... p. 5-10 College Learning Essay p. 11-17 Analyzing Arguments Essay p. 18-23 Cover Letter This midterm portfolio shows how I have progressed has a college reader and writer. Before this class I had trouble even understanding how to write a thesis and now I think I can definitely write a college level thesis. I have progressed to know how to incorporate my evidence into my concise and focused thesis statement. For example in the self assessment essay my thesis was, “Due to transferring to many schools over my first two years of college, I feel like I have had the opportunity to build up many habits of mind from Framework for Success in Post-Secondary Writing, especially in flexibility, openness and persistence but still can develop in metacognition and creativity in order to become a more successful college writer.” This showed that I could adapt a thesis to the assignment and it was focused and used my sources. At this point in the semester, a strength I have is the ability to connect source evidence with my thesis. I am able to develop my focused thesis around source-based evidence. For example in the college learning essay I was able to use my interview with my friend who was an elementary teacher to help develop my thesis about how teaching has changed due to technology. I also think another strength I have is organizing my paper in a proper order. In the three essays in this portfolio I organized the essays with a focused thesis...
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...Kailee Brock Ms. Alsaker English 101 29 April 2014 Technology & Social Media’s Effects on Literacy and Anti-Intellectualism In 2013, thirty-two million adults in the United States did not know how to read and write, which comes to about 14 percent of adults. Twenty-one percent of adults in the United States can only read at a fifth grade level. 774 million adults in the world cannot read or write. Many adults do not know how to read and write because they did not complete high school for any number of reasons. These reasons could include being forced to stay home and work or go out and get a job to support a family; the schools may not educate past the fifth or eighth grade level; bad home life; sickness; or a family crisis. Technology and social media have aided in decreasing the rates of literacy and increasing the amount of anti-intellectualism in the United States. Social media and technology have also helped some people to learn to read and write in some cases. According to Cynthia L. Selfe in Technology and literacy in the twenty-first century: the importance of paying attention, “the access and use of technology in school-based settings is now a fundamental skill of literacy, and if such skills do help prepare graduates for the jobs they will be asked to do, these same students can expect fewer opportunities to assume high-tech and high-paying jobs, not more.”(136) However, social media and technology have increased the amount of anti-intellectualism in the...
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...Right now, the piece of technology you are using to read this essay has probably helped you tremendously in more ways than one. You use it to look things up, write papers, research, maybe even look at social media. But it may not be the best thing for you in the long run. In an article called Is Google Making Us Stupid by Nicholas Carr, published in The Atlantic online magazine, talks about the ways google and other forms of technology have hurt the way people think. It tells of historical events, current worldwide companies, and the authors own views to show those negative aspects of technology. Technology has been sold to the world as a tool that is brilliant and amazing, and something that can helps so many people. While that may be true, it doesn’t tell the whole story on what technology can do to a person. Reliance on new technology, such as computers and the internet, have been, and are, adversely affecting the way people think, write, and read which ultimately influences how humans are living. As technology is advancing and changing, so is the way that people are reading. People are no longer going to libraries, but instead using the internet to “read”. Nicholas Carr says...
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...beginning of time, technology has been used to change the way society operates. People viewed technology as something to make everyday life easier, when in reality, individuals are adapting to the environment, including adaptations to the technology in use. Today, there is so much new technology introduced to the world at a rate that seems like every minute. Society has to continually adapt to this new technology, teaching the younger generations how to use it so they can pass those skills on to others. Technology has become so prevalent in society today that it has seemingly taking over people's lives. Due to society’s dependence on it, technology is causing people to lose critical social and workplace skills. With the introduction...
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...Argumentative Essay “Thanks to the ubiquity of text on the internet, not to mention the popularity of text-messaging on cell phones, we may well be reading more today than we did in the 1970s or 1980s, when television was our medium of choice. But it’s a different kind of reading, and behind it lies a different kind of thinking- perhaps even a new sense of self”(Carr, P.g 2). The article “Is Google Making Us Stupid? What the internet is doing to our brains”, is an interesting article written by critically acclaimed author Nicholas Carr. Nicholas Carr speaks upon how the internet is losing one's ability to concentrate on large physical texts or regular literature, and trading this ability for quick, to the point, internet articles and information. But this trade off is considering as without the ability to concentrate on literature, ones ability to critically analyze and have deep, thought provoking thoughts on what the person has read is suffered immensely. The main thesis that Nicholas Carr demonstrates throughout the article is “Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy in a Jet Ski.” ( Carr. P.g 1). Nicholas Carr’s thesis explains that before we were all introduced and influenced by the internet, we were able to understand the physical text in front of us. We were able to have deep, critical thoughts that almost felt like an adventure. But now, do to the Internets speed and wealth of information, we don’t seek that adventure anymore. It is...
