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It hurts- my legs in agony, my lungs burning, blood pounding through every vein. Moving together; all at once pushing, driving down, and pulling. “It is a team effort”, I though in vain, hoping to feel a little less. “Give me more” She yelled, asking us for even more seemed insane. But we answer: we push harder, we ignore the pain, we remain strong. Every fibre of my body says to stop, every part of me screams in torture, my brain says “you can not”, but I must endure further. At first it will be ok, I will make it, but then it starts slowly building in my legs; a pain that burns more with each stroke, a tightness sets in, each muscle feels like it will tear, each vein will rupture. Stopping- there is no such thing; a break- not until the very …show more content…
Seemingly effortless, we glide across the water. The roar of the crowds is now audible as we approach the final stretch; the last two hundred and fifty metres, the sprint. An immense pain envelopes us as we pour on our last exertion. It is a tremendous effort, but we willingly, happily, agree to this strange means of torment. Every stroke brings us closer to the finish, each stroke we push harder. Now at a strenuous sprint; our rate rising, our power elevating, our fatigue setting in. Pushing away the agony, reaching for the finish line each demanding stoke. It might be that we share a goal, it might be our individual hope that helps us to persevere and dismiss the desire to end our pain. There is a voice in the back of my mind, it is reminding me of my team: we have trained together, we have put in the hours, we have the need to win, we are all in this together. “50 left!” our coxswains voice declared, “you won’t let them take us?!” she questioned, urging us forward. We are getting closer, it is invigorating, a new energy emerges amongst my crew, we know we will make it. The horn sounds, we crossed the finish, a loud sigh is audible and then laughter. Second place just completed the race, we are first; the champions! Cheers break out, we did

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