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You’re Next BEEP BEEP BEEP! I find myself waking up freezing with the alarm blaring into my head as my hand knocks it off the desk. I let out a groan that it’s morning already. Doing this has motivated me to get out of bed to start the day. I drowsily fall off the bed and open the curtains and feel the warmth of the sun on my back. Something didn’t feel right. It was still dark out. I turned around with a chill down my spine. ‘’Is anybody there?’’ I asked in the room. I was only answered with silence. I soon noticed that the house was freezing. The only weird thing about this is that… it’s summer in Florida, and my thermostat isn’t that cold to the point where I could see my breath. I made up my mind to go downstairs to check …show more content…
What have I done wrong? But then it hit me. About 2 weeks ago, I was on a hiking trip with my one friend, Tony. He told me about how he felt like something was watching him in his sleep. The thing watching him was described as a 6’’4 man with a beard, top hat, and glowing eyes as red as crimson. Tony told me that the name of the stalker is Bad. He watches Tony sleep every night. If you were to wake up with him watching you, he will simply say, ‘’Go to sleep.’’ At times, you will wake up with pressure on both of your shoulders like he was standing on you, watching you sleep with his cold, red eyes. I shrugged it off like a joke back then, telling him that it was a good story, but Tony looked like he was dead serious. I don’t know what happened to Tony ever since the trip, but now I am starting to think that it’s becoming a reality. I thought that maybe Tony’s curse had somehow been passed on to me. I should’ve asked him questions like how he was going to deal with it. As I opened the door, the overwhelming atmosphere of murderous intent blasted towards me. I was chilled to the very core. With every step I took down the stairs, the more intense the feeling got. By the time I made it to the last step, I had forgotten that the power box that controls the electricity was across the room about 24 feet away. There were boxes and covered up lamps in the way. I will have to

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