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Has the rise in University tuition fees deterred students from enrolling for University in the UK?

The aim of the essay is to consider if the rise in University Tuition fees has deterred students from enrolling in University. The paper will look at how the rise in cost has affected student’s from lower socio-economic back grounds decision to join University, or go straight into work. It will look at the advantages and disadvantages of young people joining University. The paper will argue whether or not the rise in fees has had an impact on the student’s decision to go into Higher Education or work. Finally a conclusion will be drawn.

Universities have faced a number of changes over the years with regards to who should fund Higher Education (HE). This debate is still very active and a number of papers have been written as to whether HE should be government funded or paid for by the student. The Government took recommendations from the Dearing report, first published in 1997 that HE should be funded via an alternative route and not by Grants from the government. Since the original report was published the fees have now reached £9000 per year which was introduced in the 12/13 academic year. Students however aren’t expected to pay the cost of their fees back until they are earning a minimum of £21,000 per annum.

It is said that Higher Education matters for the economic growth of the country. Technological advances mean that the economy requires high skilled individuals for competiveness, but the number of professions requiring degrees has fallen and that the UK graduate will struggle to find a job once they have graduated to meet their expectations. This has bought a new argument into the debate that Modern Apprenticeships are making a comeback and the student can earn as they learn. This will bring the right people with the right skills and knowledge that the business community requires.
(Spielhofer and Sims, 2004)
This supports Spielhofer and Sims( 2004) argument that there is more of a demand for the Modern Apprenticeship student as there is a lack of skills in the current economic climate.
“One of our historical problems (with which we have yet to grapple fully), has been the lack of a sufficiently attractive route into intermediate and higher level skills for those not inclined towards higher academic study. This is one of the main underlying factors behind the skills shortages we experience at the peaks of the economic cycle and the skills gaps which prevent more businesses from adopting a high skill, value-added path to success”

(Spielhofer and Sims 2004, p.112) Instead of waiting for a student to graduate with the skills and knowledge required for a particular business the company can employ the student and allow them to learn and earn at the same time. This will help strengthen the work-based learning for young people and address the skill and knowledge gap in the economy. The student may be more willing to take up the Modern Apprenticeship as it gives them a foot in the door of employment. They haven’t got the added pressure of trying to get a job when they have graduated within their specific business and paying off their Student loan when they are earning.
Other papers debate that the paying of fees could encourage students to demand a better quality of service and excellence from HE as they are funding their studies themselves, and that the justification for free HE is based on the principal of ‘equal access’. (Biffl and Isaac 2002) But as there is an ever decreasing decline in public funding the government are looking at ways of how to fill this funding gap. Students from a lower socio-economic background may consider the debt that they build up over time at University to much of a risk, and opt for the Modern Apprenticeship instead.

(Pennell and West, 2005)
Pennell and West 2005 support the theory that a student’s debt level is linked to family background.
“Students who were poor before they entered University were more likely to be in debt and left University with the largest debts. Those students from the wealthiest backgrounds were less likely to have debts and left with the lowest debts”
(Pennel and West, 2005, p.131)
There is also the debate that students who enter University are working more during term-time. This may have a consequence on the student as they may not achieve academically as to that of a student who didn’t work during their study period.
Greenaway and Hayes 2003, argue that an advantage of going to University is salary. A graduate student with a degree will overall earn a higher salary than that of a non-graduate student. They also debate that there are social and cultural benefits for graduates. The student tends to be more active towards National and International tolerance, and being more of a participant in voluntary organisations giving more back to the community. But the constant changes in the economic climate could change future figures and estimates for HE participation. (Greenaway and Hayes 2003).
Students have opposed these new policies from the government to charge for tuition, but there is open debate that the student will be making an investment for their future by choosing HE. Variable fees can be paid via a student loan and the return of maintenance grants is designed to ensure that students from lower income households receive the basic level of financial support (Miller 2010).
Conclusion
Although the debate regarding tuition fees is still widely debated, there is still evidence that needs to be collected to see if this new policy has had an effect on student participation and the skills gap. A better salary, and reform in the financial support for the students wishing to join University is an incentive, but companies are reporting a gap in the skills and knowledge required for employees and, argue that Modern Apprenticeship are better for the UK economy. To keep the economy in a competitive position in the global market future reforms need to be monitored and compared with those of other countries.

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Biffl, L, Isaac, J. (2002). European Journal of Education. Should Higher Education Students Pay Tuition Fees? [online] 37. (4). P.433-455. Available from: http://www.jstor.org/stable/1503810. Accessed 12/11/2013. Dearden L, Goodman A, Wyness G. (2012). Fiscal Studies. Higher Education Finance in the UK. [online] 33.p.73, 105. Available from http://staffs.summon.serialssolutions.com/search?s.cmd=addFacetValueFilters(ContentType,Journal+Article)&s.light=t&s.q=the+impact+of+tuition+fees+in+uk. [Accessed 19/12/2013]Dearden L, Fitzsimmons E, Wyness G. (2011).The Impact of Tuition Fees. The Impact of Tuition Fees and Support on University Participation in the UK. P121, 128 |
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