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...How technology has made life more difficult? Technology everyone loves it everyone uses it but at what cost? In my opinion we have sacrificed a lot just to use technology. Technology has made life easier to an extent but at same time it has made some people too dependent on it. Life is only going to get more difficult with technology advancing the way it is. How technology makes life more difficult? With all of our advancement in technology things are getting more simplified to the point of difficulty. For example eBooks they are more difficult to use n read while doing your school work, but at the same time it’s cheaper and more available for students. Another good example of how technology has made things difficult is with the gps systems. The new advancements in gps makes some people think without it they couldn’t go anywhere without getting lost. How much is too much for technology? I got a lot of information from news articles. There are only few you will need to know are gps, and eBook. Gps is a graphical position system used to add a destination and find routes to it or just to know where you currently are. EBooks are the new way most students are having to get the books called an electronic book. There are no other key definitions needed for this paper. I have tried to find someone articles with good rebuttals. But most people seem to agree with my position on this paper that technology does in fact make life more difficult some times. We just keep finding ways to...
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...Google office in Sydney. I will be covering what andragogy actually means and the types of principles of learning that are suggested by this theory by Malcolm Knowles. Then I shall be writing suggestions on how the Google training manager could use the principles of the theory andragogy in skills training at Google, on the principles they have yet to introduce in their training. Finally I will list four references that I will recommend to the HR manager at Google that I found gave me a better understanding of andragogy. Introduction Learning is "a relatively permanent change in behaviour (or behaviour potential) resulting from one's experiences" (Delahaye, 2011: 31). When adults are learning, we call this andragogy. As we already should know, adults learn vastly different to how children learn (pedagogy). There are many key differences in the learning department when comparing children to adults, such as instead of asking what, adults would ask why. Andragogy is a theory that holds a set of assumptions about how adults learn and it holds a great importance on the value of the process of learning. At the Google office in Sydney, the environment and people there are great to work in, and it feels as though the way they have set up, helps the workers get ideas and allows them to do work at a steady pace and still get it done. They have their adult learning ways down pat. By working their in a graduate position...
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...going back in time and staying there permanently. Out of all the things that will be missed, there is no doubt that the one thing would be technology. The Shallows: What Internet is Doing to Our Brains is nonfiction book written by Nicholas Carr who asserts and cautions the effects that internet has on everyone to this day and even more so in the future. People nowadays can communicate with people all around the world using many different types of communications such as social networking sites, cell phones, emails, etc. Carr brings in many different scientific research as well as a couple of personal experiences to show the great change in technology and the internet. The author chose to write The Shallows from an epiphany he had realized, “It (his brain) was hungry. It was demanding to be fed by the net feed...I wanted to check email, click links, do some googling. I wanted to be connected” (Carr 16). The way that technology has changed and developed the internet has made Carr want to stress the fact that although technology is very useful, it can be very harmful to peoples’ brain in a way that it affects a person’s deeper level of thinking. Section II:The Author’s Background Nicholas Carr is a columnist, member of the Encyclopedia Britannica's editorial board of advisors, as well as an executive editor. Carr writes about technology, culture, and economics which have made his books New York Times Bestsellers in addition to being a 2011 Pulitzer Prize nominee. Aside from...
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...most important characteristics of our era may be the transformation, transmission and dominion of information. We live in an information society where the leading role has been given to new technologies, especially those devoted to information. Our society could not be imagined without new technologies and their role both in this society and in human life in general. With advances in technology, student study habits have dramatically changed. It's affected the way classes are taught, students learn theories and the way information is presented. Gone are the days of slaving over books in the library and scribbling down notes on paper. Modern technology has rapidly changed our world. It improves the length and quality of life. Although modern technology brings an enormous number of benefits for mankind, it causes many harmful effects as well. Modern technologies are very powerful because they rely on one of the most powerful genetic biases we do have — the preference for visually presented information. The human brain has a tremendous bias for visually presented information. Television, movies, videos, and most computer programs are very visually oriented and therefore attract and maintain the attention of young children. The problem with this is that many of the modern technologies are very passive. Because of this they do not provide children with the quality and quantity of crucial emotional, social, cognitive, or physical experiences they require when they are young...
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...Solomon February 27, 2015 GS1145 “Techniques for adapting leaning style to leaning and working with technology” When it comes to leaning and working all people have their own techniques to understand what they’re learning or working on, and how they learn or work. Some people are visual leaners meaning they like to see things visually so it help them understand and comprehend what they are learning or working on, and some people are hands on. Meaning that these people like to be in the field leaning as they go. They need to touch feel and be more “hand on” when while they learn. Other like to read and write, and which is the most common way to learn because that how we start off in school. There is a new technique being developed by using technology. The use of technology if being used as an effective way for learning styles. Now and day teachers and or instructors are proving that with the use of technology students have been increasing leaning conductivity. In the world today technology has reached new levels on advancement placing new measures on what society calls modernism. Society has now relied on technology to make our lives easier in a work and leaning force. Technology has taken over our lives today when it comes to job training. Most companies now use computers to train their employees. Retail companies use what they call “register training” to help simulate how it would be for their employees when working on the floor. It’s a simulation which gives employees a...
