...Literary Analysis Rough Draft of Happiness I. Introduction: The Other Wes Moore is a story about two boys with similar backgrounds and similar situations, growing up in similar neighborhoods. In fact, at first glance, the reader might be compelled to view these boys as the same, and wonder what caused their lives to end up so differently. To that question the answer is easy – the boys had one major difference that drastically influenced their futures: their mothers. Thesis: Wes Moore wrote The Other Wes Moore to show that if children do not have strong parental figures they will not be successful in life. Body Paragraph 1: A. Topic sentence: There are several situations in which Wes’s mother, Mary, does not provide the guidance that her son so desperately needs. B. Context: After skipping school and partying with his friends, Wes comes back to his house visibly intoxicated. Mary and her boyfriend seem to think that Wes’ state is pretty entertaining, and they make fun of him for it. Quote: “Mary laughed, watching him squirm. ‘Well, at least now you know how bad it feels and you will stay away from drinking,’ she said” (Moore 62). C. Evaluation (3-4 sentences) – evaluate quote and link back to your thesis statement: Instead of providing some sort of punishment, or even sitting Wes down and talking to him about his substance use, Mary brushes off the situation. Mary chose to ignore Wes’s substance abuse because she didn’t think it was a big deal. Instead, she allowed...
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...I think that it was important to reflect on the Wes Moore’s because their childhood was much a like in a lot of ways and there was some different as well. For example, they way they are the same is that they both grew up in the Baltimore, Maryland. Another example, is that both Wes Moore’s mothers where the sole provider and they where both raised in fatherless homes but that’s where they are different the author Wes Moore father named Westley Moore died when Wes was three years old from acute epiglottis. But with the other Wes Moore father named Bernard was never in Wes life because Bernard was an alcoholic. How or what was the most significant influences on the Wes Moore’s? For the author Wes Moore family was a great influence but the most...
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...The Other Wes Moore “I sat back, allowing Wes's words to sink in. Then I responded, "I guess it's hard sometimes to distinguish between second chances and last chances"(Page 67). In "The Other Wes Moore" the environment of both Wes Moore’s was completely different from each other. They both made some stupid decisions over time but who is perfect? It is expected of everyone to make some mistakes, in my opinion the main difference in the Wes’s was mostly due to their education. The author had a pretty good life due to the great educational changes he made in his life, like when he had been put into military school, and ended up making a career out of the military. Also being put through better schools when he was younger and having a great support system. Whereas the other Wes had it harder in life due to being put through worse schools and not having a support system at all and ending up getting involved in the drug scene and robbery scene. The other Wes also had friends who were bad influences in his life. At one point in his life his teachers thought he had a learning disorder and would not succeed, but his mother knew better due to the fact that he remembered the lyrics to a song he had only heard a couple of days ago. The other Wes took his friend Levy up on his offer of job corps, and joined it. To conclude the author had a successful military career and the other Wes ended up in prison for life for a murder. My thoughts is that the author loved his life after making...
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...similar histories and an identical name: Wes Moore. One of us is free… The other will spend every day until his death behind bars...” (Moore, XI) In The Other Wes Moore, the author, Wes Moore, and the other Wes Moore both grew up in similar, yet different, circumstances and had completely different outcomes. This captivating narrative demonstrates how the choices you make, make you. In the introduction, the author Wes Moore validates this statement by saying, “The chilling truth is that his story could have been mine. The tragedy is that my story could have been his.” (Moore XI) The author, Wes Moore, shows the readers that a person’s environment, circumstances, education (or lack thereof), choices/decisions, and many more important factors can determine one’s success or failure. Society holds great power and influences the choices you make, and eventually the paths you decide to take in life. Two people with the same name grew up in similar backgrounds and similar neighborhoods, and yet had different fates all because of the choices they decided to make. The author Wes Moore, born to a poor family, struggled academically and was sent to a military school. While there, he was forced to adjust to the change of environment. In the end, the author Wes Moore grew up to be a Phi Beta Kappa graduate of John Hopkins, a Rhodes Scholar, a veteran, a business leader, and a White House Fellow while he namesake did the complete opposite. The other Wes Moore, who ended up in prison for the rest...
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...A brief summary of both Wes Moore’s is given. Wes Moore #1 story of his family is given, mainly focusing on his father’s death and their relationship before that. They were really close because his Mom was the reinforce and he was the one that always comforted Wes, so when he passes away it affects Wes a lot. The story of his mother life beforehand and her past abusive relationship, so his death affected her a lot too. For Wes Moore #2, the story of his mother and his young life is given as well. His mother was the first in their family to go to college, she worked part time while being a student John-Hopkins, but when her grant was taken away she was forced to drop out, and on top of doing all that she was a teen mom as well. She has a relationship...
