugar.2 In this condition, the body’s cells are resistant to hormone insulin, which is responsible for allowing glucose to enter the cells to be used for energy.2 As a result, the individual has high blood sugar, which can lead to health problems such as heart disease, vision loss, and kidney disease.2 In the United States, 29.1 million adults are living with diagnosed and undiagnosed diabetes.2 However, adults are not the only population affected by this disease; 208,000 children are currently living with diagnosed diabetes.2 The prevalence for children diagnosed with Type 2...
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...Clinical presentations Diabetes Mellitus and in our case type 2 diabetes often presents itself less dramatically in patients than many other conditions . This characteristic of the disease often results in patients overlooking their symptoms as they tend to develop gradually. Patients affected with diabetes mellitus type 2 may often exhibit the classic signs and symptoms for a longer duration as well as those with most commonly associated with hyperglycemia such as polyuria ,polydipsia and weight loss - which is more often seen in type 1 diabetics. Whilst type 2 diabetics less often experience vague manifestations of their condition such fatigue, weight gain and frequent vaginal yeast infections. Further development of the DMT2 often results in changes that influence both the visual and sensational systems within the body. We were able to detect our patient Mrs. X's clinical presentations after subjecting her to a general examination and special investigations which included taking a blood...
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..., Corporate Centre, Tulsiani Chambers, 1st Floor, ( West Wing), 212, Free Press Journal Marg, Nariman Point - Mumbai 400 021. INTRODUCTION This Booklet gives you detailed information about the objective type Competitive examination for recruitment of Probationary Officers in State Bank of India. This post was advertised in the Employment News/Rozgar Samachar issue dated 9-15 February, 2013 and on the Bank’s website www.statebankofindia.com and www.sbi.co.in. The terms and conditions, period of probation, emoluments etc. were given in the advertisement. You should ensure that you are eligible in respect of age, educational qualification, nationality as stipulated in the advertisement. Details of tests are given ahead in the booklet. 1. 2. 3. GENERAL INSTRUCTIONS Particulars to be Noted : Please note carefully your Roll Number, Registration Number, date, time and venue for the examination given in the call letter. Punctuality in Attendance : Candidates should be present at the examination hall at the time given in the call letter. Candidates arriving late will not be permitted to enter the Examination Hall. Call letter to be Surrendered : Affix firmly a copy of your recent passport size photograph in the space provided for it in the call letter and bring it with you alongwith photo identity proof in original and a photocopy when you come to the venue for the examination. You will not be permitted to appear for the examination if you come without the photo identity proof in original...
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...random manner. Show that regardless of how the numbers are positioned on the wheel, there are three adjacent numbers whose sum is at least 39. Adding all 25 inequalities, we find that 3∑_(i=1)^25▒xi = 3∑_(i=1)^25▒i < 25(39) = 975. But 3∑_(i=1)^25▒i=(25)(26)/2=325 gives us the contradiction that 988 = 3(325) < 975 7. A lumberjack has 4n + 110 logs in a pile consisting of n layers. Each layer has two more logs than the layer directly above it. If the top layer has six logs, how many layers are there? . . 18. Consider the following four equations: 1) 1 =1 2) 2 + 3 + 4 = 1 + 8 3) 5 + 6 + 7 + 8 + 9 = 8 + 27 4) 10 + 11 + 12 + 13 + 14 + 15 + 16 = 27 + 64 1) 1=1 n = 1 2) 2 + 3 + 4 = 1 + 8 n = 2 3) 5 + 6 + 7 + 8 + 9 = 8 + 27 n = 3 4) 10 + 11 + 12 + 13 + 14 + 15 + 16 = 27 + 64 n = 4 Formula (n-1)²+1, or n²-2n+1+1or n²-2n+2. n²-2n+2 Exercise 4,3 10 & 15 10. If n ∈ Z+, and n is odd, prove that 8|(n2 − 1). 15. Write each of the following (base-10) integers in base 2 and base 16. a)22 b) 527 c) 1234 d) 6923 22) base 2 10110 base 16 = 16 527 base 2 = 1000001111 base 16 = 20F 1234 base 2 = 10011010010 base 16 = 4D2 6923 base 2 = 1101100001011 base 16 = 1B0B Exercise 4.4 (1&14) 1. For each of the following pairs a, b ∈ Z+, determine gcd(a, b) and express it as a linear combination of a, b. 231, 1820 b) 1369, 2597 c) 2689, 4001 a) 231, 1820 a) 231, 1820 1820 = 7 (231) + 203 ...
