In the story “l” the narrator talks about in First person through- out the whole story. The author “Sharon Flake” starts the story of with our unnamed narrator and, her boyfriend Raheem get into a fight at a street corner. They both start to question their relationship when they are done arguing. The narrator has an abusive and unfaithful relationship with Raheem. The scene caught my eye because it seemed as if the scene didn’t go with the story. Another problem that I noticed is that the way that the scene is organized is weird. The story could have been better if the scene had alternated and put together better.
I feel like the scene is realistic but where it takes place just throws everything off. Some examples of a good place that