...My Project Ray Vance Professor James Manning CIS-499 Strayer University October 27, 2013 This is a record that I CEO Jim Gold has to offer the shareholders, showing a decided gain in the last six months, and the promise of much more to come in the next 3-5years. Despite stiff competition in several quarters, Wilcox Watch Manufacturing has shown to be far more superior to the closest competitors in nine local locations, and fourteen foreign Countries as well. However with the introduction of several hundred new products, and the planned merger with our partnering Firm: JEMCO, exciting new opportunities are opening up all around us. Also, everyone is excited and looking forward to the World Watch Exposition, for many of our already packaged new arrival sales showcases. Mission Statement Of The Company Wilcox Watch Manufacturing guarantees all design, developing, manufactures, inventory and distribution of parts, optical target design, every close tolerance creation, and laser induced thread, watch mold and fabrication processes. Including all computer aided Theodolites, Photogram Metric Systems, Tracking Lasers, plus all new managed systems of measurement and design, that are current or may emerge will only use the very best parts and design. This includes Support Management and System Design Technologies and Quality Control Safety with up to date Modern specifications. We are the...
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...all of you for reaching the final week of this course. It all goes by so quickly. Below I describe all of the work you’ll need to complete during this final week. SUNDAY-TUESDAY, JUNE 19-21 • Complete your research. By now, all of you should have finished all research for the upcoming Recommendation Report. If you haven’t done so, be sure to finish it on Sunday in order to leave at least two days to write the report. • Write the first draft of the Recommendation Report. Please do NOT begin writing this report on Tuesday – give yourself at least two days to work on the writing of this lengthy report. I suggest that you keep the assignment in front of you, and do feel free to take a peek, as useful, at the model Recommendation Reports that I posted in Content, Week 4. Seeing the models will give you a good idea about the organization, design, format, visuals, and length that work well for this assignment. Be careful, though, not to copy the style of writing from the samples – instead, use your own natural business writing style for this assignment. Also, keep in mind that the models don’t always adhere to my assignment criteria, so if you ever see that the models are not following the assignment requirements, follow the assignment and ignore the models. • Post a single file containing your first draft of the Recommendation Report in the dropbox by midnight, Tuesday, June 21. No extensions are possible for this first draft. Note that if I notice anyone...
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...have realized that the process that is involved for college writing is much more complex. For example when I write an essay for my english classes in high school all that is required is a rough draft and a final draft and sometimes you need to have it peer edited before submitting it. Differently during the writing process for a college essay I had to have 2 rough drafts revised and edited and a final draft to meet the requirements. Another big difference in the writing process is the we had to turn in a annotated bibliography that I had never been required to turn in , in any of my high school writing classes. Going through the writing process it has changed the way i see college writing...
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...Assignment 9: Draft Review Two Questions and a Draft Assignment Instructions Create a draft of your final paper utilizing your topic Linear Outline or Mind Map, your Title Page, and your Reference Page assignments. Submit the draft of your final paper for a brief instructor review. Instructors will use a general checklist in feedback to indicate where additional work is needed for your paper. To assist you in your learning and academic success, students are to submit two specific questions that you would like to pose to your instructor for detailed feedback. Students may submit up to two questions for instructor review and feedback. Please ensure to create very specific questions and provide detailed information in your question such as location in the paper or request for review of a particular section (i.e. Introduction, paper format, APA style, or in-text citations). Feedback received from the instructor should be considered and incorporated into the final paper for submission during Week 8. Prior feedback from the Title Page assignment and the Reference Page assignment should already be integrated by the student into the Draft Review assignment before submission. Examples of questions: Please review my use of in-text citations in the draft paper and provide guidance; Please review my use of the paper template and provide direction; Please assess my introduction; Please provide guidance on my use of sources and resources in the draft. Students – please note...
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... |Joseph Celizic | |E-mail: |cjoseph@bgsu.edu | |Office: |421 East Hall | |Office Hours: |Tuesday & Thursday: 4:00 – 5:30 | | |(and by appointment) | |Mailbox: |210 East Hall (my mailbox is above my name) | |Learning Commons: |140 Jerome Library | |Learning Commons Phone: |372-2823 (call ahead to make an appointment) | REQUIRED COURSE TEXTS AND MATERIALS • Kirszner & Mandell’s The Brief Wadsworth Handbook (BGSU Special Edition). 7th edition. Laurie Kirszner and Stephen Mandell. Wadsworth, Cengage Learning, 2013 • A laptop with a word processing program (Microsoft Word or Open Office) that you must bring to every class, fully charged. • A flash drive • A one-subject notebook to use for in-class writing and...
