Shifting Sentences.
Change the following First, Second and Third Person Point of View to a Formal Academic Writing with a Formal tone.
Journal 1(15/1/2013)
Oh yea! My dad bought me a new handphone, Sony Xperia SL! He said it was a present for my SPM result, although it was a bit late, it is ok as long as I get a new phone! Lastly, it is equipped with 12-megapixel camera and the pictures captured are extremely clear! Thanks dad for giving me such a nice present!

Sample: Smart phone is an essential item to people nowadays. Giving smart phones to someone or somebody as a present would be the best thing to do. People tend to give presents to someone that they love, especially to those who have achieved a better result in the examination. Sony Xperia SL, for instance, is a very stylish phone with android smartphone system. It runs by Dual-core 1.7 GHz processor and with Android OS, version 4.0.4 (Ice Cream Sandwich). It has 4.3 inches large LED-backlit LCD, capacitive touchscreen and 32 GB storage.

Journal 2(16/1/2013)
On 11/1/2013, I attended my first class of Basic Composition. On that day, I was late for class as we had to attend a talk by Mr Kalai and a meeting for committees. I went to class at around 3p.m. and found that the lecturer for Basic Composition subject was actually Miss Felicia, who taught us the subject of General Psychology last semester. She was still very kind even though she gave us a lot of homework such as writing journals, writing introductions for some topics and many more. I enjoyed attending her class because her class was so interesting compared to other classes. I hope the next class will also be so interesting as well.

Sample: Attending classes is important. Basic Composition and General Psychology are part of the subject taught in the University. Both subject are interesting for students to learn. The subjects became more insightful with an experience lecturer giving lessons on the particular subjects.

Journal 3(17/1/2013)
Today, when i was reading a book, i saw a very meaningful phrase, "Lost time is never found again." I know it sounds nothing, but actually when we try to think deeper, we will find that time flies, without waiting for us. We are just like jogging with time, when we are distracted by something else, we will slow down our pace, but do not forget, time is still running. Thus, we have to manage our time properly so that we can follow the pace of time.

Journal 4(19/1/2013)
Today, when I was looking through my facebook, I found something very interesting!Oh My God, my favourite Pokemon is going to release another new version, that is Pokemon X and Y. As usual, there will be three starter pokemons, that are Fennekin, Chespin, and Froakie. Fennekin, is a fox-liked fire type pokemon, and Froakie is a frog-liked water type pokemon while Chespin is an otter-liked grass pokemon. All three of them look so cute! I am looking forward to the release of Pokemon X and Y on October 2013!

Sample: People have hobbies and interest. Interest can be categorised as movies, musics, games, sports…. People is in a need of interest and hobbies in life to add on a colourful living. According to a research, hobbies and interest can prolong the age and give stimulants to life.
Journal 5(20/1/2013)
Today, I came across with a quote, "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." Friends are the one who will always beside you when you need them besides your family members. Some friends are even like our own family members. They share their joys, laughters, tears with us. A good friend is really a treasure from God that we should cherish.

Journal 6(22/1/2013)
My favourite mobile phone brand, Sony, is going to release one new phone model, Sony Xperia Z! Sony Xperia Z is a very stylish-looking Android Smartphone. It runs by Quad-core 1.5 GHz Krait processor and with Android OS, version 4.1.2 (Jelly Bean) which is upgradable to version 4.2 (Jelly Bean). It also has extremely large screen, 5 inches with super clear screen resolution. It also has 13-megapixel camera which allows you to capture extra clear photos. Last but not least, the special feature of Sony Xperia Z is that it is totally waterproof! It allows you to answer to call even when you are swimming! I am gonna beg my father to buy me Sony Xperia Z!

Journal 7(24/1/2013)
Sony Xperia Go is the first waterproof mobile phone released by Sony Company. It is a very stylish Android Smartphone with various functions. It runs by Dual-core 1 GHz Cortex-A9 and with Android OS, v2.3 (Gingerbread), upgradeable to v4.0 (Ice Cream Sandwich). It has 3.5 inches display screen, with 5 megapixels camera. Last but not least, it looks very stylish.

Journal 8(26/1/2013)
My sister bought a new handphone last week, a Samsung Galaxy SIII. It is a not really good-looking Smartphone but with great functions. First, it has 4.8 inches display screen with 8 megapixel camera. It runs by Quad-core 1.4 GHz Cortex-A9 processor and with Android OS, v4.0.4 (Ice Cream Sandwich), which is upgradeable to 4.1.2 (Jelly Bean).

Journal 9(1/2/2013)
One Piece anime is my favourite anime! It is written and illustrated by Eiichiro Oda. The series begins with the execution of Gol D. Roger, a man known as the King of the Pirates. Just before his death, Roger announces that his treasure, the One Piece was left somewhere at the Grand Line, causing the Great Pirate Era to begin. As a result, countless pirate set out to the Grand Line to look for the treasure. The main character of the anime is Strawhat Luffy and his crew, the navigator, Nami, the cook, Sanji, the swordsman, Zoro, the moose doctor, Tony Tony Chopper, the cyborg, Franky, the marksman, Usopp, the archaeologist, Robin and lastly the musician, Brooke. Them, the Strawhat crew set out to the Grand out together to look for One Piece and to chase after their own dreams!

Journal 10(3/2/2013)
Hunter X Hunter is one of my favourite anime series. It is is an interesting Japanese manga series written and illustrated by a famous mangaka, Yoshihiro Togashi. Until now, three hundred forty episodes had been released and it is currently still on-going. However, the manga has frequently gone on hiatus since the year 2006. So we the reader have to wait for a long time until the next episode is released.

