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their social, economic and housing status in a much better position. One study (2013) says “27.4% of those aged 16-19 were volunteering, compared to only 18.9% of 20-24 year olds” (USBL). That means college student likely less volunteering in the community compare to school student, but these number should be increase not decries because college student are smarter and understand better then school students therefore, college student should be more responsible than school student. We should keep that
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the organization, such as reporting done by journalist. 2. Why does crowd sourcing require a large, "undefined community" to work? Why not a small, defined community of passionate people who you know and have worked with before or with whom you are already friends (think Face book communities which are smaller, and defined)? Crowd sourcing require a large undefined community because it is said to be more accurate and concise. Large aggregates produce better estimates and judgments than smaller
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Community and Population Health Windshield Survey Directions: This assessment is a foundational exercise for you to learn about your environment and explore where you live. Take some time to intentionally explore your county. Look at your county as the home and the place of work for the county residents. While driving through your community, stop for coffee or have lunch in a neighborhood. Find a place to eat where you can sit down as part of the community. You may want to walk around your
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For any business that depends on the community to survive, Greyston Bakery feels it is important to let everyone know that they support their community and its people. It is important that companies give back to the communities that support them in their business endeavors and Greyston Bakery does it well. They not only hire local people from the community to work in their bakery but they give back in other ways as well. Greyston funds other community services such as after –school day care, low-income
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Community Evaluation Community Evaluation The purpose of this essay is to compare the similarities and differences between five different communities. Represented are Bland County, Virginia, Cedar Rapids, Iowa, Dunedin, Florida, Rio Vista, California, and Washington, D.C. The definition of community according to Bartle (2012) is, “The concept of community is a set of interactions, human behaviors that have meaning and expectations between its members. Not just action, but actions based on
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“to generate organized community effort to address the public interest in health by applying scientific and technical knowledge to prevent disease and promote health” (Stanhope & Lancaster, 2011, p. 7). The article “Flu deaths expected to rise,” the public health is in jeopardy of a flu epidemic. In the article, “Officials confirm pollution worries,” the community faces a potential health issue. A community health issue is an issue that impacts the lively hood of the community. The goal of public
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Directions: Community and Population Health Windshield Survey This assessment is a foundational exercise for you to learn about your environment and explore where you live. Take some time to intentionally explore your county. Look at your county as the home and the place of work for the county residents. While driving through your community, stop for coffee or have lunch in a neighborhood. Find a place to eat where you can sit down as part of the community. You may want to walk around your
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The University of Evansville community can be seen as a large group with many subcultures. All of the people within the community experience social integration because no matter where they go after life at the University of Evansville they will always be tied to the university. Examples of this include when an alumni interviews for a job, the employer will always see that they graduated from the University of Evansville. Another example would be when a subculture such as softball holds an alumni
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Community Profile Team A~The Aristocrats ETH/316 April 1, 2014, Dr. Charles Parker, Ph.D., CMEC Team A~ Community Profile In this day in age we live a fast paced life style. I t doesn’t mean we do not coupe and interact with others. We live in a community with different types of people, ethnicity, gender, lifestyles and all of us have different ideal goals to accomplish. In all we have the obligation to be socially responsible and be considerate of others. In this document
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