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Study Session at Alicia’s

Transition:
General Description:
Alicia is finishing cooking while hosting a study session with our Student, Gabby and Quentin. She’s a bit nervous, as the in-laws are coming over that evening (on short notice). They talk about the challenges of writing for college courses.
Dialogue:
Alicia

I’m so glad you all came over. Thanks for letting me cook during our study session. My in-laws told us at the last minute that they’re coming over later this evening, and I can really use your moral support!

Gabby

No problem, Alicia. Everything smells wonderful; I’m sure your in-laws’ visit will go just fine.

Quentin

Yeah, and I really needed this study session, too. I’m a little anxious about my current writing assignment. Maybe I can create a computer program so that my paper writes itself! I could really use some help like that.

Student Text Bubble

Writing for college courses sure is challenging.

Gabby

It’s challenging, but the reward is well worth the effort. Quentin, you should take your assignment seriously. I’ve found that, in my classes as well as in my marketing and communications field, the quality of your writing really matters.

Alicia

Gabby’s right. Lots of people fear the writing process, but as long as you’re enthusiastic and positive about it, you’ll be successful. And Quentin, if you need help, just use the CWE.

Student Text Bubble

What is the CWE?

Alicia

It’s the University’s Center for Writing Excellence. You can access it through the
University Library. The site offers a variety of resources to help you through the college writing process successfully.

Gabby

There’s something for everyone. They even have an English Language Learners section. Student Text Bubble

Sounds like the CWE has a lot of resources for writing help.

Alicia

Why don’t we take a look? I can show you around the site.

Quentin

Sounds good.

Gabby

Sorry to duck out, but I have to pick up my daughter from day care. See you later! Student Text Bubble

Bye, Gabby.

FADE OUT.

Scene Title:

Demonstration with Alicia

Dialogue:
Alicia

So, let me turn this thing on, and let’s take a look at the CWE.

Quentin

Wow – that’s a nice unit, Alicia!

Alicia

Thanks. My husband got it for me and the boys. I use it more than they do, though – it’s really nice to have it in the kitchen!

Student Text Bubble

So, how do you get to the CWE?

Alicia

It’s easy. First, log in to eCampus and navigate to the University Library. Now, just click the Center for Writing Excellence link.

Student Text Bubble
Student Text Bubble
Student Text Bubble

Now, what is the CWE again?
Okay. How can the CWE help with grammar and writing?
Cool. Does the CWE let you practice your skills?

Alicia

The University’s Center for Writing Excellence, or CWE, is an online writing lab that helps you with your academic writing and your time. It’s free for Students, and offers tools and resources that can help strengthen your writing and help you adhere to University requirements.

Alicia

The Grammar and Writing Guides section of the CWE provides easy-to-read resources, including sections on Grammar Mechanics, Writing Style and
Plagiarism. And, as Gabby mentioned, the Grammar and Writing Guides contain helpful information for English Language Learners. Each of these sections includes definitions, examples and interactive quizzes. Also, there’s a Grammar
Glossary; a great tool for referencing the meanings of basic grammar terms.

Alicia Yes; you can practice your skills with the CWE. Look, let’s open up the Writing
Style guide. Here, you can click any of these links to learn more information about that topic. Then, click the Mastery Test links to assess your knowledge.
It’s a great way to practice!
Student Text Bubble

That’s really going to help with my writing.

Quentin

And you know what else is cool? Sorry, Alicia…can I drive for a sec? Check out this Skill and Drill link. I’ve used this before, and it really improved my writing!
See? You can take each quiz to see how well you understand the grammar and writing topics. I usually get at least three right in each one!

Alicia

That is a great example, Quentin! To see a comprehensive list of links to tools like these and a wide variety of help offered by the CWE, I suggest clicking on the Tutorials & Guides link under Writing Resources on the CWE home page.
Just look at all that’s offered at the click of your mouse!

Quentin

Nice! I’m going to click through every one of those links later. The CWE is going to help me write all “A” papers from now on!

Student Text Bubble

Alicia, I want to find out more about the CWE, but I know you have company coming, so we should go.

Alicia

How about this: Tonight, I’ll send you an email with a link to the CWE so you can check it out for yourself. And then, let’s meet at the coffee shop tomorrow morning to see what you’ve learned.