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...Are we products of our own environment or the product of expectations? In The Other Wes Moore, we read about the life of the author Wes Moore and other Wes Moore. They lived not too far from the each other. Both Wes Moores never knew each other until much later in life despite only living blocks away from each other. They were both subjected to a bad neighborhood but ended up having a different outcome for their futures. The two Wes Moores were products of their environment, expectations, and personal responsibilities. The other Wes Moore moved around a lot, but every place he moved was just as bad as the last. His environment was always filled with drugs and influential people such as his brother Tony. His brother at a young age started working...
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...When the other wes moore friends talk him into going to job corp, I felt like he wanted to turn his life around when he agreed to go. He wanted to to do something productive with his life and wanted to better himself. Sad part about it it, he knew if he didn’t go he would end up dead or in jail. While he was at job corps he felt like he had a second chance at life and wanted to do better for his family. But later after returning home from job corps he realized that his problems wouldn’t go away and that they were real. Realizing that his problems wouldn’t go away, he soon turned back into his old self. He started back selling drugs and ended up being charged for killing a police officer. I felt like this happened because his past life will always haunt him, so he had to face it sooner or later. But I didn’t realize it was going to be so soon. They are in different places in this book to show the different situations they were in even though they had the same names. Wes Moore didn’t know he was going to end up in jail, and didn’t know how he was supposed to raise his child because he didn’t have a father figure to teach him that. “ Wes’s nonexistent relationship with his father probably contributed to his seeming indifference about becoming a father himself”. All he could rely on was his mother. The other wes moore turned his life around completely. Military school changed him for the best. He changed the way he act and the way he talks. I can relate to wes moore when he went to...
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...the novel of “The other Wes Moore” made choice that leaves the question of , is it the environment, education, choices, or expectations that predicts a childs future? In response to this one would say that all of the factors affected both of the Wes but in different ways due to their environment, education and expectations. This is so because the author Wes didn't have a stable environment, and I believe that this was a result of him setting a bad future for himself. For example it states “One day she flatly told me that it didn‘t matter to her if I showed up because the class ran smoother when I wasn‘t there. From that moment, I understood Mrs. Downs and I had an unspoken agreement, a don‘t ask, don‘t tell‘ pact that worked like a charm for both of us.” – pg. 77. This quote represents how the teacher (community leader) is bringing down Wes, instead of showing them the path. So in relations to this Wes is a product of his environment. On the other side (other) Wes is influenced by his environment also, due to the fact that he sold drugs. It is stated in the novel that “He saw this every day. The people who would line up around the corner for drugs. The people who would do anything to score. He knew these people because he was the one who got them what they needed. It was his job.” -pg 138 The fact that his community was into the drug business, this allowed Wes to make so much money because he was the seller for his community also along with Shea. Wes had a mal start a bright...
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...“The Other Wes Moore” is a representation as to how often our lives depend on choices, however, it is also a story as to how little control we may have in these choices. The story of each Wes begins on a strikingly similar path; they each grew up in violent neighborhoods, came from broken families, and held little value towards their education. Neither man had a choice in these families or the social prejudice that came with their communities, but each were given a handful of moments which led to their paths diverging from one another. As the lives of both Wes Moores are laid out before the reader, the author makes it clear that these choices as individuals and the choices of our society both stand as defining features of our lives. The author, Wes Moore, began his life on a bumpy road. Experiencing death at a young age and losing an influential figure in his life made growing up difficult. Moore pushed himself little academically, yet, because of his actions his mother enlisted him to attend military school. Once at military school Wes still refused to accept the challenges placed before him and chose to flee. What stopped him from following a path identical to the other Wes Moore was that of his support system. While Wes only had one parent, he had a family that loved him deeply. His mother sent him away for school as a way to shield him...
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...Author Wes gets into big trouble when he gets caught by the police tagging a wall. He was getting involved with the wrong crowd and being heavily influenced by them. His mother is very worried about him and even threatens to send him to military school, a threat which will prove to be true. Meanwhile, Other Wes digs himself deeper and deeper into the drug game. He runs into some roadblocks, but he is able to continue down this path by lying to his mother who is oblivious to what he is doing. Other Wes Wes started selling drugs to receive money; he told his mother he earned it from being a DJ. But Tony becomes suspicious, and thee two fight over whether Wes was lying or not. Tony couldn't believe Mary bought his story. He's been trying to make Wes a different person, nothing like himself. Then Tony gave up. Mary had began to wonder about what Tony had said. So she went into Wes's room and found a Nike box under his bed filled with drugs. When Wes came home, he found his shoe box on his bed, empty. He confronted his mother and she said she flushed his material down they toilet. He became furious with her and left to his girlfriend's house, which became the new quarters for his stach. Author Wes Wes and his friend, Shea, were caught by the police for graffiti. While Shea denied what he had done, Wes couldn't help but cry. However the police officers decided to give Wes and Shea a second chance. Wes vowed he...