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...Create a draft of your final paper utilizing your topic Linear Outline or Mind Map, your Title Page, and your Reference Page assignments. Submit the draft of your final paper for a brief instructor review. Instructors will use a general checklist in feedback to indicate where additional work is needed for your paper. To assist you in your learning and academic success, students are to submit two specific questions that you would like to pose to your instructor for detailed feedback. Students may submit up to two questions for instructor review and feedback. Please ensure to create very specific questions and provide detailed information in your question such as location in the paper or request for review of a particular section (i.e. Introduction, paper format, APA style, or in-text citations). Feedback received from the instructor should be considered and incorporated into the final paper for submission during Week 8. Prior feedback from the Title Page assignment and the Reference Page assignment should already be integrated by the student into the Draft Review assignment before submission. Examples of questions: Please review my use of in-text citations in the draft paper and provide guidance; Please review my use of the paper template and provide direction; Please assess my introduction; Please provide guidance on my use of sources and resources in the draft. Students – please note that this is a cursory review of the draft of your final paper and your goal is to...
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...English 103 section 20 Spring 2013 Mrs. Mary Clark-Flynn Office RB 2115, office phone 5-8371 Email: mcupchurch@bsu.edu Office hours 11:00-12:oo, MWF, and on Thursdays by appointment Home phone 286-4895: Do not call after 9:00 p.m. General Information BOOKS Read, Reason, Write: an argument text and reader; ed. Dorothy U. Seyler The Purdue OWL Ball Point online URL http://goo.gl/nMnnb MATERIALS Two Pocket Folders Flash drives or what ever you need to save your work Course description: English 103: Rhetoric and Writing (3) Introduces and develops understanding of principles of rhetoric; basic research methods; elements, strategies, and conventions of persuasion used in constructing written and multi-modal texts. Prerequisite: appropriate placement. Not open to students who have credit in ENG 101 or 102. Course Goals * Understand that persuasion—both visual and verbal—is integral to reading and composing * Understand how persuasive visual and verbal texts are composed for different audiences and different purposes * Develop effective strategies of invention, drafting, and revision for different rhetorical situations and individual composing styles * Compose texts in various media using solid logic, claims, evidence, creativity, and audience awareness * Integrate primary and secondary research as appropriate to the rhetorical situation * Develop strategies for becoming more critical and careful readers of both their...
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...questions must be uploaded to your tutor via the upload facilities provided by Moodle. Assignments How to Submit to your Tutor via Moodle Moodle Guide for Students Moodle Guide to Submitting: Draft Assignments Final Assignments Submitting Your Draft Assignment 1. You will find your assignment submission link for each unit in your study materials – usually at the top of the study materials or at the bottom. The submission link is called “Assignment Instructions” – please see an example of the assignment link below: 2. Clicking on the “Assignment Instructions” link will take you to this page – see below – if you cannot see this section below – you need to scroll down the page. 3. To upload your draft assignment, you need to click on the “Add submission” button – see below 4. Clicking on the “Add submission” button, you will be taken to the ”File submission” page – where you can upload your draft assignment. To add your assignment (file) you need to click on the page icon in the left hand corner of the file submission box. See below: 5. Clicking on the “page icon” will take you to the “file picker” page – see below: If you do not see this view – then you need to click on the “Upload a file” option on the left – see above. To upload your file (draft assignment) you need to click on the “Choose file” button. This will allow you to find your file on your computer. Once found you need to double click on the appropriate file. To complete the upload...
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...movie “Good Will Hunting” because this is one of my favorite movies of all time. Q: Which brainstorming technique did you use and why? Ans: I have used several techniques for brainstorming for this movie essay. I started off with the free writing and then I break that essay into different parts. I mapped and clustered the whole essay and then developed a final copy. Peer-review process: Q: What was the most challenging aspect of the peer-review workshop? Ans: The most challenging aspect of the peer-review workshop was to analyze the essay very carefully and then giving an appropriate feedback on the essay. Q: Did you find the peer-editing process helpful? Ans: Yes, I found the peer-editing process very helpful because it gave me an opportunity to learn about writing an essay without any grammatical mistakes. Q: Did your peer editors offer you helpful advice? Ans: Yes, they did offer me very helpful advice about my writing. They read my essay and took out the grammar mistakes and they also gave me a constructive feedback on my writing skills. Q: What were some of their suggestions toward revision? Ans: They suggested me to look out for my grammar mistakes and to use the dictionary to improve my vocabulary and grammar skills. Q: Did you accept all of their suggestions? If not, which ones did you overrule and why? Ans: I accepted all the suggestions because they were very constructive and beneficial for my writing skills. Revision process: Q: Reflect on...
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...Entering this course, English 214, the perspective that I had is that it would not be as different from my prior English class, English 114. As I began to learn about the course and its structure, it did become clear that both English classes would not be too distinct from one another. For instance, this course would also revolve around your own topic of choice, in which throughout the semester your writing would be based on that topic. I personally like this structure of the class, since I am able to grow as a writer, reader, and critical thinker while studying and researching a topic that interests me. My understanding of writing at the beginning of this course, I believed that the only way that I was going to improve would be through...
