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“I hear banging on my bedroom door and it crashes to the floor. I run to jump out the window but one of the men catch my leg and I swing hitting my head right on the glass and it shatters to pieces,” I tell jumping around as I try to keep my sister entertained. My parents need to stop spoiling her and maybe she’d learn that crying isn’t the way to get everything but at least if she’s distracted with my silly story. “A man picks me up and shakes my body before throwing me into a table,” her eyes start to closing and soon she’ll be asleep. I pick her up and place her on the mattress that’s on the floor singing a quiet lullaby. I lay down beside my sister falling asleep hoping it doesn’t get too cold tonight or we will both freeze.
I wake up spiders quickly crawl around the floor laughing at me; I glare at their little legs. Rubbing my eyes. I have no idea where I am anymore, this is probably just a dream. I stand and twirl in my white dress and fall onto the bed letting my body bounce up and down. I hum to a song I heard on the radio. I notice a boy is in the room too just watching me. I couldn’t help but stare at the scars on his face the pattern created by them …show more content…
He holds me closer my face squished against his chest
“Never again, I promise I’ll save you from now on,” He says “and your parents and the doctors won’t hurt you. We are escaping forever.” We both know that we may never escape this place but I know I’ll die trying.
“Lunch time, let’s go” Pink dress says as she skips by my room. I hurry to follow her not totally sure where I’m supposed to go and she seems to know the way. I find this big room and walk to the end of the line to wait for food. More and more people seem to be sitting down but the line hasn’t moved at all. I just wait and finally I sit on the floor people are already done eating and I’m still waiting in this huge

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