Athens & Rome: From Thesis to Essay Writing
Mini-Q Essay Outline Guide

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Grabber:in rome people are granted citizenship if they aren't citizens. In Athens only men are granted citizenship. Background:Rome has a better citizenship system.

Background (Details):Rome has a better system because if they aren’t Roman they are still granted citizenship.

Idea 1:Non Romans could become citizens.

Idea 2: Also, censers watched citizenship levels so they were equal.

Idea 3:Finally, the senate was orderly and stable

Stating the question with key terms defined:Rome had the better system of citizenship for three reasons

Thesis and Road Map:The three reasons are non romans could become citizens, censers watched citizenship …show more content…
Detail supporting Idea One:if people aren’t Roman Then they can go to Rome and get married and become citizens.

Evidence supporting detail from documents with document citation (Idea Two):In Rome people were granted citizenship a lot more than in athens. Thats because they are more willing to grant citizenship to give them lottery in the government

Detail supporting Idea Two:If people weren't citizens them they could become on if they get put into lottery for government.

Evidence supporting detail from documents with document citation (Idea Three):People have been granted citizenship if they were children.

Detail supporting Idea Three:they were only granted it if they where citizen born

Argument connecting evidence to the thesis:In Rome people get granted citizenship more than Athens

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Baby Thesis for bucket one (With three ideas):In Rome they order and stabilize the senate.

Evidence supporting detail from documents with document citation (Idea One):In Rome they order and stabilize the senate because many of the senate served the senate for life, they had to deal with foreign relations,and the senate had full