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When you're comparing the items that John Freyer sold on e-bay and items that other people sell on e-bay there is a huge difference. The descriptions on e-bay are simply just so objective. When looking at them I saw that the person describing the item, in this case a steel ring, just listed facts about it. In addition, I am pretty sure I read the sentence “NO ENGRAVING FOR THE RING” at least three times. On the other hand, when I read John Freyer's description he gave so much detail on it. It wasn't really on the appearance of the ring, but more about the story behind the ring. He talked about where it has been, and how he got it, and where it has been. John was more subjective when it came to his descriptions. There was just more detail and …show more content…
It just matched it's picture perfectly. There was nothing inconsistent with he description. Although, they described it twice, if not more, and both were the same thing. John didn't even talk about the ring. He just talked about the experiences of the ring, and how he received it. John should have added at least a little but of description at least to really show what it looks like and make it pop.
John is trying to reach out towards an audience that wants something more than just "316L STAINLESS STEEL (HIGHEST QUALITY STAINLESS STEEL)." John wants someone that wants more than just a simple buyer to buy this ring. He wants someone to know it has a story. To know there is something behind that not so pretty steel ring. As where the e-bay seller just wants someone to buy it. That is simply the best way to put it.
Honestly, if I were to buy one of these ring just reading the description I think I would just buy the e-bay ring. I know that seems pretty boring of me but it is more like I kind of don't want a story with my ring. I want to be able to make my own story with it. I don't want a story under the story. As well as, like I said before John didn't talk about the ring's appearance once, so how am I supposed to know what the ring looks like? I don't think many people would like to buy a ring they know nothing

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