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Submitted By helloimrich
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Richard Han
AMCULT 301
Response paper to From the Lost Diary of Treefrog7

This was a story unlike any of the ones that I have read before. There was no main central theme of heroism, sensuality, or even a twisting plotline as usual. This was just the story of an average couple on an adventure. Following Treefrog7 as she is pregnant, along with her husband Morituri36, was an adventure that I (as the reader) could follow and really experience the story in a “live-action” fashion through the lens of the diary. One part of the story that I enjoyed was the different field entries of the different bugs Treefrog7 came across in her journey. Instead of just embedding the details of the encounter in line with the text, the author takes a break from the text in order to create the feeling of an actual diary/log. The story also is filled with hyperlinks to these entries, which makes it feel more like a journal. The story follows with the very “mortal” Treefrog7 as she is constantly bothered by terrible sleeping conditions, pesky bugs, and eventually has a messy birth scene for her daughter. The entries following her labor are very detailed and descriptive, and allows the reader to relate because it is something we experience in life. Contrary to previous reads, filled with magic, brute strength, and texts to vicariously experience life through, this text is simple and relatable. It is a different experience to read a fictional story about barbarians, magic kingdoms, and spaceships, compared to reading a fictional story about a husband and wife, a troublesome journey, and giving birth to a child. Another interesting part of this story was the ending, closing out the story with the discovery of the M-CPU flower, but ending the story with a non-conclusive discovery. At the end of the story, it seems as though the adventure itself was the reward, rather than the discovery of

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