Thompson, Manny Dr. Hansen
English 101
15 March, 2014
Writer checklist: With each essay submitted, a Writer checklist must be included. This checklist should be submitted in the same document as your essay.

Writer’s Checklist for Writing a Narrative

1. Is my title and introduction enticing? Yes

2. Is my thesis effective? Yes

3. Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? Yes

4. Are the events presented in a logical sequence? Yes

5. Have I used transitions to help the sequence of events flow smoothly? Yes

6. Have I used dialogue (if appropriate)? Yes

7. Have I used a consistent point of view and verb tense? Yes

8. Is the point of my narrative evident? Yes

9. Have I ended the story satisfactorily? Yes

10. Have I proofread thoroughly? Yes

11. Does my introduction clearly state my thesis and give the reader an indication of the direction my essay will take? Yes. 12. Are my topic sentences and body paragraphs clear and well developed? In paragraph number three, I would not start a topic sentence with because. Perhaps a simple reword would give a stronger statement. 13. Have I fully supported my thesis with ample supporting details and examples? In paragraph two, I would put a sentence before the quote, drawing the correlation between internal faith and the basis of drawing faith from multiple religious sources. 14. Have I used a sufficient number and variety of sources in my paper? Yes. 15. Are all of my sources properly cited in the body of my paper according to MLA format? Yes 16. Does my conclusion effectively summarize my main points and restate my thesis in different words? Yes 17. Have I carefully proofread and revised my paper for sentence variety, word choice, grammar, and punctuation? The quote in