Journal 11(4/2/2013)
Naruto is an ongoing Japanese manga series written and illustrated by Masashi Kishimoto. The plot tells the story of Naruto Uzumaki, an adolescent ninja who constantly searches for recognition and dreams to become the Hokage, the ninja in his village who is acknowledged as the leader and the strongest of all.

Journal 12(7/2/2013)
Bleach is a Japanese manga series written and illustrated by Tite Kubo. Bleach follows the adventures of Ichigo Kurosaki after he obtains the powers of a Soul Reaper — a death personification similar to the Grim Reaper—from another Soul Reaper, Rukia Kuchiki. His newfound powers force him to take on the duties of defending humans from evil spirits and guiding departed souls to the afterlife.

Journal 13(20/2/2013)
Soul Eater is a Japanese manga written and illustrated by Atsushi Ōkubo. Set at the "Death Weapon Meister Academy", the series revolves around three teams consisting of a weapon meister and (at least one) human weapon. Trying to make the latter a "death scythe" and thus fit for use by the academy's headmaster Shinigami, the personification of death, they must collect the souls of 99 evil humans and one witch, in that order; otherwise, they will have to start all over again.
Journal 14(1/3/2013)
Reborn!, known in Japan as Katekyō Hitman Reborn! "Katekyō" being a portmanteau of Katei Kyōshi and translated as Home Tutor, is a Japanese manga written and illustrated by Akira Amano. The plot revolves around the life of a young boy named Tsunayoshi Sawada, who finds out that he is next in line to become the boss of the most powerful Mafia organization called Vongola, theVongola Family. As such, the Vongola's most powerful hitman, a gun-toting infant named Reborn, is sent to tutor "Tsuna" on how to become a respectable boss.

Journal 15(2/3/2013)
In the future it is possible to instantaneously measure a person's mental state, personality, and the probability that a person will commit crimes, all through a device installed on each citizen's body called a Psycho-Pass. When this probability, measured by the "Crime Coefficient" index, is too high in an individual, they are pursued and apprehended—with lethal force, if necessary. This task is performed by a special team of so called latent criminals (people whose crime coefficient is deemed too high, and without chance of recovery) called Enforcers, who are supervised by police officers known as Inspectors; the Inspectors ensure that Enforcers perform their duties within the constraints of the law. Both Enforcers and Inspectors use magnum-esque "Dominators", special weapons designed to fire only on those with a higher than normal Crime Coefficient. The story follows Unit One of the Public Safety Bureau's Criminal Investigation Division.

Journal 16(4/3/2013)
3/3/2013 night, me,my sister and her friends went to Plaza Merdeka. We went there for window shopping because we had nothing to do if we just stayed at home. After one hour of window shopping, we went to Starbucks and i ordered a cup of Asian Dolce Latter. After that, my sister suggested us to go to McDonald for supper. And then after we finished our supper we went home at around eleven o'clock.

Journal 17(8/3/2013)
Since my birthday is near, I plan to buy a Starbucks Tumbler for myself as a birthday present. After doing a survey, I plan to buy a black color venti size tumbler which has a capacity of 710ml. However, I still do not have enough money to buy it since it costs me around RM60 something. Thus, Starbucks Tumbler, wait for me a while, I am going to get you very soon!

Journal 18(15/3/2013)
Last week, the Japan LINE android application company had released a new android game, LINE WindRunner. It is a game similar to Temple Run, Subway Surfers and Sonic which you have to run around and collect golds. Through collecting golds, you can upgrade your own character, pets and summoned beast so they have higher bonuses. It is quite interesting and the characters are cute too. I enjoy the game very much.

Journal 19(20/3/2013)
Last week, the Japan LINE android application company had released a new android game, LINE Dragon Flight. It is a game similar to Temple Run, Subway Surfers and Sonic which you have to run around and collect golds. Through collecting golds, you can upgrade your own pet dragons so they have higher bonuses. It is very interesting and the characters are cute too. I enjoy the game very much.

Journal 20(1/4/2013)
Today, I saw a notice on SEGi notice board about a T-shirt designing competition by Tagginspire.com. So, I decided to join this competition and I designed a design, “Bo Jio”, which means no inviting in Hokkien. Hope I can get first prize in this competition.

Journal 21(3/4/2013)
2 days ago, I participated in a T-shirt Designing Competition. Then I suddenly found out that my design had gotten the top rated prize, which is a Samsung Galaxy Y! And I am going to give this phone to my mum as a present!

Journal 22(4/4/2013)
Yesterday, I went to the Spring Shopping Mall and I went to the management office. I went to management office to request for a booth for the charity event, “For The Kids”.

Journal 23(4/4/2013)
Last week, I downloaded Temple Run 2. It is a game similar to Subway Surfers and Sonic which you have to run around and collect gold. Through collecting gold, you can upgrade your own character so they have higher bonuses. It is quite interesting and exciting. I enjoy the game very much.

Journal 24(8/4/2013)
I updated the android application, Subway Surfer. It is a game similar to Temple Run, Temple Run 2 and Sonic which you have to run around and collect gold. Through collecting gold, you can upgrade your equipment, special items, so they provide higher bonuses. It is quite interesting and exciting. I enjoy the game very much.

Journal 25(10/4/2013)
My dad went to Korea last week. When he came back, he bought three Starbucks Card for me as I requested for it. I collect Starbucks cards as my collections as all the cards are nice-looking and special. I will try to collect as many Starbucks Cards as I can.

Journal 26(15/4/2013)
Last week, I watch One Piece new movie, One Piece Film Z. It is a story about an ex-marine Zephyr’s family members were killed by pirates and then he decided to take a revenge on those terrible pirates. But then at last, he found that not all the pirates are bad after he fought with the main character of One Piece, Luffy. It is a touching story in the end. One Piece is the best anime ever!