English 101
Bo Jin
First essay outline
1, I understand what the love is when I was young and got the full of love from many people. All kinds of love make me be a caring person. I know I should have duty of filial piety to my family members, should friendly to my friends, should help stranger who needs help. (paragraph 1)
2, Family
A, my family structure. My father has 2 brothers and 3 sisters. Therefore, it is significant for me to understand the meaning of family. Because of those big family members, I get the full love from them. There are also traditions or rules we should obey in family. (paragraph 2)
B, my cousin. Because of big family, I have many cousins. And there are something happened between one of my elder cousin Zach. In Chinese spring festival, I eagerly asked Zach to the iced lake where we are prohibited by parents. Then happened a accident to me, but not seriously. But Zach still was punished and take responsibility for all of that accident for me. Then I know he really loves me, the youngest child in this family. (paragraph 3)
3, School.
A, I am the leader of soccer team. That let me understand how important the friend is. How important the friendship is. For each soccer game, I not only care about game, but also care about every member of my team. Minimize the accident or hurt from the game. (paragraph 4);
4, Hospital (my father’s workplace)
A, Patient in the hospital. In my childhood, the most unforgettable thing in my memory is that the moan from the patient and sob from the patient’s family. I usually go to my father’s office and look around the ward, and I can understand how helpless they feel when suffering the disease.(paragraph 5)
B, My experience to help those patient. I does what the nurses usually do. One day when I am playing in my father’s office room, there happened a emergency for a patient. Then I tried to do what I can do