...It’s All Been a Big, Fat Lie,” by Gary Taubes In the first paragraph of the essay, Taubes inserts the statement “Any theory that tries to account for obesity in America, has to account for that,” referring to the sharp rise in obesity in the 1980’s and setting up his thesis that carbohydrates, not fats cause obesity. What does this mean? Taubes makes it seem plausible that fat causes obesity and offers reasonable doubt that carbohydrates may be the culprit, instead. William Dietz who runs the division of nutrition and physical activity at the Center of disease control said “As far as exercise and physical activity go, there are no reliable data before the mid-80's.” In 1990’s study by Center of Disease Control shows "exercise activity remains unchanged from 70’s to 80’s.” Why was the data not reliable? People in the 70’s and 80’s were not exposed to fast food and junk food which lead them to eat healthy. We watch television and most of the time we see fast food commercial. Since we see these fast food commercials, we crave for it and we drive ourselves to the drive thru and buys are self meals. However, we tend to eat so much unhealthy food, most us tend not work out which leads us to have health problems. What foods have good or bad cholesterol in them? Foods high in good fats include vegetable oils (such as olive, canola, sunflower, soy, and corn), nuts, seeds, and fish. Foods high in bad fats include red meat, butter, cheese, and ice cream, as well as processed foods...
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...Mikkel Koed, 27 1.s Engelsk: Analytical Essay Analytical Essay - “The Right Passengers” Life is a climb. If we want something and try to achieve it, we have to fight for it and keep climbing uphill. But we always need to have our priorities straight. Should we just fight hard and long enough until we accomplish? Or should we settle for a ´deal´ and maybe realise things are not so bad as we thought? In the story “The Right Passengers“, Waqar Ahmed tells about the two attitudes immigrants have. One of them still reaching and the other accepting. Who lives with the most joy? Can the two of them effect each other in any way? The two leading characters of the short story is Nadeem Riaz and Faisal. They are both from Pakistan, but with two entirely different views of being an immigrant in America. Nadeem Riaz is a taxi driver, and desperately wants to make money. “but those cops that followed him for no reason, probably just trying to make their monthly quota of tickets […] What could Nadeem do? He's an immigrant – with a green card.“ (p. 3: ll. 9-10 + 14-15). You can tell it's not in a positive way the police and the government of the U.S.A is pictured. Nadeem does not like America and is just using the country for his own good, but maybe it is because of reasons like this. He just wants to make the money and get back to Pakistan. People do not respect him in America the same way they did in Pakistan. ““Why did you call the cabby 'uncle'?“ […] by calling him “cabby,“ she's...
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...Naiem salib Essay #3. First draft. Is Walmart good or bad for America? Throw the years Walmart have expanded more and more , and attracted more customers And employee’s .Some people can’t live without Walmart ,Some shop at Walmart and other work there , but not everyone is a fan of Walmart .Walmart also do a lot of good things to the community ,But the question here does Walmart do more good stuff to the community or does they make the community even more worse? Lets start and talk about the good stuff that Walmart do. They're cheap which helps low income families or people who just want cheap stuff. One-stop shopping is also a huge plus for a lot of people save time, gas, and money. You might have to turn some of the bad into a bit of good. For one, retail employment growth - they open a lot of jobs for a lot of people, and you can find all you can need in Walmart from food to tires to pet supplies , so you wont have to go to ten stores to buy you’re stuff , and they are one of the cheapest stores in America. Is Walmart bad for America? Over 100 million customers visit Wal-Mart every single week in this country, but is it good for America. and that question cannot be answered , because the reason that people hate Walmart is the same reason that the other half of America love Walmart .And that is what they want .Walmart god so big that they started paying people less than the minimum wage , and they couldn’t care less. In 2010, Wal-Mart had revenues of 421 billion...
