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University of Phoenix Mateiral
Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet
In this course, you will write a 350- to 700-word Personal Responsibility Essay that includes the following:
Define what personal responsibility means to you.
Explain the relationship between personal responsibility and college success.
Include a preliminary plan to practice personal responsibility in your education.
Using the Center for Writing Excellence resources, provide the thesis statement and informal outline for your Personal Responsibility Essay assignment.
Thesis Statement:
1. Even though why at thirty one?
A. more job opportunities with the company I am in or other business opportunities 2completeing every assignment because I have been successful in life why not school A. taking every class one day at a time
3. My son needs to see that if I can do it so can he
Informal Outline: Personal responsibility can mean many different things to people. When I think of personal responsibility the first thing that comes to mind is my job. I am the plant manager of J.P. Specialties we make contamination barriers for concrete applications. I am responsible for everything that goes in or out of the factory. That is complete in every way with no errors and that it is up to the standard I want associated with both mine and the companies name. I have to be responsible for my actions to be successful in life as well as college. With the skills and determination I have acquired while I was in the military I strongly feel there isn’t any task I can’t handle or complete. I want to be successful, more than anything to show my son with a little hard work and determination anything is possible even at thirty one. The owner of my company approached me the other day with a concerned look on his face he asked why I was going to go back to school? Why now? Are you not happy with where you are now? The answer I gave him probably wasn’t how he thought I would answer. I told him that after all the considering and debating while making my decisions to make this step was not why? But why not? I have been successful in business why wouldn’t I take those same principles that have made me successful and put them to make me successful in my personal education. What’s the worst thing that could happen? I could get better I like the sound of that. That should be one of the most satisfying things I could take from this. I plan on taking every assignment given as a new challenge with open arms and completing each on no matter how hard. This is my as you know first assignment I have received in my college experience and shockingly I have had a hard time at starting and completing this task. I have sat in front of my computer taking web classes all week on writing. It is now Thursday and I am completing this assignment with a little concentrating, determination and responsibility for the things that I want I will complete my bachelors in business management. 