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“My Mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun”

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Christopher Kirkhart

Proffessor Guirguis
Polk Community College
Lit-1000-46898
22 September 2013

Christopher Kirkhart
Professor Guirguis
LIT 1000-46898
September 22, 2013
“My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun” In “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun” Shakespeare wanted to show that one’s love does not have to be portrayed as a picture of ultimate beauty to be loved ("My mistresses eyes are nothing like the sun"). The diction in this poem is Shakespeare stating that beauty is not all about how one looks or even smells. He knows that not everyone is flawless, but everyone has flaws and should be known for their true beauty which is on the inside. He doesn’t state anything about her that isn’t true, yet he portrays her exactly as she is, his true love. Even though he is commenting on her flaws he does it in a relaxed tone. This makes the poem pleasant to read and helps to see it for what it truly means. Shakespeare’s diction has plenty of attitude by describing beautiful and wonderful things, then he states that she is the total opposite of them. She is not white as snow but a brownish gray, roses are a nice red and white beauty, but not her, she’s the opposite ("Mabillard"). “love to hear her speak, yet well I know that music hath a far more pleasing sound,” his attitude is confident by telling us that she is a normal person that we can relate to, not a fake perfect person that does not exist in our society. This diction helps us all to understand and follow the poem, almost as if we are reading about ourselves. This poem is full of imagery, Shakespeare used this poem as a way to poke fun at types of romantic poems of this time period. For example, Shakespeare writes, “If hairs be wires, black wires grown on her head” instead of writing something like, “The hair’s bright tresses, full of golden glows” ("My mistresses eyes are nothing like the sun"). Both are very descriptive and imaginative, the main difference being that Shakespeare’s poem is true and not fantasy. “And in some perfumes is there more delight, Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks” this paints a beautiful picture to the readers, we all can smell are favorite perfumes and can picture just the opposite, like a smell of a dogs breath. The theme of this poem is teaching us that not everyone is perfect. By reading this poem it makes sense to love someone for who they are, rather than not loving them for what they don’t have. He wanted to write about someone who was dark and troublesome, with un-goddess-like beauty that could break the stereotype of that perfect woman. Again, Shakespeare felt that love sonnets did not need to portray picturesque women of beauty. He believed that his Dark Lady, with her “dun” complexion and “black wire(s)” hair, should be written about because she feels real ("My mistresses eyes are nothing like the sun"). This poem goes against the grain of the typical picture perfect woman who other authors choose to lie about. I chose this to write about because I can relate to these things, not only am I not perfect but I have a fiancée who isn’t either. True love isn’t all about glitter and gold and tangible things. The theme of this poem teaches that the appearance doesn’t really have much to do with who the person truly is, take the time to seek ones true beauty which is deep within.

Mabillard, Amanda. "Analysis of Shakespeare." Sonnet 130. http://www.shakespeare-online.com/sonnets/130detail.html, 27 02 2010. Web. 22 Sep 2013.
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