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...These authors, in their article, “The Construction of Nonpersonhood and Demonization: Commemorating the Traitorous Reputation of Benedict Arnold,” are trying to say that Benedict Arnold was just as important to America as a war hero... And not just because he actually was one before his betrayal. The authors are trying to prove that he may have helped America more than he realized, albeit unintentionally. And no matter how hard it is to believe or how much we may not want to accept it, Benedict Arnold was a great example to the people of the United States of America. The authors give their evidence for the argument by breaking down their entire thought process. First, one must “uncover the values for which a society stands” (Page 1). Then, they must compare the actions of the individual to the beliefs of the society as a whole. In a time of war against their fatherland to be separate and recognized, national pride was high. Betraying this nationality, as Benedict Arnold did, would be an absolutely unforgivable sin. The evidence given seems authentic, as many references are made to other texts and even records from the time. All these sources come together to very efficiently support the purpose of the essay. Regarding the knowledge required to understand the essay, there were a few things that had to be understood. Most of them were ideals such as patriotism, nationalism, and treason. These ideals, and most - if not all - of the themes in this...
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...ENGL 250: #4 Documented Essay Suggested Topics For the Assignment #4 Documented Essay, you will present multiple viewpoints from a currently debated issue. You need to draw your topic from the issues and controversies discussed in Rereading America, or a current debate in anthrozoology (human-animal studies). Here is a list of suggested topics. You may choose one of these, or create your own with instructor approval. Look through the table of contents and chapter introductions in Rereading America and find a debate or a controversy that interests you, and develop your topic in the form of a question that could have multiple answers. Your topic must be narrowly focused enough to cover adequately in a 5-7 page paper. Family & Relationships: * Do children need to be raised by both a mom and a dad? * An increasing number of people are opting not to become parents. Is this bad for society? * Can a parent who uses marijuana recreationally still be a good role model? * Does lifelong monogamous marriage represent the ideal partnership? * Should prostitution be legalized? Is it wrong to pay for sex? * Should the government prohibit genetically engineering babies? * In what circumstances, if any, should assisted suicide be legal? Education: * Should colleges require classes in history, arts, and humanities? * Do too many kids go to college? * Should student loan debts be forgiven? * Should the government fund college educations...
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...“Advice to Youth” In Mark Twain’s essay, “Advice to Youth”, Mark gives advice to the youth of America. His essay targets the teenage audience and gives a view of moral values for the teenage mind. Twain’s essay is in ways a comedy because of the sarcastic tone he uses. He talks about how lying can be bad, and when it can be good. Twain also gives advice on how the youth should avoid violence, showing respect to their superiors, and explains why the youth shouldn’t handle firearms. He even states, “Never handle firearms carelessly. The sorrow and suffering that have been caused through the innocent but heedless handling of firearms by the young,” (Twain 6). Throughout his essay, Twain uses certain words that betray the purpose of his writing....
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...United States; it is the people of America that put the “United” in the United States. Through a well-organized essay, “One Nation, Slightly Divisible,” David Brooks describes the diverse ways of life between Republicans and Democrats. Brooks effectively uses strong nonbiased points to assist the reader in agreeing and understanding his every thought. This allows Brooks to easily reach his intended audience- anyone interested in the diverse ways of life between Republicans and Democrats. America is a united nation despite the differences between people and their culture. This idea of one united nation, that is slightly divisible, is portrayed effectively through Brooks’s essay. “One Nation, Slightly Divisible” has a title that directly introduces the topic of the essay. The organization throughout Brooks’s essay is clear and all of his ideas are well thought out. “One Nation, Slightly Divisible” begins with a short excerpt about Brooks’s background, giving the reader the ability to know Brooks on a more personal level and understand where his experiences are coming from. Brooks uses a gripping first sentence that makes the reader want to read more. This first sentence states, “Sixty-five miles from where I am writing this sentence is a place with no Starbucks, no Pottery Barn, no Borders or Barnes & Noble” (487). This is an effective way of drawing the reader in because it makes the reader think about where Brooks physically wrote the essay, and draws the reader further...
