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I had stepped up to the line. My stomach was rumbling with fear louder than when rocks roll off a cliff. I looked over at the hundreds of dedicated and successful people who chose to do this sport. Then I think, “How could I be this good?” Then the fear hit me like a garbage truck. At that minute I hear a dude on a microphone. He is talking about the same old boring rules that we hear every race. I zone out and then I hear the gunfire and I’m off.

The sprinting was the hardest for me. Going against the wind was like trying to run underwater. Then it started to sprinkle. I had been lucky to get in the middle of the pack because they blocked off the cold and stinging rain. We had gotten to our usual pace now. Which that wasn’t as slow as you may think.
I saw it out of the corner of my eye. We had reached one of the many many hills. I had certainly killed that hill but it had gotten harder to stay with the pack. They had even started to speed up. I look down and make sure my stride is long and consistent. I look up and they start to move. I am using everything I have left to go with them. It’s like driving a car with no fuel. I felt so empty but I knew I needed to. …show more content…
All I could think about was quitting. That is all is wanted to do. I said to myself, “I can’t do it, there is no way I can finish this.” That was the worst mistake of my life. I felt my stride get shorter and I just fell behind. Everybody was screaming, “Go, Go!” Then I hear a voice. The voice was winded and very quiet. I looked up and it was my running teammate Laney! She was waving her arm and waving. She was the one who got me back. It was weird. My stride was faster and longer but I didn’t feel the pain I had felt. My legs felt fresh. I mean don’t get me wrong I wasn’t feeling like I could go run a marathon after that but it just changed after she had told me to come

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