...Review Checklist*  *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150 What is the main point of this essay? The main point of this essay is, “Even though it’s the new art of today, I don’t agree with the cosmetic surgery because people take it to the extreme and it can be dangerous.” What is the greatest strength of this essay? The examples that were shown throughout the essay were excellent. The situations and circumstances of the examples were so intense that it was very logical in the way it supported the main point. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. The introduction grabs my interest because it is a very strong subject. It makes people want to read on because of the severity of the subject. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? This essay is well put together. Everything is subject-related and pertains to the main point. She did an excellent job. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I honestly believe that the essay is complete. There is nothing wrong with adding even more examples though just to make the subject that much stronger. Where is the writing unclear or vague? This essay makes sense...
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...Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist* |What is the main point of this essay? | | | | | | |The main point is that media in the court room is not there push a trial one way or | | |the other. | | | | |What is the greatest strength of this essay?| | | |The intro is has good strength because it makes me want to read on and see what the | | |author thinks about this topic | | | | | | | |Does the introduction grab your interest and| ...
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...Associate Program Material Peer Review Checklist* |What is the main point of this essay? |To explain the social and emotional development of children in their early years; and | | |the key role parents play in a child’s mental growth. | |What is the greatest strength of this essay?|The essay is written in chronological order, and it guides you through the stages of a| | |child’s life. So that you can have a better understanding of how they develop at each | | |ages. Great way to explain the information. | |Does the introduction grab your interest and|Yes, the writer begins this essay by asking two questions, which peek my interest. I | |make you want to read on? Explain your |wanted to know exactly how my social skills as a child would affect my social skills | |answer. |as an adult. This is a topic you usually wouldn’t think about, so it made me curious | | |to know more, especially having children of my own. | | | | |What material does not seem to fit the main |There is no material in this essay that is inappropriate...
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...seem to be appropriate for the audience? I believe paragraph 3 does not really fit the main point of the essay in that it rambles and does not flow well. It is difficult to know exactly what the writer is saying here. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. Paragraph 6 needs more details talking about our political figures always putting a time frame on improving our education system. I believe they could expound a little more just how our political figures do try to improve. This paragraph does not flow in order to let you know where they are going with the whole political aspect. Where is the writing unclear or vague? Again I believe paragraph 6 is unclear- too many different thoughts. It doesn’t come together What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? My favorite piece of this writing is the paragraph and the chart talking about the...
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...A College Education Will Get You More Money Sherri Coleman English ENG 101 March 14, 2010 Mary-Angie Salvá-Ramírez, Ph.D. In order to secure a good job, one must have a college education. A college education ensures you with a good job with great benefits. A college education, also, gives you more confidence in what you can accomplish. A college education also gives you more of an option with choosing the job that you want. A college degree opens the door for many opportunities, financial stability, a comfortable lifestyle, and emotional security. A college degree gives you more peace of mind knowing you have a degree in a specific field. With a much secure feeling on being able to afford the finer things in life. Having a college degree gives you an enormous advantage in the work field with training and more pay. Unlike a high school graduate, you have more leverage. You can choose your places of employment and your salary opposed to having to settle for what is open and in most cases, minimum wages. When you have a college education, you have the option to choose what job you want. You do not have to settle for a job because that is the only job that you can get. You can have your pick and chooses because you have the qualifications. You will not be looked at like you just did enough to get by. You will be looked at as the person who wanted more education to better yourself for a job. You will be looked at as a person who knows what you want and have taken the steps...
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...Native American Medicines Axia College University of Phoenix Native medicine has always excelled in the treatment of wounds and surgery, such as mending broken bones etc, a branch of medicine that during the pioneer era was a most barbaric torture in western medicine. Hygiene was poor and anaesthetics unknown. Barbers doubled up as surgeons. Even today Western medicine is indebted to indigenous medicine for the most commonly used anaesthetic derived from Coca .A plant that South American Indian doctors have used for this purpose since pre-Colombian times. Indeed there are numerous plants of both south and North American Native origin that have enriched modern western herbalist and medicine. However, in Native traditions it is not just the plant that makes the medicine, but foremost the power of the spirit that governs the plant. A plant as such would be considered useless unless it were gathered and prepared with due respect, prayer and rituals with which the healer seeks the support of the plant spirit to help him affect a cure. Native American Medicines: Even though, Native American Medicines have no real threat to our bodies. Are Native American Medicines better for us than Traditional medicines with no side affects because Native American Medicines have been around for years and are still being used today and Native American Medicines have no real side affects like traditional medicines do. The most important...
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...Homeschooling: Understanding choices of education. Amanda Shaffran Communication 220 Terri Shurtleff October 31, 2010 During his first major speech on education, President Obama said, “The future belongs to the nation that best educates its citizens” (Aasen, 2010, p.4). Education makes most people think of public schools and the structure of schools. The complaints of public schools or “traditional” schools are under- funded, overcrowded, unchallenging curriculum, and student peer pressure. Traditional schools also work in a fixed time slots and do not leave enough time for parents and children to have enough time together. Along with traditional schools being in a fix time, the curriculum is in set times, therefore, parents have turn to alternative education. Fixing the problems of educating children, the place of education is somewhere to start. For example, private schools that can be expensive with cost being around $400 per child, charter schools that basic curriculum is in the form of public schools but under no guidelines and accountability to the state, or homeschooling that has been taught for centuries in an environment based on student success. Homeschooling provides a better education than traditional school...
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...Gun Control Concealed Weapons Laws in Arizona Vernon Daniels Jr. Com 220 Jewel Jackson “Gun Control” Concealed Weapons Laws in Arizona Arizona has some of the least restrictive gun laws in the nation. It also has one of the highest rates of gun deaths in the country. But, how closely are guns and violence connected? The answer, like much involving guns in America, is complicated. Even though there is a right to bear arms, gun control laws in Arizona are in need of some work. There have been various shootings that have attributed to this need, adding the fact that carrying a concealed weapon is open to just about anyone only intensifies this need. “Arizona Fired Up Over Year-Old Weapons Law” is an article from 1995 in the Christian Science Monitor that discusses the stance that Tiffany Williams took regarding concealed weapons. Tiffany Williams is one of some 31,000 Arizonans who had decided that their safety hinged on toting guns, and thus had completed a 16-hour firearm-safety course required at that time to carry a concealed gun. Non-supporters of concealed weapons laws worried that as guns continue to show up in more hands, the greater the chance of violent incidents while supporters of concealed weapons laws argued that allowing people to carry firearms - openly or not - is a basic right, and gives people a greater sense of security. Tiffany...
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