A good employee is someone who returns more to the company than what he/she gets paid, flexible and willing to learn. To begin with, a good employee is who returns more to the company. For example, he/she takes responsibilities for his or her tasks and completes them well. He/she goes extra mile for the success of the company. And Also, he /she is ready to work overtime. Second, a good employee is flexible any time with his /her schedule. For instance, he/she is always is ready to work both in the morning, afternoon and as well as during holidays; that means who has open availability. Third, a good employee is, who is willing to learn new skill. To illustrate, companies always give training to their employees. So, Therefore, a good employee ofen takes the advantage to learn new skills and techniques. Finally, a good employee is who has a several qualities to do his/her job efficiently and in timely manner, while maintaining a pleasant and polite attitude.

Correction and suggestions * Please rewrite the topic sentence; it’s a bit vague. I cannot give you a hint how to do it because it should meet you assignment question. * All words or punctuations that are marked on red are to be taken out; I just left them in the paragraph so that you can see the errors. * Those on green are correction. * Don’t begin a sentence with conjunctions ( FANBOYS) * Use word varities ( avoid repetitions); you used “ for example three times in the paragraph. If it’s possible, look for synonymous for “ a good employee” when you mention it for the second time in the paragraph. * If you can replace “a good employee” with “Good employees,” you avoid “her/she” and replace with “ them” as object. You can use the pronoun “they” to replace “ good employees”. * Please don’t use two verbs in one sentence; for example, you used two verb in this sentence ” To begin with, a good employee is who returns more to the company.” Is and returns are verbs in this sentence. In addition, “Who” is unnecessary word. * You need to use “ who to describe a noun.” For instance, Azeb, who won a lottery, wants to navigate the world. The sentence in green “ who won the lottery” describes Azeb; we can take out this sentence” it provides additional information about Azeb. Therefore, “ Azeb wants to navigate the world” is a complete sentence that has its own verb “ wants” and object “Navigate the world.” * I think you are in a good position; if you have more detail, add them when you make the revision. Don’t afraid to make mistakes because it’s when you make mistakes you can learn how to fix them. * If you have anything concern, please forward it. * Good luck, see you soon
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Allergies are more common in developed countries because of high insufficient exposure to dirt which, contamination situation most part of insusceptible system is involved to allergies. Also, associated with unhealthy life styles, could be a secondary component partially responsible, at least to some extent to the development of allergic diseases. In addition, environment also contributed allergies in developed countries