Brandon Jones
April, 8 2014
COMP1
1. The theme of the introductory paragraph is basic army training and how it affects the soldiers mind and body. She also gives use an example of what they do, and what it affects. One of the things its affects is the soldiers appetite, and another being there mentality of future training and what’s to learn from it besides conquering fear. An example of what they do is his “battle buddies” training rolling a log down a fifty foot hill for exercise which was preparation for the gas chamber. The author grabs you by my speaking of army training and giving you examples of experience and feelings. 2. Unfortunately, we are learning the important stuff first after we learn about how important gas masks are the hard way. 3. Its relevant to its topic sentence because its relates in detail the fear of the gas chamber, and what it’s going to be like in there. It is also relates how being in the chamber experience will change you as a person. The angle of the body is to give you an understanding of what conquering your fears feels like especially when you have nowhere to run. Relating nightmares and near death experiences can cause Natural survival instincts being forced by fear is all a part of the 2nd paragraphs theme. 4. It relates because she goes in feeling better about herself and realizes that she in finally in the room. She gives detail of being in the chamber with her mask on and was able to be Observational of his surroundings. The theme of this paragraph was him building up the confidence going into the chamber and accepting his fate. Also realizing that there was more to come from this chamber and how serious this training was. 5. It connect by explaining her experience in the Fogged room and all the different feeling she had being in the chamber. How fast it hit her and what she needed to do to get out of there and to fly away back into reality. The theme was her struggle to overcome her fear and accomplish her mission without a doubt. It was going to take a lot for her to be released from the chamber with her fear conquered. She was ready to become the person she wanted to be. 6. It relates the because of all the things she learned from a place she hated but changed her life and outlook. The lifestyle that’s brought death to her mind made her a stronger individual and a better solider. The theme of this paragraph was the outcome of facing your fears and how it could help you become someone you thought you could never be. The fear of being someone your scared of being can take you across the world and on top of mountains.