Throughout my time here at Iowa State University, I have improved my writing in many ways. My writing was decent in terms of being able to write a basic coherent sentence in high school levels of writing. During high school I would write posts on interesting subjects on canvas. I’ve never really took these seriously. I’ve never really taken writing seriously either. The discussion posts have helped me write get used to write causal 250 work essays. This has had a profound impact in my writing this semester. It has given me comfort in writing difficult prompts from moodle or readings in our books. This e-portfolio assignment is the best work that I done all semester. It demonstrated what I’ve learned through the explanation of the reflections and the revision of the assignment that are improved drastically. When I was first writing my revisions, I was looking over the areas that need the most fixing. I read the comments on the previous assignments and used that as a guide. Two areas that needed improvement was the thesis and the supporting details. When revising my second assignment, …show more content…
The peer reviews have been instrumental at exposing the flaws in my writing. The critiques that I’ve received consisted of not clear enough of a thesis, either too much or too less details in my body paragraphs, and a conclusion that fails to summarised the paper with the thesis included or at least addressed. Connecting my body paragraphs to the thesis has been very difficult to do. This is due to the distraction that I usually succumb to when writing long page essays, but peer reviews help me in this area as well. The presentations that we’ve done in class were by in large helpful. It has helped me getting used to being in front of a group of people without being nervous. This is a strong skill to have that will be used to in the future. Strong communication skills will eventually come to use in the