I'm taking an English Writing Composition class in this semester.
I have to submit my descriptive essay. but, This is the first time since I've learn English ever.
If it is possible, i would like to get any response and feedback from others.

i think it is gonna be worth for all. ^^

ER, Emergency Room

Suddenly, quiet loud siren is coming from the distance. Medical and security staffs are complaining their stubborn chief who always accepts emergency patients even though there are not enough seats and argue with other department’s chiefs every day. They started checking a possible bed, emergency kits sterilized with a saline solution and defibrillator if they do not act now, they would be kicked with a chief shoe’s sharp heel.

The ambulance comes to emergency room. We open the paint door peeled. It must be deadly serious. Inside the car there is a patient laying on the bed moving made by steel with an emergency medical technician who is sitting on him and strongly pressing him with folded his hands not to be dead now. He looks so exhausted and seems to get sweet because he did not want to give the patient’s live up. He is keeping his eyes from inside emergency room and slowly takes a breather.

An intern doctor and nurse come to the patients and start cutting the patient’s all clothes with knife to sterilize as soon as possible his chest, skin and mouth. The intern stained with dirty white gown and tangled hair looks so tired when he tries to put an injector to bleed a vein. It fails repeatedly. The nurse next to him consults him to let him out and she puts tube inside a vein. She gives an IV (Intravenous) and puts some medical seeker on his second finger at the.

But the heart monitor shows no sign. They notice an another residency doctor to help them and they set preparing CPR(Cardiopulmonary resuscitation) with defibrillator and medical gel. Waiting for others who can help the patient jumped onto the patient and put CPR on the center of his chest repeatedly and regularly. When the doctor comes to the intern, he got reported symptoms and treatments which are made by him and sets all up. He holds and grab on the two electric charger handles of defibrillator and the nurse next to him helps his chargers to be pasted with medical gel. The intern comes down to ground by him and the residency doctor orders the nurse to input 100KJ. He puts the chargers on to his right and left chest. No wave sign on the heart screen. He does it again with 150KJ, 200KJ again and again.

During the medical treatment, his family comes to emergency room and starts crying and yelling at doctors. Security guards keep them away from him. However, staffs do not have to keep an attention from them. The most important duty is to save the person. It is the last volume of defibrillator 300KJ. If it does not work then they have to pronounce his death. Fortunately, with the last try, the wave what they want shows on the screen. They let IV be injected through his vein. they get released and go to his family to say his statues.

This is what is happening in emergency room every single day and every single minute.