Student Text Bubble

That’s a plan! Let’s leave Alicia to her in-laws, Quentin.

Quentin

Okay. Thanks again, Alicia! Dinner smell’s delicious!

Alicia

Thanks! Talk to you later.

FADE OUT.

Scene Title:

Guided Tour of the CWE

Email from Alicia

Subject: CWE Link
Hi there,
Thanks again for coming to the study session tonight. I wanted to dash this link off to you before my in-laws get here.
Here’s the CWE link: https://ecampus.phoenix.edu/classroom/ic/cwe/home.aspx Go ahead and take a tour! I’ll see you in the morning at the coffee shop. How does 7:30 sound?
Have a good night,
Alicia
FADE OUT.

Scene Title:

Coffee with Alicia

Alicia

Good morning! Did you get my email and check out the CWE last night?

Student Text Bubble

Yes, I did. Thanks, Alicia.

Alicia

Great! So I can drill you now about where to find certain features and how to use them?

Student Text Bubble

Sure!

Alicia

So, tell me how the CWE can help you.

Student Text Bubble

The CWE site contains tools and resources to help Students with grammar and writing mechanics, including information, guides and tutorials, and interactive quizzes.

Student Text Bubble

On the CWE site, you can sign up for in-person sessions with tutors who help you write your papers.

Student Text Bubble

The CWE offers grammar books for purchase so that you can learn the rules of grammar and improve your writing.

Alicia

What can you do in the Grammar and Writing Guides section?

Student Text Bubble

The Grammar and Writing Guides section has an interactive chat window where you can ask questions of live tutors – those tutors are the grammar and writing guides.

Student Text Bubble

You can submit a paper for a thorough critique of its grammar and writing according to University standards.

Student Text Bubble

You can find more information on writing style, grammar mechanics, plagiarism and writing for English language learners; and you can also take interactive quizzes on each main topic. And, look up terms in the Grammar
Glossary.

Alicia

Where do you find the Mastery Tests for skills practice?

Student Text Bubble

The Mastery Tests are in the Skill and Drill section.

Student Text Bubble The Mastery Tests are in each section of the Grammar and Writing
Guides page, including Writing Style, Grammar Mechanics, Plagiarism and
English Language Learners.
Student Text Bubble

The Mastery Tests are in the Common Errors in English section.

Alicia

What can you do from the Skill and Drill link?

Student Text Bubble

Practice your writing skills by writing short skill-and-drill papers and submitting them for credit.

Student Text Bubble

Practice your writing skills by taking skill-and-drill quizzes.

Student Text Bubble

Look up items in the Grammar Glossary.

Alicia

Speaking of drills, I think that went a little easier than the drilling I got from my in-laws last night. They have some different ideas about the classes my sons should be taking, and…oh, is that your phone?

Quentin’s text message text
From: Quentin

Hey! Freaking out about my paper. Can u meet me at the park in 30 mins 2 look at it b4 I submit it 4 review? Thx.

Student Text Bubble (in the form of a return text message to Quentin) Sure. C u there.
Alicia

Oops…look at the time. I’ve got to get to work. Don’t want to be late for my own class! It was nice talking to you this morning.

Student Text Bubble

Thanks, Alicia. You, too! Have a nice day!

Scene Title:

Call with Gabby

FADE OUT.
Student Text Bubble

Hello?

Gabby

Hi – it’s me, Gabby. How are you doing?

Student Text Bubble

Pretty good. I’m at the coffee shop, and Alicia and I were talking about the CWE.
I have some questions, but she had to leave for work.

Gabby

Really? Well, that’s what I was calling about. What do you need to know?

Student Text Bubble

So, what’s the purpose of the CWE?

Student Text Bubble

Okay. How does the Grammar and Writing Guides section help?

Student Text Bubble

But how do I practice my grammar and writing skills?

Student Text Bubble

What about the Skill and Drill section?

Gabby

The CWE offers free tools and resources to help you learn or polish your grammar and writing skills. Through the links on the CWE, you can find information about grammar and writing to improve your papers and save you time. Gabby The Grammar and Writing Guides section of the CWE gives you information like definitions and examples – and interactive quizzes – in areas for
Grammar Mechanics, Writing Style, Plagiarism and English Language Learners.
There’s also a Grammar Glossary. Gabby Practice your grammar and writing skills in the Mastery Tests links in each section of the Grammar and Writing Guides.