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...Identifying Good or Bad Statements Anit Maharjan HUMN210-H5WW Meghan Roehll Franklin University 4th April, 2013 a. Nobody in the world today is really good. Yes, I have heard of good people, but not really good people. - Good statement. b. The world is not flat. Well, if you look at a map it is: - in what point of view - bad statement. c. I will need an extended period of laborious cogitation to assimilate the missive. This doesn't make any sense - bad statement. d. The number 2 is odd. Are we talking about an even number? I believe your confusion comes from the fact that 2 is a prime number, but it is still even. It is the only even number that is prime – false statement. e. If you believe in evolution, then your ancestors were filthy apes. There are two kinds of people in the world: - one is god prayer and the next is science believer. If you support the statement from the point of scientific theory of evolution by Darwin, then yes our ancestors are filthy apes, whereas if you think form the side of god’s prayer then the statement is false – good statement. f. Some swans are black. In this statement, I am not sure that some swans are black or not, all swans could be black or white – good statement. g. If you are a human, then you are a person. If you are an individual, then you are alive. Human is a person and of course the person becomes an individual and every individual breaths...
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...Year | Album | Peak chart positions | Sold | | | UK | AUS | GER | SWI | FRA | NZ | AUT | IRE | | 2000 | Bright Lights * Released: August 2000 * Label: Island | 1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 6 | 3 | 10 | 1 | * UK: 3xPlatinum * AUS: Platinum * GER: Platinum * SWI: Platinum * FRA: Gold * NZ: Platinum * IRE: Platinum | 2001 | Dangerously In Love * Released: October 2001 * Label: Island | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 6 | 1 | * UK: 4xPlatinum * AUS: Platinum * GER: Platinum * SWI: Platinum * FRA: Platinum * NZ: Platinum * AUT: Gold * IRE: Platinum | 2003 | All Night Long * Released: August 2003 * Label: Island | 1 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 10 | 6 | 14 | 1 | * UK: 2xPlatinum * AUS: Gold * GER: Gold * SWI: Gold * NZ: Gold * IRE: Platinum | 2004 | Troublemaker * Released: October 2004 * Label: Island | 3 | 12 | 10 | 10 | 14 | 12 | 18 | 3 | * UK: Platinum * IRE: Platinum | Year | Song | Peak chart positions | Sold | Album | | | UK | AUS | GER | SWI | FRA | NZ | AUT | IRE | | | 2000 | | 2 | 12 | 10 | 10 | 14 | 12 | 16 | 2 | * UK: Gold * AUS: Gold * NZ: Gold | | | | 1 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 1 | * UK: Platinum * AUS: Platinum * GER: Gold * SWI: Gold * NZ: Platinum | | 2001 | | 8 | 24 | 22 | 22 | 26 | 24 | 28 | 8 | * UK: Gold | | | | 12 | - | - | - | - | - | - | 12 | | | | | 1 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 10 | 8 | 12 | 1 | * UK: Platinum * AUS: Platinum * GER: Gold * SWI: Gold * NZ: Platinum...
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...receives it. And also some other facts which should be considered like life expectancy, importance, age etc. when deciding on whom to donate the heart to. He’s cause for damage to the heart was the steroids, of which he was unaware of the consequences of taking the steroids at the time he took so there wasn’t any sort of health irresponsibility known otherwise. His chances to live 10-15 more years are very high so it’s one point investing in him. He has a family to take care of, wife and the 3 kids who he has to support till they are on their feet and so forth. He also has been a good supporting father as he’s already being supporting their dreams career wise and the future. So my first choice with all confidence would be Jerry. The number 2 choice is Ozzie because as LONG as he does not get back on his old ways HE does hold out some hope on society as a whole as long he does NOT revert back and does good in society by helping out and he no longer does any drugs - he really can have a useful and a prosperous and productive life. His chances of living after a successful heart transplant are another 10 years but only if he stays off the drugs and which is not really guaranteed but if he does he can be a very good mentor and a coach or a guidance for teens with troubled life as they are on drugs already. Since Ozzie have seen the side effects and losses because of the drugs, he can let the teens know it too and...
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...Corridors of Transition between 12 Angry Men and 12 “I have always found that mercy bears richer fruits than strict justice”. Abraham Lincoln “The virtue of justice consists in moderation, as regulated by wisdom”. Aristotle ”Nobody gets justice. People only get good luck or bad luck”. Orson Welles Justice = mid-12c., "the exercise of authority in vindication of right by assigning reward or punishment;" also "quality of being fair and just," from Old French justice "justice, legal rights, jurisdiction" (11c.), from Latin iustitia "righteousness, equity," from iustus "upright, just" . The Old French word had widespread senses, including "uprightness, equity, vindication of right, court of justice, judge." The word began to be used in English c.1200 as a title for a judicial officer. Meaning "right order, equity" is late 14c. Justice of the peace first attested early 14c. In the Mercian hymns, Latin iustitia is glossed by Old English rehtwisnisse. To do justice to (someone or something) "render fully and fairly showing due appreciation" is from 1670s. This word, with such a strong connotation, influenced and formed the basis of many philosophical...
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