The final position paper helped me grow as a writer even more than the previous two essays we have done. The reason I feel this way is because as I was beginning to write the paper I caught myself analysing what I was writing from the beginning, and not just waiting to look back at the end. My writing style matured also while writing this paper. I realized what words to avoid and found acceptable words to replace the ones I could not use. These are reasons I believe I grew as a writer from this one paper. Even though I did grow as a writer through this paper it does not mean it was a smooth writing process. Researching was not hard because I already had most of my sources and new exactly what I was looking for in the new articles I had to find. Once I had all of the sources I needed to write this paper is when the challenges appeared. I had troubles finding a good introduction to start my paper, and my thesis was not turning out how I wanted it to. After I finally got an introduction that was decent I focused on writing my body paragraphs. Organization was something I had struggled with in the past, so I spent time deciding what order I should write ideas in each paragraph. This was frustrating at times because it seemed like no matter how I organized the details it did not …show more content…
I struggled with getting to the point in my sentences the most. This makes my writing become wordy, and confusing at times for people to understand what I was trying to say. As I was going through the writing process I tried to avoid doing this; however, when I went back to revise my essay I realized I still needed to be more clear. Once I saw that I started back from the beginning reading every sentence deciphering whether it needed to be reworded or not. Even though this was a place I struggle in writing I feel it has got better because now I can detect when I do it while before I did not know anything was