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...here. In this essay I'm going to share some good and bad experiences that I had. I used to live in India, and since my childhood I wanted to be a teacher. I loved to read and write but then we moved to United States of America which totally changed my mind. Because I didn't knew English at all. So I thought now I can't be a teacher anymore because of the language. I had to change my career goal from the day we moved. It was very difficult to move to another country with totally different kind of life style. We had many different kind of difficulties that we had to adjust. The whole environment was opposite then India. Everyone has that one teacher early on that is so inspirational and incredible that you want to tell the world how great they are and this is my chance. My first truly inspirational teacher, Mrs. Everest, was my first English teacher when I moved to United States of America. She taught me English which was new to me. Mrs. Everest makes me read the books. At first I couldn’t even understand a word of the story. There have been many obstacles that I have gotten in my way for me to be successful reader. Now I am able to confidently read. I imagine and picture the story in my mind. When a large amount of reading is assigned, sometimes my brain gets exhausted and I have to take a break. Literally my brain gets tired. I have gained some insight from certain readings; “Who Shall I Be” really struck me in a good way. It talks...
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...began the writing process by making an outline. I thought about the reasons and how much support I would need to validate. I don’t think more outline could have made my essay better simply because I think I did an efficient amount of work on outlining the essay. Also given the time constraint of writing the essay I don’t think it would be best to spend more time than I did on the outline because I barely finished the essay. Introduction: I think my essay has an engaging hook by using a quote from the prompt we were given. I take a position firmly not discrediting everything Thomas Paine says just that America isn’t together. I don’t really address the prompt’s background information just saying that America then is different from today. I think with saying that the audience can assume when Thomas Paine wrote that quote it was in a different time period. I think my thesis does effectively address the prompt. I think it just shortens the quote which I think makes the argument better by not fully disagreeing with Thomas Paine on all front just with one thing. Body: I think my body paragraphs flow logically. I chose to order them by the time period I deem the issue fits. Since fighting over religion is a thing you see time and time again throughout history I chose to put that since it not only a problem in America but lasting problem in the world. Then I put the systematic problems we have in the lower class people of America’s neighborhood and since so many things play off one...
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...this courses, I found that I improve my writing skills and get some experience about writing. In my opinion, the most important thing in writing is thinking. I am sure that a good idea is more important than good writing skills. Now, when I write essay, I would not write immediately. But I will research the background and collect many information about the essay. Then, I will think and reclaim all information so that I can have my own ideas. For this three essays, was my favourite,because I spend a lot's of time on it. This was my first time to read such long article in my life. I need to pay attention to understand the writer's idea and try my best to find the main idea, main sentence and supporting sentence. Obviously, there are many misunderstand words, but I learned to catch the information what I understand and guess the main idea. So that this essay influence me to learn new writing skills. For my prompt, I was happy to my instructor to give us a chance to visit historical place. I went to Massachusetts State House in weekend, I learn that if you want to write a good essay, you should open your eyes. That's can help you to accept new ideas and easy to absorb different opinions. At last, the Beauty essay make me learn that everything has different side based on different angles and values. In this essay, I tried to describe my opinion which is the beauty is not mean beautiful. The beauty is produced by cultures, value standards and customs. I am happy to take this course in...
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...can be a good thing since there are white-hat hackers. Explain why this argument of definition deserves attention. What is at stake? Why is it important for your readers to consider? When seeing the word “hacker”, the audience automatically picks up the negative vibe. Truth is, not all hackers are bad. The common definition of is that this bad “hacker” gets unauthorized access to someone else’s device. It is this definition that risk ruining...
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...Like Mexicans Gary Soto The essay “Like Mexicans” by Gary Soto describes the similarity that people have, no matter their origins. Soto explains in this essay how a specific race does not describe how people are. When Gary was younger he received two advices from his grandmother. A Good Advice and a bad advice, the bad was to be a barber to work less and earn money and the good was to get marry with a Mexican girl, advices that he always remember. In this story the Soto’s family expect that Gary gets marry with an Mexican woman, when he gets older, because they think Mexicans are better wives for their behave and how they treat their husbands. They assume that people should get marry with people equal to them, meaning same culture, nationality and economic status. At the age of 20 when Gary was older he met a Japanese women with who she felt in love and thought she was the one to be his wife and make a family. The new was not accepted immediately for his family and friends, his best friend Scott disagree with Gary’s decision of having this relationship with the Japanese women named Carolyn. The argument Scott use to disagree this relationship was that Carolyn was too good for Gary, for her race. Once Gary visited Carolyn’s home he saw her family and the way they live, he realized that race does not define your economic status or your intellectualism. No matter what race people are: Black, Asian, Mexican or “OKIES” (a name his grandmother used to call people whose were different...
