...Business Writing Portfolio Part I: Business Writing Steps • Do an audience analysis • Identify o The target audience Store managers Store employees Retail customers and the public o The communication channels Oral or written o What the message is set to do Persuade, inform, praise or shock (Townsend Hall, 2005) • Organize o The structure and format of the message o Keep communication simple and to the point. o Proofread the message o Deliver the message • Follow-up o Was the message clear to the audience o Does the audience have additional questions o Determine if extra communication is required Part II: Portfolio Business Letter: Store Managers Hook Retail 1234 Main Ave Charlotte, NC 28213 January 19, 2010 Mrs. Sophia Walker 532 Shortbend Road Charlotte, NC 27563 RE: Hook Retail Stores Modified Operations Dear Mrs. Walker, We would like to thank you for your dedication and hard work you have provided this company over the years. You may be aware of the increase in gas prices. Due to the rise, it is causing higher costs to the company as well as inflating gas bills for managers and employees commuting to work. We want to take this opportunity to inform you of the upcoming changes to our retail chains. These changes should ease your current position, save our employees’ money and time, and in the end guarantee the survival of our company. Effective February 1, 2010, a workday will consist of 10 hours. This...
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...ENC 1102 Paper One Assignment Narrative Essay A narrative essay is the story of a significant or memorable event in your life. A narrative should include specific details, descriptions, and perhaps even dialogue. A narrative is a story told from your perspective that includes not only a narration of the event, but also an evaluation of this event. For this essay, I want you to focus on food as the guiding theme behind your narrative. In order to write this essay, please consider some of the following questions: 1) What is your food story? 2) What role does food play in your gatherings with family and friends? 3) How much does your culture influence what/how you eat? 4) Are there recipes that are particularly significant to you? Why? Where did you get them? 5) What is your most significant memory involving food? 6) How does food affect other aspects of your life? The essay will be graded on the following criteria: 1. ASSIGNMENT FULFILLMENT (Basic Elements): Is the essay 2-4 typed, double-spaced pages? Does the title introduce the subject of the narrative? Is this work a clear-cut narrative with a proper timeline? Is it formatted properly (page numbers, MLA manuscript form)? 2. CONTENT (Hook, pacing, conclusion): Does the introduction have a good hook, one that captures the reader's interest? Is the essay's narrative pacing o.k.- neither too fast nor excessively slow? Does the conclusion wrap-up the essay effectively, providing...
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...business and career success your deserve by using LinkedIn for only 9 minutes a day Handout HOW TO WRITE YOUR PROFESSIONAL HEADLINE 1. Think about the value you bring to the people you work with? 2. Then consider what would people looking for people like you search for? 3. Finally consider the keywords you may need in your professional headline to increase your credibility with the right people 4. Finally put this all together into a phrase or set of keywords which is less than 120 characters. E.g. a. Technology/IP lawyer specialising in robust and clear commercial contracts for investor-backed companies b. Corporate partner specialising in international M&A, real estate and sports companies © Excedia 2015 This document cannot be copied or reproduced in any way without prior written permission from The Excedia Group Ltd. LinkedIn Masterclass: How to get the business and career success your deserve by using LinkedIn for only 9 minutes a day Handout WHAT TO WRITE IN YOUR LINKEDIN SUMMARY SECTION? 1st sentence: This ideally needs to be a hook, which makes people want to read on. It could start with a question, and intriguing statement. Or something that people are not expecting. E.g. “I'm always up for a challenge.” “I am a calm, challenging, contrary deep thinker, who is growing a great organisation where people can really thrive in today's connected world.” 1st paragraph: This needs to be the equivalent of your elevator pitch, so that if...
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...Business 121 Slide Ⅰ 1. What is a business model? * * A business model describes the rationale of how an organization creates, delivers, and captures value.(How a company intends to make money / the logic by which it sustains itself financially. Or how your idea actually becomes a business.) * * 2.Business model canvas? * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 3.What is a multi-sided platform business model? Give an example, list the customer groups and explain how they interact with each other. * * Multi-sided Platform is one of the business model patterns. Multi-sided Platform brings together two or more distinct but interdependent groups of customers. Such platforms are of value to one group of customers only if the other groups if customers are also present. The platform creates value by facilitating interactions between the different groups. A multi-sided platform grows in value to the extent that it attracts more users, a phenomenon known as the Network Effect. * Network effects and Positive feedback loops are economic terms that describe the snowballing benefits to front-runners in some markets. * * Example and analysis: * LinkedIn is the world’s largest professional network. As of 31st March 2012, LinkedIn had 161 million members in over 200 countries. LinkedIn helps the professionals...
