Final Assignment Misty White COM/155 University Composition and Communication I 1/16/11 Paul Neuhausen Final Assignment I think that paragraph five is an example of more effective writing than paragraph one. In paragraph one the sentences are very short. It is very hard to see were the writer is going with this paragraph. All of the sentences sound the same. I can get lost trying to rearrange the sentences as I read so I can get the writers point. Paragraph five is the total opposite
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We were assigned these essays because they are researched argumentative essays. Our final paper coming up soon will also be an argumentative essay. The first essay I read was "Coloring the Workforce" by Valerie Keys. I found this essay to be very helpful. The essay not only talked about African Americans struggling in the workforce, but it focused on African American women. The essay gave very relevant examples and statistics which helped with its validity. There was also an abundance of sources at
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answers (red font, highlighted yellow, and indented) under the questions, and keep this worksheet format. Papers not in this format will not be accepted. All papers must be typed. Uploaded handwritten papers will not be accepted. Be specific in all responses, fully explain your answers and use the terms associated with the concepts. If you have any questions, ask before the due date. Papers are to submitted as attachments in the Self-Presentation Audit Drop box by 11:30pm Tuesday February 25
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options. One example that the instructor used was what was a way in which to make broccoli and cheese healthy? Many of the students said such things as: steaming the broccoli, putting butter on it instead of cheese, and one even said to just eat the broccoli plain. All of which are appropriate responses to his question. During which this was going on there was several students throughout the classroom that were being very disrespectful to the instructor. They were talking while he was talking, bombarding
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Matthew, Grammatically speaking this paper is written well. They're strong vocabulary choice and I think your topic is an interesting thesis to write about. Being someone that also has a birth defect June syndrome. I can relate to the experiences of near-death and the feelings attached to that. However I feel like it's more of a humblebrag then a genuine appreciation for life. I don't think there's enough examples of you seeming grateful about waking up every morning. I feel like you told more than
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while the receiver is the destination. However, although it seems pretty easy, it quite isn’t. There are several different types of communication. One particular type of communication that is very important is Demonstrative Communication. In this paper I will discuss the meaning of Demonstrative Communication and how it can be effective and ineffective, as well as signs of positive demonstrative communication as opposed to negative demonstrative communication between the sender and receiver. Demonstrative
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Content: Introduction………………………………………………………………………………….3 1.Pronouns................................................................................................................................4 1.1 Personal pronouns...........................................................................................................5 1.2 Possessive pronouns........................................................................................................6 1.3 Reflexive pronouns......
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4. Suicide 5. Different ways to learn language In this paper, I will argue that __As a student, Lovey can speak Standard English if she focuses on, but she does not like to say it when she talks to friends because she thinks it is not necessary. Even though she felt ashamed about her family, she loves more._ Examples from the text that help to prove the thesis (provide page #s): 1. “No one will want to give you a job. You sound uneducated
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Audience Analysis paper Cherice Smith COM 285 June 13, 2010 Rod Thirion Audience Analysis paper Communicating with people is an important necessity for any business. In a sales position, communication takes on a greater importance because there always a constant interaction with other people that takes place where a sales associate must be able to present the facts and persuade customers to buy whatever it is they are selling. The audience of any communication is the engaged or
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Standardized Testing To write a good informative paper, writers need to have three basic criteria in their paper: examples, statistics, and credibility. Right now the big concern in the education system and amongst school administrators deals with the issue of standardized testing. In Don W. Hooper’s 2001 paper on “Accountability for Student Success” published by the American Association of School Administrators, he states that if planned properly the accountability system can greatly improve
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