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The first time I saw human remains, I'd gagged on the pungent scent that had lodged itself in the back of my throat. However, as I stared at the corpse at my feet, it no longer bothered me. I’d had that job for eight years, and I still wasn’t sure which was worse.
“There’s something so beautiful about death,” I sighed as I knelt on the ground, kicking up dust as my feet slid backwards. “Don’t you think, Alby? I mean, it’s tragic, but it’s also so symbolic.”
The sun sat directly above me in the clear sky, scorching every inch of exposed skin as it watched me work. A bead of sweat rolled down the back of my neck, making its way down my back. I cringed as the soft cotton of my new underwear absorbed it. Great, I thought. It’s only eight in the …show more content…
“No. Look at the sternum and both fourth ribs. They all have incisions congruent with stabbing and cutting. I’m almost positive that—”
“This is murder?” an unfamiliar voice asked, finishing my statement.
I looked up, taking in the body belonging to the voice. He was tall with a pointed chin and eyes the color of my latex gloves. “Who are you?” I asked as I shielded my eyes from the sun. My knees cracked as I stood up, an ache shooting through my own bones. I’m too young for arthritis, I thought as my joints cracked again.
“I,” he said as he flashed his badge, “am Special Agent Kennedy Graham. Now, before you tell me there’s no possible way I knew this was murder before you—unless I am the murderer—I should let you in on a little secret.”
I nodded, peeling my gloves off. My sweaty skin clung to the latex, creating an unsettling slurping sound as I removed the gloves. “Which is?” I asked as I stuffed them into my pocket.
He began walking away from me, motioning for me to follow. “They don’t call in the FBI if it isn’t murder.”
Laughing, I shook my head and walked towards him. “You, Special Agent,” I said, “should know that we are here because this is a national park and it falls under the FBI’s jurisdiction. Are you

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