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The grass beneath his paws was cold, as it was always this time of year. Autumn's refreshing draft of cool air filled the valley, kissing the river in front of the Husky. The shades of orange, red, and brown around him were typical of course, but there was no harm in hoping these colors would not accompany the fall season this year. The feeling of vibrant energy with dull decay had always struck a chord in his chest. "Is this really necessary Jack?" he shouted further down the river bank, glaring down a red fox pawing softly at the river's current. "Calm down pup, this'll only take a minute if I can just lay a paw on a single fish," Jack shot back quickly with obvious frustration stemming from his voice. His fur was already drenched at his previous attempts, but this did not stray him from his persistence. The Husky had already begun lying down on the bank's shore, paying little attention to Jack's assurance of success. He let out a sigh and licked his front paws. He'll never learn, why does my closest friend have to be the only fox around who can't even catch the smallest of fish? The sound of a splash rang out down the bank. He rolled his eyes knowing this couldn't possibly be the sound of a fish having been caught, but the sound of Jack slipping into the stream. Frustrated at the sound of Jack's obvious failure, he stood to his paws once again, bitter his rest was interrupted so soon. The pack had ordered them to bring back dinner, or risk their own hides in he case of failure. The sun had begun to set in the west, hidden behind the hills surrounding the valley. I'm sick of this waiting game, it's almost like punishment. He walked along the shore towards Jack, oblivious to the mixture of mud and water soiling the fur on his paws. "Get out of my way Jack, just give up already. It's obvious if I let you continue, then I'll be starved tonight," he said to the wet fox emerging from the stream. "That's not fair Miles," the fox whimpered, "the task was given to me so I could prove my usefulness." "The only thing you're useful for is a meal for the mountain bears, and maybe as a guide on how 'not-to-fish' for your food," Miles snorted as the fox shook out his fur behind him. "Watch carefully, you might even learn something." He extended his paw over the surface of the water slowly, eying what fish may lurk underneath. He held his other paw over his lips, motioning silence to Jack. With a swift motion, Miles' paw struck the glassy surface of the stream. Raised in his right paw displayed a red salmon. "Aha! This salmon's color almost matches the signs of embarrassment on your face," Mile's said as he noticed Jack's reaction.

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