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...Rushworth Kidder’s claim to society is that people should not only read for information or delight, but to read for wisdom. Kidder’s notions are correct because he states that if people continue to read only for pleasure, the society they live in will start to regress. For example, “Are we headed, then, backwards into the pre-print attitudes of the Middle Ages, when the literate few ruled the illiterate many?” (Kidder). The modern society Kidder depicts is being compared to back when only the brilliant people controlled the incoherent. This quote shows that as time goes on, the society is moving backwards, rather than forwards because people fail to read correctly. Subsequently, Kidder identifies why this problem is so common among citizens....
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...Technology life The advancement of modern technology is making people's life more and more comfortable, and at the same time less human. To those who enjoy the benefits of technology, there is no better time to be alive than now, but to others life has been increasingly complex and stressful. In the discussions, one controversial issue has been new technological machines as computers and the Internet would be our servants forever or eventually could become our masters. On the one hand, people are so dependent on technology, and technology is very helpful for us it changes a lot with our life. On the other hand, some people believe that we should not always dependent on technology, we will little by little to forget how to write the word, and how to calculate the math or money. In the end, when people dependent on technology, the technology could control us. My own view is technology, it could be our friend or our assistant but it could not replace our behavior or control our life. With the progress and the advancement of technology to bring the convenience and utility is unmatched. Many science and technology to make people's lives more convenient, but also narrowed the distance between people. Technology brings innovations to make communication between people of the addition of many different species. In the article I Had a Nice Time with You Tonight. On the App, the author was said that: We did all of this despite living more than 3,000 miles apart, thanks to smartphone applications...
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...Digital Media and Technology Professor November 28, 2013 Education in Digitalization Our group decided to do our paper on the topic of Education in the Digital age which was our first project of the year. Education has changed so much over the years and it has done that very fast. From having textbooks and covering them to now classes having I pad’s in them and almost diminishing textbooks from school. As technology advances everyday, we can only imagine how our education will be in schools in even just 5 years. Research, studying, student testing, disabled education, hybrid classes and the changing roles of teachers in today's digital age are some of the main topics I will be talking about. Textbooks are not only very important for a students education but also puts a hole in their wallet. On average a student spends roughly $1,200 a year on textbooks whether you are renting them or buying them. That is a staggering number for a book that sometimes doesn't even help you too much in class. A single sheet of paper to make costs just 5 cents, but that adds up with how many pages are in a book overall. Some of the jobs that textbooks make were more than I expected. You can have jobs such as authors, illustrators, publishers, editors, lumbar people, paper mill workers and shippers. The authors are the people who write the text in the book, the illustrators can print in the pictures into the book, the editors look for any misspelling or misprint that the author...
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...Without a doubt, technology is changing very fast in today’s day and age. Because of this, it would be vital to use the latest machines and inventions in order to connect with other people out there and make life easier. In fact, a lot of these new gadgets are quickly becoming vital parts of people’s daily lives and a lot of people can hardly imagine life without them anymore. Yes, gadgets, such as mobile phones, laptops, PDAs and LCD TVs have already invaded most people’s houses – and they are probably slowly invading yours, as well. Well, as vital as these gadgets may be nowadays, it would also be vital to choose the perfect gadgets to suit your personal needs and your personal budget – remember that. This is where technology and gadget reviews come in. Naturally, you can’t just go out there and buy every gadget that you see in the market – not unless you’re extremely rich, anyway. Therefore, it would be highly recommended for you to find out all that you can about the advantages and disadvantages of certain gadgets before choosing one. A lot of people opt to read reviews for this before they make their final decisions about buying gadgets. Technology and gadget reviews happen to be very popular nowadays since they can provide users with more information on the latest gadgets in the market and help them decide whether they would be worth the money or not. Since these reviews can give you the full details of different products, you can get a better idea of the gadget in question...
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...Negative and Positive Influences of Technology Technology is seen in our everyday lives from our homes to our car and even our jobs. In today’s generation teenagers have experienced a whole lifetime with technology. In the article “Is Google Making Us Stupid” Nicholas carr mentions that today “americans from ages 12 to 24 spend about three hours on the internet.” In This essay I will speak of the negative and positive impacts and or consequences that come from all the time we spend using technology. As we continue to utilize technology more and more, we begin to further away from other things like books. The internet has completely destroyed our way of thinking. In “Is Google Making Us Stupid”, Carr talks about the movie HAL. HAL is a fully...
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