...ENGL 216—Week 6 Course Project:Peer Review Comment FormInstructions: Write a comment in every section of the form below. You must provide meaningful commentary in order to earn credit for this assignment. Use as much space as needed. | | What do you see as the main focus/topic of this report? Who is the audience for this report? | Comment: Yes the main focus was lowering high turnovers rate in the company. The audience of this report was the Enron Corp personnel. | What are the best aspects of this report so far? | Comment:I felt the best aspects of this report were the figures through the report. I felt that it relayed the point in numbers. | What areas need improvement? How do you suggest the author make these improvements? | Comment: I felt that it was great, just a few run on sentences that can easily be re-worded. | Introduction Section: Does the Introduction section provide a purpose, description, and scope for the report? What do you see as the overall purpose? | Comment:Yes, the introduction does provide purpose, description, and scope in the report. I see the over all-purpose explaining to management why the rate of employee are leaving and to prevent it in the future. | Discussion Section: Is the discussion section organized in a logical manner? What do you see as the three (or more) main points discussed in this section? Is there enough detail provided to convince the reader? Does more information need to be added? | Comment:Yes the section...
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