Reflective
Saro: [thinking] Everyday is different. Everyday people die. So live life to the fullest with no regrets and cut down every obstacle in your path!
[fighting a giant demon creature, defeats it]
Saro: Restore.
[time-space-astral seal unlocked]
Saro: Phew! I thought I got some blood on my shirt!
[enter café]
Saro: Took you long enough! [Receiving coffee]
Hibiki: [speaking in Tohoku dialect] Well sorry for brewing it just the way you like it. You want anything else?
Saro: Nah. I’m good. [Blowing away the steam] oh, Hibiki. Can you tell me the time?
Hibiki: It’s about eight o’clock I think.
[Saro drops empty coffee cup on table]
Saro: I’m late!!! Thanks for the coffee just put it on my tab! [Running off]
Hibiki: [talking to herself] Sigh. I guess I can tell him how I feel tomorrow. Do you feel the same way, Saro…?
[running to Burger Haven]
Manager: You’re late!! Get inside that damn kitchen and fill out orders!!! [Chasing Saro with a broom]
Employee: It’s all yours. [Leaving the kitchen]
Saro: Sorry. [Entering kitchen]
Employee: Oh. It’s 72 orders in total.
Saro: What!!?
Extracted from “Demon Cry”, part 1 - dialogue plan

This is a plan I had all written out before beginning my Manga. Afterwards, I started on my name. A name is similar to a preliminary piece for the Manga where the storyboarding, panels, character views, dialogue and speech bubbles are identified on paper. Initially, I would use my copybook version of Demon Cry as my name, but there are many errors with panelling and character placement. So using the story from the copybook version, I restructured the storyboarding, panelling and characters as well as the opening of the story.
As shown in the start of the above extract, an immediate scene of Saro fighting a giant demon will catch attention and raise questions. This makes the reader want to continue reading to find answers and see what will happen next.