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...Americanization For many years, the United Sates has been attracting immigrants from a variety of different races, countries and religions to come and live in a land full of freedom and opportunity. These immigrants are slowly but surely turning America into a culture melting pot, giving it the most diversity people have seen in a lifetime. Although it is a common misconception, these people are not just looking to live in America for working privileges. Their real desire is to become something that depicts pride and honor, an American. Being an American in a country as diverse as ours means more than just living on American soil, it has endless benefits that allows one to feel free. Unfortunately, the rapid flow of immigrants into America has led to many issues. One of the main ones is the concept of assimilation, which has been disputed for years due to the capacity of the incoming immigrants. Jay Nordlinger, in his essay “Bassackwards: Construction Spanish and Other Signs of the Times” notes that not “everyone who comes to America is dying to melt into the pot”. Yet he stresses, as does Linda Chavez in her essay “Supporting Family Values”, the need for immigrants to assimilate to American culture. These two concepts have been floating around America since the first illegal immigrants started to show up and they’ve been controversial ever since. Everyone is looking for a happy medium for the issue but can’t seem to find it. Recent immigrants are being expected to trade their ethnic and...
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...answers for all the writing questions in the ieltshelpnow.com Academic Practice Tests. Some of these example essays were written by IELTS students and some were written by an IELTS examiner in order to give an example of a good answer. Please refer to the question papers while you are reading these answers so that you understand the question that is being answered. After each of the example answers, an IELTS examiner has written a short commentary analysing the good and bad points of the answer. We hope this will give you an insight into how the writing answers should be written for IELTS Academic module. Academic Writing Practice Test 1 Task 1 In this report I will describe a bar chart that shows the estimated world illiteracy rates by gender and region for the year 2000. First I will look at male illiteracy for the 6 areas shown. The lowest rates were in Developed Countries, Latin America/Caribbean and East Asia/Oceania with rates of 1% (approximately), 10% and 8% (approximately) respectively. The rates for the next three areas were much higher and quite similar to each other. Sub-Saharan Africa, the Arab States and South Asia had rates of approximately 31%, 29% and 34%. Female illiteracy was much higher relatively in each area except Latin America/Caribbean where it was only slightly higher. The lowest rates for female illiteracy were again Developed Countries, Latin America/Caribbean and East Asia/Oceania with rates of approximately 2%, 12% and 20%. Again the rates for the next...
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...“Stranger in the Village” In his essay “Stranger in the Village”, which was written during the trip to Switzerland in 1951. He describes the lives of Africa America and how he found racism to be prevalent in a Swiss village. It was obvious to see that Africa America were separated from white people in the society. Baldwin’s essay describes his realization about racial discrimination and how it impacts his whole life. This essay not only shows the experiences of Baldwin in the village, but also the complex historical relationship between the “blacks” and “whites”. By looking at Baldwin’s experience of racism and how he deals with it, Baldwin is trying to show us the effects of racism on him and Africa Americans in the community. Therefore he inspires people to change with hope for a good future between the “blacks” and “whites”. Baldwin was not aware that he lived in a racist society until he had experienced it when he traveled to small village in Switzerland. Baldwin describes about his experiences living in the village and how he was able to see the issues of race. He realized that his life was defines by the color of skin in Europe. When he got there the villagers stared at him and treated him like an alien coming from a different world. “From all available evidence no black man had ever set foot in this tiny Swiss village before I came”, it was like villagers have never seen a black man before. The small children were afraid of him, stated to...
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