Sanket Ghartan
College Communications 2 (ESL)
Section Code – 018
Prof. Evelyn Holmes

1) After going through reading it can be conclude that all the ideas are very well organized and examples are given in a perfect form. The writer provide the examples of quickspeak by using some short sentences such as “bt u no wht I meen”, which in correct form can be written as “but you know what I mean”. These type of examples sometimes confuses the reader. No, there’s no time line of historic have been used as writer only talks about quickspeak emails which people are doing from long time and even keep on continuing that but no historic timeline have been clearly used. People sometimes used short messages which doesn’t explains all information such as there’s meeting at 9 on Tuesday but what meeting is about? At what time it will be scheduled whether a.m. or p.m., who is organizing a meeting? What’s the purpose of this meeting? What results can be expected from this meeting? Are the comparison/contrast which explains that meeting is organized but purpose not mentioned clearly because of the quickspeak? This happen because writer may be in hurry or busy in something or have a habit of writing short and quick messages. Moreover, by writing a message in a step wise form always attracts a reader like first planning an introduction that gives the idea to the reader about what they are going to read? Or what the purpose of reading, than proper outline should be maintained as it makes the reader to show some interest in reading, next step is using bulleted points whenever they are necessary as it guides the reader as well as help them in understanding and at last, Conclusion should be done that covers all the paragraph main message in short and clear form so that it can work as a revision to writer. Yes, it is effective because it explains the reader that what they are reading and what they can expect. Through this, readers can analyze their own interest because if message is type in a clear form than it helps them in understanding as well as help them in going to the depth whereas quickspeak messages always confuses the reader and as a result reader always loses their interest in writer as well as in reading too. Therefore, it’s necessary that messages should always be organized in a step wise manner and in best form. 2) In the following article writer talks about quickspeak emails where he uses various examples, give suggestions that how to deal with this kind of messages and also explains that how a perfect message can be written. All these things made the article easy to read and follow. In paragraph 4, there are transitions that helps reader in assuming about what he/she is going to read or what writer is talking about. For example, transitions like many, without, now, at least have been used which helps in guiding the reader about reading and help them in assuming the purpose of reading. Moreover, examples in a sentence form also been used like there’s meeting in week at 9 but what 9? A.m. or p.m.? Meeting purpose? All these things are not mentioned clearly because of quickspeak. Yes, they are effective as it gives a break to a sentence. What is more, these transitions helps in giving a perfect beginning to the sentence. For an instance, transition like “many” describes the number of cases writer’s talking about. “Without” explains that what is incomplete in the above sentences. “Now” explains about the time period and “at least” describes the length of the messages. All these transitions are very effective because they made the short length of paragraph and also made them complex that helps reader in understanding the article.