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I can finally go to the town called, Forever. The one I hear has everything from,blue skies,to fresh grass,even to the soft, cold breeze. It’s Jan. 1,4001,and I never thought that my parents would let me leave our town called, Ever borough. My parents are so stricted, I wonder why they would let me go away so far.
I pull up to a big, old, black and white gate. Beside the gate stood two tall, strong men. They asked me for my pass. The pass lies in my hand, uncrumbled and untouched. I give the pass to one of the men,who was wearing all black clothes. The gate creeps open with a whistling sound. It was cold there and I had never felt such a breeze like it had. The two men took me to a place where I would be staying. They said “welcome to …show more content…
I knew that he might be there working today. When I got there I saw Devin. I asked him where he went last night,and he said that he had to come back to the museum to work night shift. An older looking man came up to me. The man said his name was Mr.Right. He said”Saphire Mist you may never leave this town”. At first I thought he was kidding,but then I realized he wasn’t.
He told me to come with him to a training room. I said ok,but I only said that because I was afraid to say no. We pulled up to what looked to be a school. He told me I will be attending to this school till I turn nineteen. He said “Saphire you will never be able to talk to anyone outside of the town”. I was terrified,and didn’t know what to do.
I told Devin about Mr.Right and how no one could ever leave the town. He told me that he already knew about it,because Mr.Right had told everyone. I asked him why we couldn’t leave. “Saphire”,He said,”We can’t leave,because there is a war”. “What” I …show more content…
We both tried to figure out different codes,puzzles,and remembering different things. The whole class period seemed hard,because you have to be very smart to understand it.
I didn’t have any class periods with Devin. I heard a bell noise and a screaming noise. I ran down the hall to see what it was,when I saw blood,dark cold blood,and a wall missing from the school. A bomb had landed on the room where the young kids were. I knew now that it was time to fight and there would be no mercy.
I heard Mia screaming,she was close to the room when they dropped the bomb ,and she had took as many kids as she could. I finally found her,crying with three other little kids. Then Devin and Mr.Right came followed by many other people. Mr.Right said that it was time to get ready. I finally understood why no one ever came outside at night time,because it was too dangerous. I now know why there was an injured lady in the hotel,she didn’t fall down the stairs, someone must have hurt her,someone from the other side must have done

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