During the beginning of my divorce I had contemplated living in my car because with my income I was not able to afford the rent and because of this experience I find myself emotionally drawn to the topic of affordable housing. Incidentally, I’m a homeowner candidate for habitat and my home construction will start in June of this year. Affordable housing is a real problem and can happen to anyone at any given time, a lost job, a divorce such as in my case, and/or an income problem. The most enlightening
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the countless essays we had to write. I believe that Mrs.Miles really focused on our writing skills, which I am awfully grateful that she did. Mrs.Miles has assisted in my growth in writing; as my grammar has improved, including the use of commas, colons, and semicolons. In fact, I am now knowledgeable of the fact
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Strengths: According to the instructor feedback, my personal understanding, and peer critiques, my essay’s strengths include a solid understanding of the purpose of the article, clear development of the thesis statement and sharp recognition of the audience. According to the instructor’s feedback, my introduction is the strongest part of my paper. My introduction seems to be well-organized, clear and concise. It also contains all the necessary components for a further analysis of the article showing
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analysis essay I have gained a significant amount of confidence in my rhetorical analysis writing ability. The main reason that I felt more confident was the experience I had from the Chipped Beef essay. I was able to go back and learn from my mistakes on that essay and correct those. That allowed me to be more confident in my writing ability and write a essay without questioning myself and knowing that I knew the correct way to do it. Many areas contributed to my success in this essay, but my most
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Sadly, this is the last reflection for EDCI 7761. Frankly, I can say reflections were one of the best part of this class for me. Reflections helped me to write and synthesis of general thoughts about all readings, class discussions and things that I learned or I surprise. They will be really good sources when I need to remember something in this course in the future. I would try to do that for my other classes too. In the last two weeks, we mostly spend our time with Strategy Share Presentation
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Starting my writing process can be hard, through this semester of taking composition 1 I have learned that there it is always better taking your time reading your papers to revise them better, also I have learned to just get what I am trying to write on to the paper even though I may not make sense at first. There are many different ways for me at becoming better at revising my papers. One of the ways that I learned was though the this course, is by looking at each sentience indevisionully. This
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the brain between the left and right sides, something absent from printing and typing. The College Board found that students who wrote in cursive for the essay portion of the test scored higher than those who printed. As a result, writing makes you very smart. A few years ago, the College Board found that students who wrote, in cursive for the essay size of the test scored bit higher than those who wrote, which experts think is because the speed of writing in cursive allowed
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Thank you for taking your time to provide feedback on my manuscript. I took the suggestions seriously and carefully and revised the paper accordingly. First, I have revised my abstract to highlight the importance of my study. In doing so, I have highlighted the race aspect of the paper and clearly stated major findings from the study, concluding with my contribution to the scholarship of intersectional identities. Second, I have strengthened my discussion of intersectional identities on page 5
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Reading Memoir In a recent survey by Statics Brain Research Institute, fifty-seven percent of books started aren’t read to completion. I must say I am one of those who start books and don’t finish them. People read all the time. Rather, for information, for entertainment, for instruction, or for guidance. It could be a newspaper, a blog, a text, a book of all kinds or email. As I consider my reading experiences, I realize they represent the odyssey I have traveled, leading me to my current academic
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Baker, G. P. Sulla the Fortunate: The Great Dictator; Being an Essay on Politics in the Form of a Historical Biography. New York: Barnes & Noble, 1967. Print. This hardcover biography was found in Fresno State University’s Henry Madden Library by first searching through their website for Sulla book topics. The purpose of this source is to inform and educate mainly college-level students on politics during the Roman republic and how Sulla became to be who he is remembered as today with a language
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