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...Saturday March 7, 2015 Chapter 9 8. Discuss the role of headlines in a print advertisement. What is the difference between a direct headline and an indirect headline and when might each type be used? “A headline has 5-7 seconds to get the attention of a reader. Not only that, but statistics show that only 2 out of 10 readers will read past your headline. That means if you’re going to hook your reader, you need to do it right away” (8 Types of Headlines that Compel Your Readers to Action, 2009). In addition to grabbing the reader’s attention, the headline must offer some type of value to the reader in exchange for them taking the time to read your piece. “Direct headlines are straightforward and informative in terms of the message they are presenting and the target audience they are directed toward. A direct headline may be used when someone or somewhere is offering a specific benefit, making a promise, or announcing a reason the reader should be interested in the product or service” (George E. Belch, 2014). For example, an ad “LandlordMax – 30% off today only” (8 Types of Headlines that Compel Your Readers to Action, 2009). “An indirect headline is not straightforward about identifying the product or service or getting to the point. However, they are often more effective at attracting readers’ attention and interest because they provoke curiosity and lure readers into the body copy to learn an answer or get an explanation. Some ways to write indirect headlines is by...
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...are several different prominent discussions regarding the new ways that humans are recalling and seeking the data that they need. Dewey outlines the points that many authors have and she adds some humor and evidence (Dewey). She says that this is a modern way to manage this basic need and that, as a coping technique, the strategy presently used has been around since the beginning of time. The article was published online in The Washington Post on October 8, 2015. Dewey’s account provides awareness of the digitally inclined and how that is shaping the direction of memorizing and recollection. The author of this article attempts to do this with humor, sarcasm and evidence. Here she is successful, and it falls near the mark of expressing her analysis due to her wry sense of humor. She fails, however, to convey the same theme when she quotes statistics that seem more copied than readable in the flow of her work. The author uses Ethos, Logos and Pathos to convey these messages. Dewey begins by using Pathos as she uses the word “ominous” in her opening sentence. The word ominous in an opening sentence evokes fear and stands as an attention-getter in an emotional appeal. She is attempting to persuade the reader by using this form of Pathos, a word that should evoke strong emotion. She speaks about an article by Ashley Rodriguez on the website Quartz (Rodriguez) titled “Brain Drain; “Just Googling it” is bad for your brain.” She attempts to paint a picture warning of impending...
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...6/11/13 6:22 PM | Status | Completed | Attempt Score | 90 out of 100 points | Time Elapsed | 35 minutes out of 2 hours. | Instructions | This quiz consist of 20 multiple choice questions. The first 10 questions cover the material in Chapter 5. The second 10 questions cover the material in Chapter 6. Be sure you are in the correct Chapter when you take the quiz. | * Question 1 0 out of 5 points | | | Effective communication occurs when you can transmit _____ to your audience.Answer | | | | | Selected Answer: | believability | Correct Answer: | meaning | | | | | * Question 2 5 out of 5 points | | | In communication, the term_____ refers to any interference that causes the message received by the audience to be different from the sender’s intended message.Answer | | | | | Selected Answer: | noise | Correct Answer: | noise | | | | | * Question 3 5 out of 5 points | | | __________ mean(s) delivering a message in a vibrant way that is compelling to the audienceAnswer | | | | | Selected Answer: | Dynamic delivery | Correct Answer: | Dynamic delivery | | | | | * Question 4 5 out of 5 points | | | _____ refers to a negative preconception or prejudice directed toward a specific group.Answer | | | | | Selected Answer: | Bias | Correct Answer: | Bias | | | | | * Question 5 5 out of 5 points | | | According to studies reported in the Wall Street Journal’s...
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...this paper speaks to the relationship between theatre, liminality and communitas. I am interested in unpacking how collaborative processes of theatre-making provide spaces for women to remap their personal narratives. Remapping in this instance refers to processes of transforming lived experience through story. I address how, through engaging in ritual activities that are central to the stories performed, actors, audiences and the owners of the source stories are invited to physically participate in remapping and transforming lived experience. Linked to this is the choice of form(s) and how this affects or impacts on the performed stories as well as on the construction of performed rituals and ultimately on the processes of remapping personal narratives. I focus specifically on Mothertongue’s 2004 production, Uhambo: pieces of a dream. The production was an integration of theatre and visual art in the form of performances, portraits and installations that probed the concept of democracy through the eyes of women living in Cape Town. The production took audience members on a journey that wove together women’s personal responses to life in South Africa post-1994. PAPER Shards of...
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...to tell a story from your past, but you are going to make it better. Your goal will be to make your readers believe in the truth of the story through the careful interplay of real and the almost real. Your goal will be verisimilitude. Veri =truth Similitude = likeness All stories that are worth reading, seeing, or hearing have truth-likeness. And that is what you will be going for. But you will not be able to just tell it exactly like it happened; you must fictionalize it. “One of the dangers of writing about something that really happened is an urge to stay too close to the literal truth. Because you don’t quite trust your memory of it, you come up with thin narrative and little texture, or with details or events the reader may find unconvincing… a recital of just the facts rarely adds up to a satisfying fictional truth.” – What If, Bernays and Painter Assignment: Write a narrative story about an important event in your past, but you will have to pad it with “satisfying fictional truth.” You will add to it, crafting its verisimilitude. Here are prompts to help you find your story: 1. Narrate any incident from your life in which you were forced by a role to suppress your true feelings. Describe the effect this suppression had on you. 2. Tell a story about an “unexplainable” experience you had, maybe a spiritual or supernatural experience. 3. Narrate a family conflict (or a happy event) that illustrates how you feel about your mother and/or father...
