Hey Soph I was just wondering if you could read through this and see where I can improve do not worry if u tear it to shreds I am open for all feedback. I f you feel I need more “Courtney opinions” can you let me know. If possible could you help out with the conclusion mainly the last line I don’t really think it works?
Thank you very much 
If everyone imagined we were in Metropolis and turned their head towards the window, we would expect to see cape crusaders. But is a hero just someone that wears a cape and can fly? A hero is a person who does the leg work, someone who has noble qualities and is admired for their courage. “It does not take a hero to order men into battle. It takes a hero to be one of those men who goes into battle”. We can all tell people what to do, but a true hero is born in the most challenging situations, and a Year of Wonders by Geraldine Brooks offers the view that the unlikely hero can emerge from the face of trauma. …show more content…
This notion gives the reader a sense of joy and delight as the possibility of some good emerging from the trauma of the plague arises. This also gave me hope that there is good in everyone. But the funny thing is those words were spoken from a hypocrite Michael Mompellion. A man, who in my mind was supposed to be the town savior and was initially the novel’s hero that was born through the traumatic event of the plague, but instead he left me and the town disappointed and without a hero. Mr. Mompellion was once an idolized man but is now a man with twisted thoughts, mirthless laughter and deceitful