...I liked reading this section because it was very suspenseful due to the author’s use of syntax and word choice. Hillenbrand starts a new paragraph in a way that causes the reader to crave for more, despite the next line being just centimeters a way. In addition to this, her description of the race was like a transcript from a live announcer at the time of the race, and her account of the story makes me feel as if I were there at the track in real time. I was impressed when reading War Admiral’s race against Seabiscuit because it demonstrated Seabiscuit’s flexibility to race against any competitor even if his usual jockey was not racing him, and it also showed how adaptive Seabiscuit was to his environment since his win conditions were not guaranteed in the...
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