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...Perfect - Show 8. No, I don’t like fishing. I think the fish that were catch and dropped would suffer from a sharp hook. I don’t want the fun from hurt others. 9. My hobbies are listening music, drawing and sometime I follow news from Facebook 10. - The music increases happiness and...
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...1 Overview of How to Write an Essay Writing essays is a major element of your education at the university level. Effective writing gives you the ability to express your ideas, theories, arguments, and projects clearly. The skills you acquire at the university level through writing essays will be aimed at practical business applications that you will be able to use in the workplace. The following information provides a succinct overview of the elements you need to know to begin writing an essay. It will help you on your writing journey. Types of Essays Narrative A narrative essay is a story told by a narrator. Generally, a narrative discusses the personal experience of the author (the first person point of view), but it can also be written about things that happen to others (third person point of view). A narrative typically involves characters, a setting, specific and vivid details, and a series of events that can include current incidents, flashbacks, or dialogue. Cause and Effect A cause and effect essay explores why events, actions, or conditions occur (cause) and examines the results of those events, actions, or conditions (effect). For example, a cause could be purchasing a new expensive home. The effect might be fewer family vacations, more time spent on upkeep, or less time with family because of extra work hours to pay for the home. Comparison and Contrast A comparison and contrast essay shows the relationship between two or more elements. The items can be compared...
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...1 Overview of How to Write an Essay Writing essays is a major element of your education at the university level. Effective writing gives you the ability to express your ideas, theories, arguments, and projects clearly. The skills you acquire at the university level through writing essays will be aimed at practical business applications that you will be able to use in the workplace. The following information provides a succinct overview of the elements you need to know to begin writing an essay. It will help you on your writing journey. Types of Essays Narrative A narrative essay is a story told by a narrator. Generally, a narrative discusses the personal experience of the author (the first person point of view), but it can also be written about things that happen to others (third person point of view). A narrative typically involves characters, a setting, specific and vivid details, and a series of events that can include current incidents, flashbacks, or dialogue. Cause and Effect A cause and effect essay explores why events, actions, or conditions occur (cause) and examines the results of those events, actions, or conditions (effect). For example, a cause could be purchasing a new expensive home. The effect might be fewer family vacations, more time spent on upkeep, or less time with family because of extra work hours to pay for the home. Comparison and Contrast A comparison and contrast essay shows the relationship between two or more elements. The items can be compared...
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...strategies for improving listening skills within the American culture? 4. What factors should you consider when you choose a communication channel for your messages? Should you always use the richest channel? Why or why not? 5. When you develop messages, what factors should you consider as you choose your words? Which considerations do you think are most important? Why? 6. How should the needs and expectations of your reader affect the structure of your writing? Why does it matter? 7. What steps can you take to create a smooth, conversational tone for your writing? 8. Why do so many people ignore or delete email messages? How can you boost the chances that your target audience will read your message? 9. What are your options for creating an effective opening “hook” for a verbal presentation? Why is humor not always the best approach? 10. How can you mitigate speech anxiety? Application Questions 1. Imagine that you’re working as a video game developer at the Chicago office of Electronic Arts (EA). Your boss recently offered you an excellent opportunity to transfer to the EA development studio in Tokyo, Japan. You are certain that this...
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...the killer is. The goal appears to be clear: catch a killer and the stakes feel high. The tone is dramatic. However, the real hook is the mysterious woman who leaves her raincoat with the protagonist, Jude Stevens. The idea that the woman disappears is a smart story choice. Good anticipation is created. The audience wants to know more. However, allegedly she’s been gone for 20 minutes, but when Stevens talks to the concession stand worker, who says the woman just left with two men. It seems unlikely that it would take her twenty minutes to get popcorn or that the two men would be standing around with her for twenty minutes before leaving. Also, Steven goes...
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...Scholarship Essay” on page 33 and use the provided worksheet to evaluate the award-winning essay. The more details you provide the better grade you will receive. Evaluations due on Oct. 19th, Sunday before midnight 1) Once the opening quote is established, what are the strategies the author uses to introduce her topic? She finds common ground with her potential audience members and thereby piques their interest. She attempts to establish her credibility by quoting a reputable article in a research publication. She explains the definition of her topic in layman’s terms so as to not seem removed, and distanced from the audience. She addresses the counterargument against fracking by her critics, but maintains her position with economic and interpersonal emotional appeals. 2) How is the introduction of this paper different or similar to the introduction you wrote for the two papers you have completed thus far? She intrigues the audience with her first sentence – the colloquialism, whether intentional or not, evokes a sense of state pride, for those who consider themselves to be Texans. She draws in the audience by expressing her sympathy for their situation – by “identify[ing]”...
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