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My biography is about Mariano Rivera, a baseball player, who, at first, was thought to have no chance in the MLB. In his first major league season, he had a 5.51 ERA(not good at all), but after 19 seasons, is considered the greatest closer of all time. For that reason, I believe that Mariano Rivera was in the same position as Copernicus. Nobody believed Copernicus and saw all of his theories as false, and nobody believed in Mariano Rivera either. Still, in the end, Copernicus was right, and Mariano Rivera ended up proving the people who doubted him wrong. Another thing common between Copernicus and Mariano Rivera was that they needed a team. Mariano Rivera needed the 8 other players in the field, and Copernicus