Gabby In the Skill and Drill section, you can take a quiz on various grammar and writing topics to test your knowledge of them.
Student Text Bubble

That’s what I needed to know! Thanks, Gabby. Now, I have to go meet Quentin in the park and go over his paper with him. He’s a little bit panicked about it.

Gabby

Well, good luck with that. Talk to you later!

FADE OUT.

Scene Title:

Meeting Quentin at the Park

Quentin

Hi! How are you? Boy, I’m so glad you could come out here and help me with this. I have to admit that I’m a little panicky!

Student Text Bubble

No problem. What do you want me to look at?

Quentin

Well, take a look. Here’s my paper – don’t ask about the content – it’s about a few video games, so it might seem a little weird. But there’s a few sentences I’d like you to critique, because I’m not sure if they’re grammatically correct.

Student Text Bubble

Sure. What’s the first one?

Quentin

Right here.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin again. No; I think it’s a run-on sentence, actually, now that I look at it

Quentin

You know what? You’re right! I’ll rewrite that.

Quentin

How about this one?

[Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “At 3 p.m. I will be feeding the ducks. At the park.”]
Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble Nothing is wrong with this.
Quentin

No – actually, that’s a fragment.

Quentin

You’re right! I’ll fix it.

Quentin

How does this look?

[ Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “They is both happy.”] Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin Hmm…according to what I read on the CWE, that’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.
Quentin : Oh man. You’re right! I’ll change it.

Quentin

I think this sentence is okay.

[Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “This morning
I watch TV before I drove here.”]
Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin

tense error.

Oh, boy. I think it’s actually a verb form and

Quentin

You’re right! I have to rewrite that one.

Quentin

What do you think of this?

[Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “The bank robber escaped from the bank. With some money.”]
Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin

No…looking at it now, it looks like a fragment.

Quentin

Oh man. You’re right! I’ll fix that one.

Quentin

Anything wrong with this one?

[Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “That brand of car goes very fast, which is why many people wants them.”]
Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin

Uh oh…now that I’m looking at it again, I think it’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Quentin one. : I was so close, but you’re right! I’ll change this

Quentin
How about this one?
[Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “Grammar quizzes can be tough there is a lot to learn it is hard to remember I find that it gets easier with practice.”] Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin

Actually, it looks like a run-on sentence.

Quentin on.. I think you’re right! It does run on…and on…and

Quentin
How about this one?
[Screen shows Quentin’s laptop with a section of a word-processing document reading: “Can I call you back? I am try to escape from the giant monster attacking the warehouse.”]
Student Text Bubble

It’s a fragment.

Student Text Bubble

There’s a problem with subject-verb agreement.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a verb form and tense error.

Student Text Bubble

It’s a run-on sentence.

Student Text Bubble

Nothing is wrong with this.

Quentin

tense error.

Oops…now I see it. It’s actually a verb form and

Quentin

You’re right! Let me rewrite it.

Student Text Bubble

I hope I was some help.

Quentin

Of course! I really appreciate it. That CWE is worth revisiting whenever you think you need a quick review of this grammar stuff! That’s what I’m going to do! Gotta run…I’ll catch you later.

FADE OUT.

Scene Title:

Email from Alicia

Email from Alicia

Subject: Understanding and Using the CWE
Hello there,
I’m at work right now, but I wanted to see how your understanding of the CWE is coming along. So, I have a question for you.
Would you please elaborate on your understanding of the CWE and comment on one weakness in your writing, and how you intend to use the CWE to strengthen that skill deficit?
Thanks!
Alicia
Alicia Ward
Social Studies Teacher
Central High School

FADE OUT.

Scene Title:

Email from Gabby

Subject: Thank you!
Hi! I just wanted to thank you for your help last night! My presentation at work was awesome! Don’t worry, I didn’t use sock puppets after all. Hey, I was wondering if you could share with me the thesis statement that you’re working on in class. I would love to see what you have so far! Thanks!
Gabby
Gabrielle Ramirez
Digital Marketing Manager
LiveAds, Inc.

FADE OUT.
END OF LEARNSCAPE.

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