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...The Other Wes Moore written by Wes Moore explores two unconditionally distant stories of two boys with the same names, similar backgrounds, and settings. Where as in the beginning, audiences may be driven to believe that these boys are one in the same later events show otherwise. In the introduction to his memoir, Wes Moore indicates, “The chilling truth is that [Wes’s] story could have been mine. The tragedy is that my story could have been his” (xi). Which brings readers to wonder what factors in their lives caused them to split their ways choosing different paths and reaching different ends. Social manipulations and connections, such as family, schools, workplaces and others are key ingredients that drive youths into their destined paths....
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...The Other Wes Moore Analytical Analysis The book “The Other Wes Moore” tells the story of two boys living in Baltimore who shares similar backgrounds within the same community, as well as having identical names as well. The Author Wes Moore came from a family that was well educated and graduated from 4 year colleges. The other Wes Moore’s mother had an associate’s degree but had to drop out of college due to the lack of government funding. The difference in education in each Wes Moore’s family showed them each how they should obtain success in a way. The Author Wes Moore displayed in the book that education was the key to all future success and without it you there wasn’t much to life. Educational funding from the government is great but The Author showed that there should always be a backup plan in case the funding runs out. In the book it wasn’t luck that determined the fates in each Wes’s life but a matter of education in each one’s life that made them who they are today. Education is a very important part of future success as seen in the life of the Author Wes Moore. His mother cared about her kid’s education and future so she made a sacrifice and placed her kids into private school because that’s where she attended school and it was known for a better performance level .The Author Wes Moore’s mother wanted her kids to have a great education like she had so they could be successful in life .She made many hard decisions such as sending The Author off to military school only...
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...In the novel, The Other Wes Moore, two characters who share the same name and similar situation, differ in family values that contribute to their individual development. The author, Wes Moore, begins part one by describing his visit with the other Wes Moore in prison and documenting his answers. “Your father wasn’t there because he couldn’t be, my father wasn’t there because he chose not to be. We’re going to mourn in different ways.” (pg.3) This reflects that the meaning behind absence elicits different views from one to another. While the other Wes Moore expresses outwards indifference towards his father’s lack of impact, the author confirms that he misses his father and “How it always amazed me how I could love so deeply, so intensely, someone...
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...Author Wes Moore wrote a book called The Other Wes Moore and the major subject of this book is two boys with the same name, a little bit of the same problems, but they completely have two different outcomes. Two kids named Wes Moore who were both fatherless and also lived in a Baltimore neighborhood. In addition, The Other Wes Moore tells a story of a generation of boys trying to find their way back into a hostile world. The purpose of this book is to show us how destinies can be determined by a stumble in your life can determine your future and your path. Author Wes Moore uses diction, imagery, and parallelism to determine that “nurture” determines one’s individual success. Author Wes Moore uses diction to determine one’s success. “On the other end of the relationship, the job of policemen, almost overnight, had gotten significantly tough. The tide of drugs was matched by a tide of guns. The high stakes crack trade brought a new level of competition and organization of the streets”. Author Wes is caught by the police with his friend Shea after they tag a wall and spray paint. The author uses diction to describe...
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...under 5 out of every 100 females aged 15 to 19 (Cohn). Wes Moore delivers two tales of kids who have roamed the streets of Baltimore and where they are now. In The Other Wes Moore, two boys by the name of Wes are faced with tough decisions at a very young age. The boys are challenged by drugs, teen pregnancy, violence, and economic issues throughout the story. In the book, The Other Wes Moore by Wes Moore, the author explores the idea of decisions to develop the theme that the decisions one makes each day can benefit or interfere with one's future plans. The other Wes becomes a part of the drug dealing business very early in life. Wes realizes that the drug business is an easy way to make a significant amount of money, and therefore feels as though it is the only option in order to become the person Wes desires to be. Wes continues with the drug business from this point on. Wes's respect for people such as Tony, Wes's older half-brother, and admiration of these persons' lifestyles is a big motivator to seek out wealth. One day,...
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