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...Ashley Eller December 12, 2011 UCWR110-022 Final Reflective Essay On Writing My favorite author and literary genius, Stephen King, in his memoir On Writing wrote, “Write with the door closed, rewrite with the door open.” This is possibly the best piece of advice I could ever think to give to a struggling student with a paper to write. Your first draft is always for yourself and your own personal reflection. In your second draft, “open up the doors” and write for everyone else who will be reading it. Without this solid piece of advice, I don’t think I could have ever expanded on my writing at all. Over the years, my writing career has hit its peak in junior year, and I have plateaued from there. Since being a UCWR student, I have had the chance to expand my range in my writing skills. From this course, I have learned to expand my writing ability to subjects I would never have broached before, allowing myself to heighten my awareness of the world around me as well as hinder my procrastination. In the beginning of the year, I was very disappointed I would have to take this course. From my previous experience with accelerated English and rhetoric courses, I felt I would be bored and disappointed with the classroom experience. Over the course of the semester, I have learned I was wrong. While in the beginning my engagement level was poor, I was still interested by the current events brought up in class. Some of the biggest topics we discussed (Occupy Wallstreet, Penn State...
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...[pic] [pic] [pic] [pic] Unit F922: Child development The portfolio work you produce for this assignment will be assessed to decide your mark for this unit. You need to produce evidence based on the study of a child up to the age of eight years. NB: To enable you to fully cover the requirements of this unit, the child you choose should be at least eight years old as it is difficult to project the development of the child. Your evidence needs to include: A description of two patterns (milestones) in each area of development of children, described from birth to eight years explaining two methods of monitoring development An explanation of the factors that have influenced the child studied and how they have affected his/her development, comparing their development with the norms Research relating to two roles of play and how they can be reflected in the development of the child studied Records of the planning of a learning aid for the child studied to use and an evaluation of the effectiveness of the aid and the benefits to the child studied. (You will use a different child under 8 years for AO4) PATTERNS OF GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT (AO1 A) Identify the key stages and describe in detail two patterns (milestones) of development for each of the following: Physical growth and development (suggest 1 dev & 1 growth, eg gross motor skills & teeth) Intellectual development...
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...Jessica Gibson I think my essay could have been a lot better than what I did. My essay lacked sequential order. I feel like my sentences could have been a bit more complex also. I think my topics did address my thesis statement the correct way. My paragraphs did not have a strong closing to support my topic. My essay only had little coherence; It flowed in certain portions of the essay. I think the order of my essay could have been revised from less important to most important. I think I did have strong evidence to support my topic but I could’ve used more vivid language. I also think the essay did reflect the evidence and explained the importance. I didn’t use many transitions in the essay neither. I think I could have used more transitional words to help my essay flow better. My goal when rewriting my essay is to be as vivid as possible. I admit my rough draft had many errors but I will try my best to avoid those errors when writing my final draft. My final draft will have better sentence structure and more transitions to help my essay flow better. I will try my best to support my topics in each paragraph so my essay. My final draft should be fresh and interesting. I think I didn’t paste myself for my rough draft and was trying to get the essay done. I must learn to paste myself and take out time to get all my thoughts together to improve my essay. I will try to use some of the techniques from the class to have a successful...
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...essays for my English classes. At first, I did not have a reliable writing process. I would free write a rough draft and turn it in as a final draft. I would also write last minute instead of using the time to create a well-thought essay. I focused more on passing a class rather than boosting my writing skills. Now that I am in college, I take writing seriously. Throughout the years, my writing process has drastically changed. As a writer, I will continue to advance my writing skills. Prewriting is significant when preparing for an essay, although this step is most of the time ignored. The process of writing is just as important as the writing itself. Prewriting is great for writers to have an organized essay. Sectioning the writing process can make writing less stressful and gives the writer more time to go back and improve their paper. My writing process consists of brainstorming, outlining, rough drafting, and peer revisions....
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...Essay Drafts Step #1: Prewriting & Outline Directions: Complete all of the elements of the prewriting; otherwise, the content of your piece will not be accurate. My Topic: What do I believe about abortion. My Attitude: Abortion should be a decision that a female should make for herself. My Purpose: To inform women that it’s your choice to choose. My Thesis Statement: Abortion should be a woman’s choice. It’s her body, she shouldn’t be forced to feel that abourtion is murder. My Audience: 1. How much does my audience know about my subject? I feel my audience know a little bit about my subject. 2. Age? Gender? Race? Social Status? Location? Religion? Women ages 18-30 all races, social status, and religion. All over the world. 3. Where does my audience stand on the issue; are they Opposed or Neutral? My audience is neutral, not sure. Outline: 1. Abortion can be applied per the situation. A. Rape B. Too young/not ready 2. Bringing a child into this world, that’s unwanted for whatever reason can suffer. A. Child can be mistreated B. Abuse/not love 3. A right to choose is a very important right. A. It’s her body B. Her choice 4. Abortion other then adoption is a good option to me. A. Some women can’t afford children. B. The children will end up in a crowed foster home unwanted. 5. Step #2: Argument Essay Rough Draft Directions:...
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