“Jonathan Gold rides the waves of dim sum at Longo Seafood Restaurant in Rosemead” is the essay I wish I wrote knowing what I know about writing right now. When I read a review on a restaurant, I want my mouth to be watering and my stomach growling. Gold does this when I read his reviews. He makes me feel like I am right there with him eating that food and observing it. I want to be able to make someone feel that way where I have the power of writing to make someone visit that restaurant and try their food. Another element I want to embed in my writing is to not be bias. I don’t want to persuade people to visit that restaurant, but instead write about it and have that person decide on their own. Never once did Gold tell anyone to visit