CONTENT | Good/Excellent (45-39) | Fair/Competent (38-31) | Deficient (30-0) | Development(CCLO # 2)37/45pts | * Major points are stated clearly and are well-supported * Content is persuasive and comprehensive * Content and purpose of the writing is clear * Thesis has a strong claim. The audience is clear and appropriate for the topic * Supportive information (if required) is strong and addresses writing focus | * Major points are addressed but clarity or support is limited
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parents are in the best position to help fix childhood obesity since they are one of the reasons why it’s happening. I agree with Weintraub about how it’s the parents who need to take responsibility for their children being obese. California called the epidemic of children being obese a state emergency because it’s that important and we need to stop or try to stop what’s happening. Some people are not looking at the one of the biggest causes of childhood obesity. The parents, not anyone else, are the
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Change4Life: Government initiative to reduce Childhood Obesity in England Background Change4Life, a public health program in England, effective since January of 2009 and organized by the Department of Health is the country’s first national social marketing campaign to reduce obesity (NHS, 2009, pp. 13). More specifically aimed at families with children under twelve years old, the initiative seeks to reduce childhood obesity and foster healthy and happy children, who in turn grown into happy and
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In the United States, childhood obesity has been rising rapidly across all population groups. However, research has shown that the rates are higher among those of a lower socioeconomic status and/or racial/ethnic minority group (Yi et al., 2008). This leads not only to health problems both early and later on in life, but also to certain psychological implications. Both outcomes will be examined in relation to socioeconomic status and race – specifically among African-Americans of a lower socioeconomic
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Obesity rates tend to be higher and increase more rapidly over time in the child. Obesity is a serious concern in the US public school, especially from Arkansas to Illinois. “Fat letter” are send home to parent that it will help alert the parent about their child health status. However, when the letter sends to the teenager which does label their weight, and it can cause them to be eating disorder, to using pills, to losing balance of nutrition, to leading bullying in school or to entering the privacy
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Summary & Response Essay Instructions For this assignment, you will read three articles about the topic of child obesity. The first article is called “Childhood Obesity.” It is located on p. 102-110 of your textbook. The second article is also called “Childhood Obesity,” but that one is written by Dulcie McBride. You will find the third article yourself, and you must submit it to me for approval. In the first paragraph, you will summarize the topic, and the last sentence of your first
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A. Summary of Situation The situation that will be evaluated in this analysis will be; is there a region of the United States in which childhood obesity tends to be more prominent? This will be done to show areas in which the Government, insurance companies and healthcare institutions should focus campaigns for healthy living to reduce future healthcare cost. The data that will be utilized to answer this business question will be the percent of children ages ten to seventeen that are overweight
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it is with obesity within our own youth. Over the last few century’s, as America moved from rural communities to urban environments, Americas youth has become more obese. Following closely behind Wales, America is the second fattest nation in the world. “Obesity and other closely related overweight conditions are the fifth leading cause of death worldwide” (Lobelo 1). The fattening of Americas youth is a terrifying epidemic that must change for the betterment of the country. Obesity is more than
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tackles the topic of obesity, a problem of truly epic proportions where misinformation is a major driver. According to former Surgeon General, Richard Carmona, quoted in the film: "Obesity is a terror [threat] within; it's destroying our society from within and unless we do something about it, the magnitude of the dilemma will dwarf 9/11 or any other terrorist event that you can point out." Presently, a full two-thirds of Americans are overweight or obese. Childhood obesity has also skyrocketed
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Is Child Obesity Really a Form of Child Neglect?! Shaylah Bradley Professor Gilmore ENG 215 February 10, 2013 Child Obesity Did you know that one in six children from ages two to nineteen are obese, which puts them at a 70 percent chance of becoming obese adults (American Heart Association, 2011). Many people confuse the terms overweight and obese so let me clear the air. According to the Center for Disease Control and Prevention, or CDC (2012), overweight is defined as having
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